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1、Welcome to Changsha Neworiental School,GRE Writing,Romeo,周思成,Self-introduction,F S,Forever seventeen,A. Brief introduction to GRE writing,a. significance,b. difficulty,c. objective,d. requirement and testing approach,Argument,30ms,350ws,Issue,45ms,500ws,B. Further introduction,a.Argument-驳论文,使命:找出逻辑
2、错误,Evidences,Conclusion,推倒过程中出现一些逻辑谬误,Logical fallacy,No personal comment!,Introducing exercise:P88.85,Scoring criteria:P184,Organization,what is organization?,macro and micro,1. the number of paragraphs/sentences,2. the function of each p./s.,3.the transition between them,b. issue,难点:,plexity,2.cri
3、tical thinking,3. linguistic level,Scoring criteria: P159,1.有话可说,2.说得多,3. 说得好,破题的analytical method,how to provide evidences,how to embellish the language,C. Writing drills,1. short and broken,a.写作的四个层次,Many people are poor and hunger.,Many people are poor and hungry.,2. short, correct, but colorless
4、,3. short, correct, and colorful,Numerous,suffer from,people,A multitude of,and starvation,poverty,poverty and,starvation.,suffer from,a multitude of people,4. long, correct, and colorful,severely,extreme,A tragedy in the contemporary society is that,dreadful,a./n./v./ad./sentence,2.修饰无处不在,1.并列无处不在,
5、口红原则,n.前加a. v./a.前加ad.,Exercise:,The shortage of water resources is resulted from the population growth.,The increasingly serious shortage of water resources is derived from not only the dramatically soaring population growth but the demand as well as the pollution from the booming industry.,b.收集短语,
6、1.划记 2.收集成册 3.造2-3个,LV,Baleno,focus attention on,pay attention to,熟悉的陌生人而非玩心跳的新鲜,Argument,What is logical fallacy?,题目包括:,应该怎么做,2.conclusion,facts,1.evidences,so, therefore, thus, should,What is moreassumption,Explicit-good or bad,Implicit-Underlying factor,Fallacy: the problem within these assumptio
7、ns,Warm-up: p117.149,1.sample size,p.128 174,F1: survey and statistics,2. selection procedure,3. credibility and reliability,1. 问卷方式,2.发放和回收,是否匿名/利益相关,回收比例,3. 问卷设计,选项是否 deceptive,misleading, and general,too vague/ambiguous a term to,scant,Essential words for F1,a.sample size,(un)represent(ative),(in
8、)sufficient,b. selection procedure,at random,randomly selected,intentionally eliminated/excluded from,c. credibility and reliability,questionnaire,proportion of respondent,misleading,partial / of bias/ biased,p154.235,The author doesnt tell us the sample size, the sample size may be too small; it ca
9、n not represent the all the residents; the author doesnt mention the selection procedure, some citizens who are not interested in the politics might be excluded from the survey, the survey was just taken before the election; residents might be interested in the politics during this special period; h
10、owever, when the election is over, the citizens would be no longer interested in the politics,F1 organization,1.TS 指出大体上有错,2.分论点 ss/sp/cr,3 每个分论点后跟一个削弱文章的可能性,4. 总结,TS,1. To begin with, a threshold problem,/flaw,/fallacy,concerns/is concerning,involves/is involving the survey,2.The in the survey is i
11、n two aspects.,methodology,problematic,conclusion sentence,undermined,sabotaged,1.Therefore, lacking a more detailed information concerning, this argument is weakened by this survey.,2. Accordingly, unless the author concretely/further demonstrates that, it is groundless/ for him to conclude that,in
12、valid,3.After a careful analysis/scrutiny, the reliability/credibility needs to be called into question.,scrupulous/meticulous,Body:,2. On the one hand,;,on the other,1. Firstly,/Moreover.,/Further,/In addition,改写L2 :,The author doesnt tell us the sample size, the sample size may be too small; it ca
13、n not represent all the residents;,doesnt ,fails to,provides no concrete information concerning,tellinform,the sample size, the sample size.,which may be far from sufficient and can hardly represent the,If there are only * respondents selected in this survey, the conclusion is absolutely/statistical
14、ly meaningless/pointless.,Secondly, the author doesnt mention the selection procedure; some citizens who are not interested in the politics might be excluded from the survey.,; nor does the author mention whether the respondents are selected at random/randomly selected,Moreover, we can also cast ser
15、ious doubt on the selection procedure, which is not specified in the argument.,Maybe/Perhaps/It is possible that,citizens who,the politics are excluded from the survey.,manifest little interest in,are apathetic about,exhibit no interest in,It is likely that ,The author may overlook the possibility t
16、hat. ,Failing to mention the selection procedure, the author ignores the possibility that.,Exercise: paraphrase and upgrade the sentence below.,People may be interested in the politics because of the election, when the elections over, people may lose their interest.,Perhaps, it is the election that arouses peoples （ ）interest in.,a surge of temporary,temporary,spurs/,stimulates/,kindles/,catalyses,As the election is brought to a conc
