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1、Dear Jack, My name is Daniel. Im a year 8 student in Beijing sunshine middle school. I am tallest boy in class. I have round face, small nose, I wear a pair of glasses. I often go to library to lend books. I go to buddy club. My friends often listen my questions and offer help to me. Every mouth. I
2、go on a school trip. I think my schools life is interesting. What about yours? Im looking forward to your letter soon. Daniel,Dear Jack, My name is Daniel. Im a year 8 student in Beijing sunshine middle school. I am tallest boy in class. I have round face, small nose, I wear a pair of glasses. I oft
3、en go to library to lend books. I go to buddy club. My friends often listen my questions carefully and offer help to me. Every mouth. I go on a school trip. I think my schools life is interesting. What about yours? Im looking forward to your letter soon. Daniel,未分段（原文给的不算，段落不可过多） 格式错误（齐头式，应做到段之间空一行）
4、 要点遗漏（课程没写，此为大错） 冠词多处错误（the tallest; in the class; a round face; a small nose, go to the library, the buddy club） 5. 大小写错误（Year 8; Beijing Sunshine Middle School; Buddy Club） 6. 标点错（I have a round face and a small nose. Every month, ） 7. 词使用错误 （Grade 8; borrow magazines; listen to my problems; Every month, school life） 作文写完后要仔仔细细地检查啊！,
