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1、Writing Lesson 写作训练,主讲：北大附中 方园盛2014年3月24日,2014年中考专题复习,书面表达是中考题的重要题型，分值较高，占总分的15%。根据英语新课程标准的要求，初中阶段英语书面表达主要是综合考查考生的以下两方面内容： 知识方面：在写作过程中熟练运用以下基础知识： （1）常用时态 （2）主要句型 （3）固定短语 （4）主要从句 （5）常用连词 2. 能力方面： （1）观察能力（2）思维能力（3）运用语言知识的能力 （4）用英语组词造句、连句成篇的能力（5）书写能力,一、中考英语书面表达,2011-2013年中考英语书面表达题分析,表达情感,记事,一般过去时,近几年中考
2、作文发展趋向及答题要求,1.作文词数增加,要求80100个词，即10-15句话，切忌画蛇添足； 2.近几年只局限于命题作文, 而且是通过记叙某一件事来表达真实情感，感悟人生的哲理； 3. 文章的表达不局限于一种时态； 4.句子结构的难度增加, 要求会使用一定比例的复合句和适当的过渡词, 使段落层次分明，从而提高文章的档次； 5.对卷面整洁和书写规范有一定的要求。,So easy!,一 档 ( 13 - 15 分)内容切题、层次清楚、语言流畅、 基本无语言错误； 二 档（8 - 12分）内容切题、层次比较清楚、语言比较流畅、语言表达错误较少； 三 档（4 - 7分）内容基本切题、层次不够分明、语
3、言表达较多错误； 四 档 ( 1 - 3 分)有一定内容、但语言表达错误较多。(注意：抄袭卷中阅读材料的，抄袭部分不分。),中考满分作文的评分标准,中考英语书面表达“五步曲”,看 （Look）,想 （Think）,列 （Rank）,连 （Link）,美 （Beautify）,审题抓点 确定体裁,把握时态 构思文路,提炼要点 草拟提纲,斟酌词句 连句成文 长短交替 亮点润色,规范誊写 留好印象 从句适量 高分有望,范文 “骨架” 常用句型等,第一句：I am now. I have changed a lot. 第二句：I used to be . But now, I am . 第三句：The
4、 most important thing is that I have 第四句：It was a . When I So I . 第五句：I didnt know until 第六句：They both said, although it. 第七句：After supper, I found, I. 第八句：When , with, she said: “.” 第九句：It was the first time that I. 第十句：I realized I was .,解密中考满分作文高分技巧,第三节书面表达(满分l5分) I Am Not a Child Any More提示：在阳光雨
5、露里，我已长高、长壮!但这还不是全部，长大还应包括什么?是关心、帮助同学?是体贴、理解父母?是感恩、回报亲朋师长?还是成长的点点滴滴，久久不能忘记。请以I Am Not a Child Any More”为题记叙你在学习生活中经历的一件或两件事，表明你已不再是一个小孩。,书面表达真题展示,I Am Not a Child Any MoreI am a 16-year-old girl now. I have changed a lot. I used to be weak and short. But now, I am stronger and as tall as my mother. T
6、he most important thing is that I have learned to understand and care about others.It was a Wednesday evening. When I went back home, no one was in. So I cooked the meal. I didnt know my mother was ill until my parents came back from the hospital. They both said the meal was very delicious, although
7、 it tasted salty. After supper, I found they were too tired, I got hot water for them. When my mother put her feet into the water, with tears in her eyes, she said: “Dear, you have grown up.”It was the first time that I cared about my parents. I realized I was not a child any more.,中考满分范文展示,3、一般将来时表
8、达想法和愿望,1、一般过去时记叙已发生的事情,技巧一：用准三种时态,2、一般现在时描写人或事物,I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult to learn well.,How time flies!,But I will never forget one thing that impressed me very much.,In my life, there are so many wonderful memories that make me unforgettable.,I grow
9、up day by day.,中考英语书面表达高分技巧,五个“三” (outline),技巧二：确定关键词句 用对三种句型,（表示人或事物的身份、特征、形状等）,句型3：主语+动词+宾语,句型2：主+系(am/ is /are)+表(n./ adj. /num.),句型1：主+谓,It is the most unforgettable thing. Teachers smile was like a spring wind.,She had a heart-to-heart with me. I always remember this thing .,I grow up.,技巧三：列出提纲
10、 用上三个从句,1、状语从句,2、定语从句,3、宾语从句,I will try my best to help others when they are in trouble.,But I will never forget one thing that impressed me very much.,I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult to learn well.,I think I am so lucky to become one of her students.,技巧四：用好
11、三类连词将“三段式” 作文连段成文,1、表转折的连词: but , although , however,2、表因果的连词: because,so ,3、表顺序的连词: at first , to begin with , then , later , at last,Beginning （23句话）“凤头”,Body （68句话）“猪肚”,Ending （23句话） “豹尾”,A. “三段式”,A. 三类连词,技巧五：凸显三处亮点 美化文章,1、There + be + 物 + 地 / + 事 + 时,2、tooto/ sothat,3、Its + adj.+ for Sb.+ to do
12、Sth./I find it +adj. to do sth.,In my life, there are so many wonderful memories that make me unforgettable.,I still remember, when I began to learn English, I found it too difficult to learn well.,Teachers smile was like a spring wind, so gentle that I was deeply moved.,提示：人生中会有很多令人难忘的人和事，给你留下了很多挥之
13、不去的回忆，让你咀嚼，让你回味。或许是同学、朋友间的互助和支持,父母的关心和照顾,老师的鼓励与帮助,又或是你我身边的一次次感动这一切都会令我们记忆犹新，难以忘怀。请以“An Unforgettable Thing”为话题，用英语写一篇不少于80词的短文，记叙一件值得你回忆的事，镌刻这美好的瞬间。,An Unforgettable Thing,备考演练,Step 1:,Look,看 （Look）,想 （Think）,列 （Rank）,连 （Link）,美 （Beautify）,审题抓点 确定体裁,把握时态 构思文路,提炼要点 草拟提纲,斟酌词句 连句成文 长短交替 亮点润色,规范誊写 留好印象
14、从句适量 高分有望,请用“五步曲、三段式”完成写作,记叙文,一般过去时态,words,sentences,paragraph,article,记叙一件值得你回忆的事,或许是同学、朋友间的互助和支持,父母的关心和照顾,老师的鼓励与帮助,又或是你我身边的一次次感动,Step 1:Look,Step 2:Think,remember,have a heart-to-heart talk,happiness,gentle,grow up,smile,share with,unforgettable,lucky,encourage,wonderful,make,impress,forget,memori
15、es,be eager to do (渴望做),discusswrite share,An Unforgettable thing,learn from,become interested in,try my best to,be full of,Step 3:,Rank,Whats the topic?,5人一组进行讨论，迅速完成以下任务： Step 1 (1) 各自在小卡纸上写出你认为最好的开头句和结句； (2) 组内或组间交互； (3) 各组代表在黑板上展示本组收集的精彩首、尾句。Step 2 (1) 组内讨论，选定一个事件，简要写出关键词或句； (2) 写出正文初稿，修改完善，工整誊写
16、在大卡纸上； (3) 各组发言人交流发言。,Wonderful sentences,Beginning 开头句,1. How time flies,I grow up day by day . 2. In our lives , there are so many wonderful memories that make us unforgettable.,1.For me, its the most unforgettable thing. 2.I always remember the thing in my heart.,Ending 结尾句,Body 中间句,An Unforgettable Thing,How time flies! I grow up day by day. In my life, there are so many wonderful memories that make me unforgettable. But I will never forget one thing that impressed me very much. I am eager to share my unforgettable thing with you.,
