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1、说明文概要写作,以Gene Technology 一文为例,1.判断文章体裁 2.深入了解文章内容和结构 3.概要写作（连词成句，连句成章）,文体判断,记叙文,说明文,议论文,5W1H,现象 + 原因+ 结果 问题 + 解决办法 对象+功能+ 利好,论点+论据（结论）,说明文分类： （1）描写事物的性质和功能。 即：对象+性质、功能+好处,The writer introduce the idea of a balloon robot , especially how it helps to guide people to their destination without being con
2、nected to the Internet , from which we know it may become popular in the future.,（2）针对某个问题提出解决方法或措施。即：问题+解决办法,The passage tells us how to be a good friend ,including listening more to friends, offering help when necessary, staying with them and making plans together.,（3）介绍某种现象及其原因和结果。即：现象+原因+结果,The
3、author talks about the popularity of advisements , because they can bring convenience to people but the negative effects shouldnt be ignored.,Paragraph 1,Among all the fast growing science and technology, the research of human genes, or biological engineering as people call it, is drawing more and m
4、ore attention now. Sometimes, it is a hot topic discussed by people.,总写：基因技术研究受到人们的广泛关注。,The greatest thing that gene technology can do is to cure serious diseases that doctors at present can almost do nothing with, such as cancer and heart disease. Every year, millions of people are murdered by the
5、se two killers. And to date, doctors have not found an effective way to cure them. But if gene technology is applied, not only these two diseases can be cured completely, bringing happiness and more living days to the patients, but also the great amount of money spend on curing their diseases can be
6、 saved, and therefore it benefits the economy as well. In addition, human life can be prolonged. (延长),Paragraph 2,分述：基因技术的好处,Gene technology can help people to give birth to more healthy and clever children. Some families, with the English imperial family being a good example, have hereditary (遗传的)
7、disease. This means their children will for sure have the family disease, which is a great trouble for these families. In the past, doctors could do nothing about hereditary diseases. But gene technology can solve this problem perfectly. The scientists just need to find the wrong gene and correct it
8、, and a healthy child will be born.,Paragraph 3,分述：基因技术的好处,Some people are worrying that the gene technology can be used to create human beings in large quantities. In the past few years, the scientists have succeeded in cloning a sheep; therefore these people predict that human babies would soon be
9、 cloned. But I believe cloned babies will not come out in large quantities, for most couples in the world can have babies in the very normal way. Of course, the government must take care to control gene technology.,Paragraph 4,分述：基因技术可能带来的隐患,第一段：基因技术研究受到人们的广泛关注 第二三段：基因技术的好处 第四段：基因技术可能带来的隐患,文章结构,现象+好
10、处+隐患,The article lists the_ of_.,概括总结整篇文章,The article talks about. The passage deals with.,benefits,gene technology,The research of human genes is The greatest thing that gene technology can do is to cure serious diseases that doctors at present can almost do nothing with Gene technology can help pe
11、ople to give birth to more healthy and clever children. the government must take care to control gene technology,复现率高的词,Para 1. 直接提取,Among all the fast growing science and technology， the research of human genes, or biological engineering as people call it, is drawing more and more attention now. So
12、metimes, it is a hot topic discussed by people.,原文,整合后,Gene technology is now a hot topic.,Para 2. 间接整合,The greatest thing that gene technology can do is to cure serious diseases that doctors at present can almost do nothing with, such as cancer and heart disease. Every year, millions of people are
13、murdered by these two killers. And to date, doctors have not found an effective way to cure them. But if gene technology is applied, not only these two diseases can be cured completely, bringing happiness and more living days to the patients, but also the great amount of money spend on curing their
14、diseases can be saved, and therefore it benefits the economy as well. In addition, human life can be prolonged. (延长),With gene technology, people are able to defeat incurable diseases such as cancer and heart disease, which not only prolongs life but also promotes economy. .,Para 2. 间接整合,Gene techno
15、logy can cure diseases that doctors can do nothing with, such as cancer and heart diseases.,incurable,It not only prolongs life but also promotes economy.,句子内部整合方法,词连接 语法结构连接 句型连接,语法结构连接,句型连接,gene technology,hereditary disease,healthy children,方法,对象,目的,人们可以用基因技术来避免遗传性疾病从而生出健康的孩子。,in order to,so that
16、,conquer,defeat,avoid,Gene technology helps to avoid hereditary disease so,that healthy children will be born.,With gene technology, people are able to defeat hereditary,disease in order to give birth to healthy children.,Para 3. 找关键词，扩充成句,Para 4. 找关键句，同义词替换，改写句子,Some people are worrying that the gene technology can be used to create human beings in large quantities.,It makes people anxious that gene technology may lead to the clon
