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1、一、一、邮件写作指南：邮件写作指南：6 步教你写出漂亮的邮件步教你写出漂亮的邮件 If youre reading this, theres a good chance that you have an email account. You may well have several perhaps separate accounts for professional and personal contacts. 如果你正在阅读这篇文章，你肯定有一个或若干个甚至是不同帐号的私人或办公邮箱。 Its easy to assume that we know how to use email eff
2、ectively: its been around for long enough. But if you find yourself struggling to communicate effectively by email, these six tips should help: 邮件这样的沟通方式早已经渗入到了我们的生活工作中， 因此可以说大多数人都能有效地使 用邮件与他人交流。但如果你发现自己还没做得足够有效，我想以下这六点可以帮到你： 1. Start With an Appropriate Salutation 邮件开头称呼要恰当：邮件开头称呼要恰当： Some people j
3、ump straight into the text of an email without so much as a hi. Its polite to add a salutation, just as you would with a letter. That might look like: 有些人写邮件不喜欢加称呼，甚至连简单的你好都忽略，直接开始正文内容。孰不知就像 在传统的信件上一样，写上称呼是一种礼貌的象征。称呼可以这样写： #Dear Sir/Madam 亲爱的先生/女士 #Dear Mr. Johnson 亲爱的约翰逊先生 #Hi Sue 苏，你好 #Hello Fred
4、你好，福瑞德 Your salutation needs to be appropriate. If youre writing to a prospective employer, Dear Mr. Johnson is probably the best way to go. Hi Bob is going to look unprofessional. 称呼必须恰当。 若邮件对象是你未来的上司， 亲爱的约翰先生这样的称呼应该为最得体的。 像你好，鲍勃更适用于随意的场合。 But dont assume that formality is always the right answer.
5、If youre writing to a friend of a friend, using Dear plus their surname is going to seem oddly stilted. 那么，是不是正式的用语就万能呢？绝对不是。若你给你朋友的朋友写邮件，那用亲爱的 +姓就显得异常别扭。 If in doubt, Dear first name will usually work just fine. 当你判断不出哪种场合该用什么称呼合适，你可以使用亲爱的+名来应付所有情况。 2. Get Straight to the Point 直奔主题直奔主题 Your corres
6、pondent wont want to wade through paragraphs of waffle so get straight to the point. If youre writing to someone out of the blue, dont give them your life story before you make a request. 相信阅读你邮件的人不会愿意仔细浏览你那空洞无聊的长篇大论， 所以你需要直奔主题。 如 果你想写封邮件安慰某个心灵受伤的朋友， 开头先把你的建议亮出来， 然后再用你的亲身经 历来辅助说明。 Getting straight t
7、o the point might mean that the first line of your email (after the salutation) looks something like this: 直奔主题意味着邮件内容的第一行应该是这样： #Im working on an article about Acme Widgets for XYZ publication, and wondered if you had a few minutes to answer the following three questions. 我现在正在写一篇要交给某某出版社关于极致控件的文章，
8、不知道您有没有时间回答 3 个 问题呢？ #Could you supply me with a quote for the following project? 可否对下面的设计项目进行引证？ #Id like to discuss the revisions with you. Would Tuesday at 2pm be a good time? 我想和你谈谈修订的事。这周二下午两点您有空吗？ #Ive attached the documents you requested at our meeting yesterday. 昨天会议上您要求的文件已附上，请查收。 You may w
9、ell need to include more details, but if you put the important point up front, your email is more likely to get a timely response. If your question comes too far down, the recipient may not even realise that you need a reply. 当然，你需要再增加更多的细节内容。若将邮件重点放到内容的开头，你将收到更加及时的 回复信息。如果你的问题在邮件后头，收信人可能都不会意识到你在等他回
10、复。 3. Keep it Short 内容言简意赅内容言简意赅 Try to keep your email as short as possible. Make the paragraphs short, too long paragraphs can be difficult to read and take in. 尽可能将你的邮件内容写得简单明了。文章太长不易阅读和吸收。 Do make sure you give enough information for your correspondent to be able to make a decision, if thats req
11、uired. You might find that its best to offer this as an attachment youll have more flexibility over formatting, and your correspondent can print out the attachment easily. 若对方需要通过你的邮件来做决策， 那你一定要在邮件中将相关信息写完整。 为了能更灵活 地排版，你可以把这些信息作成附件形式，以方便对方将其打印出来。 4. Use Numbered Points 将内容编号将内容编号 If youve got severa
12、l questions or points to make, its very helpful to number them. This makes it easy for the other person to respond to each one, especially if some just require a yes/no response or a single word answer. For instance: 对于那些为了咨询或提供各种问题的邮件， 最好将问题一点一点的列举出来， 以便于他人对 每个问题作答，尤其当某些人更倾向于对问题只回答是和否的时候。例如： #Could
13、 you let me know: 能否告知： #1. How much it would cost for the website design 1. 网站设计费用 #2. How much for the website design plus a tri-fold brochure 2. 网页设计加一份三页宣传册的费用 #3. Whether you could complete #2 by the end of April 3. 您能否在四月底完成第二点所述工作？ Its also useful to list your questions or points as bullets i
14、n this way; if you write a single paragraph, some of your questions might get missed. 将你的问题或观点用图标的方式罗列出来是很实用的，倘若你用一段话将几个点全部涵盖， 那对方有可能会漏看其中的几点。 5. Re-read and Use Spell-Check 重新阅读一遍，校对拼写错误重新阅读一遍，校对拼写错误 A typo or spelling mistake can turn one word into an entirely different one. If youre using email i
15、n a professional capacity, that mistake could be embarrassing or even offensive. It might alter the whole meaning of your email: a missing not, for instance, could potentially cause problems. 排版或拼写错误有时能导致对一个单词的误解。 尤其当你用邮件来沟通专业性内容时， 这样 的错误就很尴尬，甚至有些失礼。它可能改变你整个邮件的意思。比如：少写了个不，就 可能会引起某些问题。 Spell-check sh
16、ould help you avoid any silly mistakes but use your eyes and brain too. There are plenty of words that spell-check wont pick up. If youre emailing from a device with predictive text and an auto-correct feature, make sure you always re-read what youve typed. 因此检查拼写将避免你犯这些低级错误， 但这里强调不仅仅用眼睛检查， 还得用大脑思 考。有些错误不一定能轻易检查出来。如果你的邮件系统有字句联想功能和自动纠错功能， 一定要把写出来的内容再通读检查一遍。 6. Make Your Signature Useful 充分利用邮件签名充分利用邮件签名 Do you have an email sign
