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1、【专项突破】2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十五）【专项突破】短文改错假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。Passage 1On a snowy winter night, a bus with 45 passenger had an accident
2、because the wet road. And all of them were trapping in the bus and what is worse, the bus ran out of gas and it was very cold in it. They could do nothing but to wait for help. A man who lived nearby saw that had happened. He and some villagers succeeded in open the door and helped all of them out o
3、f the bus. He took them to his home but offered food and water and even some warm clothes to the children. They spent two days in their home and finally help came. All of them were thankfully for their help.Passage 2A foreign student graduated with honors from a finely university in Germany. He expe
4、cted to find a good job and have a bright future. But in his disappointment, he wasnt even giving the chance for an interview! The third time he was refused, he phoned the company to ask how. We dont employ dishonest people in Germany is the answer. What was wrong? Shortly before he arrived in Germa
5、ny, he found easy to steal subway rides. But he often rode without a ticket and was caught up three times. Now he had to pay a high price for his own behavior. We should all keep in minds: honesty is the best policy.Passage 3One year ago,I had a special English lesson hold at the railway station. It
6、 was quite different from the regular English classes we were familiar to, for we had no textbooks, no blackboard or no fixed seats. Gathering at the entrance of the station, we told to collect as many English words and sentences as possible here. Curious and excited, we walked around the station an
7、d looked everywhere, search for any information in English. Whenever an English word comes into sight, the class would burst into the cheers as if we had discovered a new world. With the Chinese translation and vividly pictures, we could figure out its meaning with ease.Now, this unforgettable lesso
8、n still encourages me to be an active learner where I go.Passage 4Dear Mandy， Pm not doing well in my lessons at school，especial in maths. My dad says I must try hardbecause he wants me go to university. He thinks Im lazy，but its not true. I work really hard，often study late into the night！Ive tried
9、 to talk to my mother，but she always said I have to workas hard like my brother does. My brother doesnt study very hard，and he always gets excellentgrades. Its not fair！ The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says rm the best student shes had for year. WhenI told my dad，all he said was，“You mus
10、tnt waste your time in art. You must focus your mindon your lessons！”Pm feeling quite puzzling what to do nowWould you please help me out?Thanks a lot！ Yours sincerely， LisaPassage 5Theres an old man in our village calling Old Joe who said to be 110 years old. This cant be proved though he doesnt ha
11、ve a birth certificate. All his personal papers were destroy during the World War II. I dont know if he really is so old, and it doesnt matter. He certainly looks very old. Of course, he is often asked question by people who want to be told the secret of long life. Old Joe always answered them like
12、this, “If you are offered a cigarette, never accept it; if you are annoyed by someone, never lose his temper; and if you are asked foolishly questions, never answer them.”Passage 6Dear Jin Jing，Your problem is common one among middle school studentsMaybe the following advices can help youFirst in al
13、l, believe in yourselfYour greatest problem is that you lack self-confidenceThe first thing you must do it is to smile at your classmatesOne smile speaks loud about your wish to make friends than any wordsYour smile will show that you are friendly to himNext, trying talking with a student who is as
14、shy as you or who share the same interest as youYou can discuss your studies with a classmate and you can also talk about your hobbiesUnless anyone is in trouble, you should be ready to help him or herOnce you have confidence, you can make as many friends as possiblyYours,Lily2016高考英语-短文改错集训（十五）答案Pa
15、ssage 1On a snowy winter night , a bus with 45 passenger had an accident because the passengers ofwet road .And all of them were trapping in the bus and what is worse, the bus ran out trapped wasof gas and it was very cold in it. They could do nothing but to wait for help . A man who lived nearby saw that had happened . He and some villagers succeeded in open the
