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1、Structures and Writing,高级句型操练,句型操练根据括号中的提示将下列中文句子翻译成英文。 1. 你最好在下午前写完作业。(have sth. done结构),You had better have your homework done/ finished/completed before afternoon.,2. 由他带路，我们很容易就找到了目的地。(with +宾语+非谓语动词) With him leading our way, we found the destination easily. 3. 班主任建议班会推迟到下周举行。(suggest that sb.
2、(should) do句型) The head teacher suggested that the class meeting (should) be put off until next week.,4. 只有当我们把理论和实践联系起来，我们才能理解科学的精髓。(Only if+从句, 后用倒装句型),Only if we link theory to practice/combine theory with practice can we understand the essence/spirit of science.,5. 每当我们洗手的时候, 我们都要损失一些皮肤细胞。(every
3、 time引导时间状语从句),We lose a few skin cells every time we wash our hands.,单元话题写作,短语翻译,一位著名的医生 a well-known doctor 2. 毕业于北京大学 graduate from Peking University 3. 被中山大学录取 be admitted to Sun Yat-sen University 4. 霍乱暴发 cholera breaks out,5. 在地图上作记号 mark on a map 6. 携带病菌 carry the virus 7. 所有水供应的源头 the source
4、 of all the water supplies 8. 苹果教父 the godfather of Apple 9. 苹果公司的前行政总裁 the former CEO of Apple Company,10. 对有巨大贡献 make a great contribution to 11. 引领潮流 lead the trend of 12. 电子产品 electronic products 13. 被认为是年轻人的楷模 be considered as a great example of young men 14. 鼓励某人保持（奋斗的）激情 encourage sb. to foll
5、ow ones passion,句子翻译,1. 霍乱王被击败。 “King Cholera” was defeated. 2. 我哥哥是个广州著名的医生，他1990年5月5日出生于潮州。 My brother, a well-known doctor in Guangzhou, was born in Chaozhou on May 5th 1990.,3. 2010年，他毕业于北京大学。 He graduated from Peking University in 2010. 4. 一年后，进入了苹果公司。 He was admitted to Apple Company a year la
6、ter.,5. 那位医生在地图上标出了所有死者的住处。 The doctor marked on a map where all the dead people lived. 6. 他发现，许多喝了来自那条水管的脏水的人都死了。 He found that many people who had drunk the dirty water from the pump died.,7. 他建议，所有自来水供应的源头都得检查，并且必须找到新的处理水的方法。 He suggested that the source of all the water supplies be examined and
7、new methods of dealing with water be found. 8. 他是位发明家， 也是苹果前行政总裁，代表作(masterpiece)品有iPod、iPhone、iPad等。 He was an inventor and the former CEO of Apple Company, with iPod, iPhone and iPad as his masterpieces.,9. Jobs为人们的现代通讯、娱乐乃至生活方式的改变作出了重要贡献。 Jobs made a great contribution to the transformation of mo
8、dern means of communication, entertainment and lifestyle,10.正是他引领全球资讯科技和电子产品的潮流，让昂贵的电子产品变为现代人生活的一部分。 It was he who led the trend of global information technology and electronic products, enabling the expensive electronic products to become part of peoples life in modern times,课堂练习,假定你是高一学生李华。某中学生英语报
9、近期开辟专栏，介绍名人并分享其人生故事或成就。本期介绍的是著名的内科医生John Snow。请给某报的编辑写封邮件，说说你对John Snow的认识。主要内容包括： 1. 生于的时间地点(1813.3.15，英格兰，约克York)； 2. 毕业院校(1844.12, 伦敦大学)； 3. 主要经历1850年进入皇家内科医生学会(the Royal College of Physicians)；,3. 主要成就(1854年，他用地图标注法发现霍乱是通过水源传播的，因而切断受污染的水源供应，最后击败了霍乱)。 注意：1.词数100左右： 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯： 3.开头语与结束语已为你
10、写好。 Dear Editor, I am Li Hua, a student of Senior One, and I would like to talk about one of the great physicians. Best wishes, Li Hua,导练 第一步，认真审题，明确要求。 体裁：电子邮件 人称：第一人称结合第三人称 时态：以一般现在时结合一般过去时 要点：在题中用笔圈出即可。,第二步，列出要点，以免遗漏。 1.开头引入、介绍John Snow的出生时地 (be born on + 具体日期; be on in + 地点) 2.简介John Snow的求学和经历
11、(graduate from; be admitted to) 3.简述John Snow在1854年战胜“霍乱王”的故事。 (break out; find the cause ; mark on a map; people drunk the dirty water died; water supplies should be examined; “King Cholera” was defeated.),第三步，围绕中心，添加细节。 1. 伦敦著名的内科医生John Snow于1813年3月15日出生在英格兰，约克。 2. 1844年12月，John Snow毕业于伦敦大学。1850年，
12、他进入皇家内科医生学会。,3. 1854年，伦敦暴发了霍乱，许多人感染了疾病。为了战胜霍乱，John Snow想找出引发霍乱的原因，于是，他在地图上标出所有死亡的人的住处，后来发现这些人都是喝水管里来的水。他判定，是水出了问题，水体被污染，携带霍乱的病菌。他建议所有的水源都得检查，而且必须找到处理好受污染的水的方法。最后，“霍乱王”被John Snow击败了。,第四步，翻译表达，连贯得体。,Dear Editor, I am Li Hua, a student of Senior One, and I would like to talk about one of the great phys
13、icians. John Snow, a well-known doctor in London, was born in York, England on March 15th, 1813. He graduated from the University of London in December 1844, and was admitted to the Royal College of Physicians 6 years later.,In 1854 when cholera broke out, he wanted to find the cause in order to def
14、eat it. He marked on a map where all the dead people lived and he found that many people who had drunk the dirty water from the pump died. So he decided that the polluted water carried the virus.,He suggested that the source of all the water supplies be examined and new methods of dealing with water
15、 be found. Finally, “King Cholera” was defeated. Yours sincerely, Li Hua,第五步，仔细检查，工整书写。,课外作业,假定你是李华，你校英文俱乐部将举办一次主题为“我的偶像”的英语演讲比赛。你欲参加，请按以下提示，写一篇参赛演讲稿。要点如下： 1. 你的偶像(苹果教父乔布斯)。 2. 他的出生时间与地点(1955.2.24, 三藩市)； 3. 他逝世的时间(2011.10.5)。 4. 求学与经历：毕业于Homestead高中；,5. 任职与成就(苹果前行政总裁, 发明iPod, iPhone, iPad)； 6. 你对乔布斯
16、的评价。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯的； 3. 开头语已为你写好。 Good morning, my dear friends. My name is Li Hua. Today, I would like to talk about my idol.,Good morning, my dear friends. My name is Li Hua. Today, I would like to talk about my idol. Steve Jobs, the godfather of Apple, was born in San Francisco on February 24th, 1955 and passed away on October 5th, 2011He graduated from Homestead High School,He was an inventor and the former CEO of Apple Company, with iPod, iPhone and iP
