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1、学生会的老师就像这个大家庭里的家长，他(她)们慈爱而又严厉，老师们教会我们做人，教会我们学习，教会我们工作。老师对我们的关心与疼爱我们始终看在眼里，记在心里求职信细节问题探讨一、求职信的第一段说明写信的目的，有些专家认为不宜用分词句子，比如用下面的句子做开头，因为这样的句子被人用得大多，显得陈腐，失去特点。replying to your advertisement.answering your advertisement.believing that there is an opportunity.thinking that there is a vacancy in your compan
2、y.having read your ad.再比较下面三组例句。每一组里面(1)句较差，经过修改后(2)句显得比较恰当。a:(1) replying to your recent advertisement in the boston evening globe, i wish to apply for the position of sales manager.(2) i am applying for the position of sales manager. i believe my qualifications will meet your exacting requirements
3、.b:(1) i believe after reading your advertisement in this mornings journal that you are offering just the opportunity i am looking for.(2) your advertisement in this mornings journal for an adjustment manager prompted me to apply for this position.c:(1) having read your advertisement in the new york
4、 times for an accountant, i thought you might be interested in my application.(2) in your advertisement for an accountant, you indicated that you require the services of a competent person, with thorough training in the field of cost accounting. please consider me an applicant for the position. here
5、 are my reasons for believing i am qualified for this work.二、在提到希望得到的待遇时，可用类似的句子：id prefer not to set a salary, but since you ask, i consider 6,500 a month to be satisfactory.its hard for me to say what my salary should be set at, but if pressed i would have to ask for a month as an initial salary.i
6、 dont feel that i should set my own salary, as i am happy enough to have the privilege of working for you. however, i would consider a month satisfactory compensation for my apprenticeship.三、提起或要求待遇时不要过分谦虚或表示歉意，下列句子不宜使用：as for salary, i do not know what to say. would $4,500 a month be too much?do yo
7、u think i would be asking too much if i said 5,000 dollars a month?you know what my services are worth better than i do. all i want is a living wage.四、关于求职信的结尾用语，下面也有三组例句。每一组里面(1)句较差，经过修改后(2)句显得比较恰当。a:(1)软弱、羞怯的：if you think i can fill the position after you have read my letter, i shall be glad to ta
8、lk with you.(2)改写后(较佳)：if my qualifications meet your standards, i would be happy to speak with you in person.b:(1)怀疑，不妥、不安全的：if you are interested, please let me know immediately, as im sure an interview will convince you im the man for the job.(2)改写后：i would like to request an interview. you can r
9、each me by telephone at beijing between the hours of 7-9and 5:30-9: any evening.c:(1)哀求式的句子，不够完整(漏掉面谈时间)：i would appreciate the opportunity for an interview. i can be reached by calling beijing .(2)改写后：may i have the opportunity to discuss this matter further with you? my telephone number is beijing . you can reach me between nine and five oclock during the day. 时间如白驹过隙，弹指间，我已在学生会工作了一年。这其中有酸有甜有苦也有辣，然而这就是生活，过于平淡倒显得无味，酸甜苦辣俱全方能体现出人生的多彩，方能值得回味，方能使人进步!
