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1、,常考话题写作指导健康与急救写作导图从全国近五年健康与急救相关话题书面表达的命题来看，此类作文命题通常有以下两个角度的内容：1保持健康已经成为人们关注的热点话题之一，健康包括哪些方面、中学生面临的健康问题、保持健康的重要性。来源:gkstk.Com2如何保持健康成为命题点。结合河北考情，可以预测第二种考查角度几率更大。亮点句型速成常用句型：A nurse gave me an injection.It was a little painful.推荐句型：A nurse gave me an injection which was a little painful.常用句型：You mustnt
2、 smoke.Its bad for your health.推荐句型：You mustnt smoke because its bad for your health.一、开头句1It is very important to keep healthy.二、中间句2We cant go to sleep too late.We cant get up too late.3We should eat the food healthily.4We should do more exercise.来源:gkstk.Com5I didnt feel like eating anything.6I d
3、ecided to see the doctor.7In the doctors office，the doctor looks me over carefully.8He told me to take a rest and drink more water.9The doctor asked me to take the medicine three times a day.来源:学优高考网gkstk10A few days later，I felt better.From then on I believe that keeping healthy is the most importa
4、nt thing in the world.三、结尾句11A lot of vegetables help you to keep in good health.来源:学优高考网gkstk12Please drink enough water every day.13We should do more exercise to stay healthy.来源:gkstk.Com14Dont get stressed out.Its not healthy.15You should go to bed early and get up early.16Its easy to have a heal
5、thy lifestyle，and its important to eat a balanced diet.典例剖析(2017咸宁中考) “民以食为天”，饮食的安全和健康受到越来越多的关注和重视。请你以“Say No to Junk Food”为题，根据以下要点写一篇英语短文。写作要点：1垃圾食品尽管美味，但对健康无益，而且其过多的包装会产生更多的垃圾；2远离垃圾食品，还应选择正确的生活方式，如：三餐要有规律，少吃零食、快餐；多吃蔬菜、水果等健康食物，以提供身体必需营养；多参加户外活动写作要求：1词数：80词左右，开头与结尾已写出，不计入总词数；2内容必须包括上述所有要点，可适当进行发挥；来
6、源:学优高考网gkstk3参考词汇：过多包装over packaging; 有规律地regularly；营养nutritionSay No to Junk FoodNowadays, more and more attention has been paid to food safety and health. As far as I am concerned, we should say no to junk food._In a word, a healthy diet with less junk food can help make us stronger and stronger.【
7、审题指导】细读所给的文字提示，可以提取以下信息：1介绍日常情况，应该使用一般现在时态。2为了便于对方接受自己的观点，建议使用第一人称we。3为了使文章条理清晰，文章可采用四段式：第一段提出问题；第二段指出吃垃圾食品的坏处，第三段远离垃圾食品，应选择哪些正确的生活方式；最后一段总结全文。来源:学优高考网4可适当使用情态动词或者祈使句。【范文点评】Say No to Junk FoodNowadays,_more_and_more_attention_has_been_paid_to_food_safety_and_health._As_far_as_I_am_concerned,_we shou
8、ld say no to junk food.There_is_no_doubt_that_junk_food_is_delicious_and_attractive,_but surely does harm to our body. Meanwhile, the over packaging certainly leads to much more rubbish.To_get_away_from_the_junk_food,_we_should_focus_on_how_to_keep_a_healthy_lifestyle. There are many tips to follow.
9、 First,_eat_regularly.Have_three_meals_a_day_on_time. Try as few snacks of fast food as possible. Second,_take_more_fruit_and_vegetables_which_can_provide_the_nutrition_we_need. Whats_more,_do_more_outdoor_activities. As_long_as_you_are_busy_with_something_interesting,_you_will_more_probably_get_awa
10、y_from_junk_food.来源:学优高考网gkstkIn a word, a healthy diet with less junk food can help make us stronger and stronger.被动语态的使用，强调出食品健康是多么的受到重视，同时也体现了句式上的多变性。As far as I am concerned“就我所知”这个短语的使用，自然引出作者的观点，易被读者接受。来源:gkstk.ComThere is no doubt that高级句型的使用，为文章平添一抹亮丽的颜色。To get away from the junk food动词不定式作目的状语，使句式多变，重点突出。First，Second, Whats more的使用，使文章条理清晰，行文流畅。As long as句型的使用，使读者感觉到其实远离垃圾食品是如此容易的一件事情。来源:gkstk.Com
