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1、,Beautify your Composition,遇难心不慌，,遇易心更细。,discuss in group Yesterday I went to the friendship store. Isaw a foreigner buying clothes. He spoke English. The shop assistant couldnt understand him. I translated for them. Theysaid thanks to me. I think the shop assistant should know foreign language.,Yes
2、terday I went to the friendship store. I saw a foreigner buying clothes. He spoke English. The shop assistant couldnt understand him. I translated for them. They said thanks to me. I think the shop assistant should know foreign language.,I was doing some shopping when I happened to see that a foreig
3、ner was trying to buy some clothes.,He tried what he could to make himself understood.,But,Seeing this,I went up to them and,what the foreign guest said into Chinese.,or how they could in such a big store without knowing any foreign language.,Yesterday I went to the friendship store.I was doing some
4、 shopping when I happened to see that a foreigner who spoke English was trying to buy some clothes.He tried what he could to make himself understood. But the shop assistant couldnt catch him. Seeing this, I went up to them and translated what the foreign guest said into Chinese for them. They said t
5、hanks to me. I think the shop assistant should know foreign language or how they could in such a big store without knowing any foreign language.,书面表达在评阅时遵循三原则,语言第一位（语言高级）,内容第二位（要点齐全）,结构第三位（文章分段）,一、高级词汇和句式,二、修辞手法,三、有效的连词,四、名人名言或谚语,语言第一位（语言高级）,漂亮、地道,词汇使用的原则人靠衣装，文靠词装,1、词组优先原则,2、地道原则。,3、避免重复原则,4、后、高、长原则
6、后学到、较高级、较长词汇。,四项原则,1、词组优先原则,原文A new railway is being built in my hometown. 修正A new railway is under construction in my hometown.,2、地道原则,原文Through traveling, I learned a lot of knowledge. 修正Through traveling, I gainedobtained a lot of knowledge.,4、后高长原则后学到、较高级、较长词汇 hard very pay attention to happy mo
7、re and more,3、避免重复原则,原文I like reading while my brother likes watching television. 修正I like reading while my brother enjoys watching television.,替换词diligentlyrather extremely attach importance to; focus on delighted enjoyable the increasing number of,Adj. 聪明的、脑筋好的 clever smart wise bright intelligent
8、,电脑在我们生活中的作用是十分重要的。 1.Computers are very important in our life. 2.Computers play a very important role in our life. puters are of great importance in our life.,EX、运用高级词汇：,1.As a result, the plan failed. (一般),2. She went to Austria in order to study music. (一般),3. Suddenly I thought out a good idea.(
9、一般),The plan turned out to be a failure. (高级),She went to Austria with the purpose of studying music. (高级),A good idea occurred to me. / A good idea suddenly struck /hit me(高级),At the news of her death, he went pale with sorrow(高级),She has trouble in pronouncing the word. (高级),1. When he heard she h
10、ad died, he went pale with sorrow. (一般),2. She cant correctly pronounce the word. (一般),运用高级词汇：,思考：什么样的作文会成为一篇好作文,地道的高级词汇和恰当的词组 无遗漏信息点（审题） 篇章条理清晰：分段和过渡词 句式多样,思考：你能想到的好句式有哪些？,强调句,倒装句,with复合结构,advanced sentences,定语从句,名词性从句,非谓语动词,常用谚语,被动句,一、肯定不如双否好,二、陈述不如倒装妙,三、主动不如被动巧,四、从句不如分词傲,高级句式使用的原则：抓住高考阅卷老师的心理的秘诀,
11、四“不如”,誊写规范不要少,修辞的使用在书面表达中算作很大的亮点，在高中阶段很少有学生会注重修辞的应用。双重否定也是种修辞，而且对于考生来说，只要稍加注意，可以在文章中设计双重否定的句子。就变成了亮点句，起到强调作用。,一、肯定不如双否好,I couldnt have made so much progress in English without his help.,I have made great progress in English with his help.,The postman comes on time every day.,. The postman never fail
12、s to come on time,倒装是一种最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法。在高中阶段只需掌握倒装的四种形式，足以应对书面表达，如何应用倒装，有很多方法和技巧。,二、陈述不如倒装妙,1. We can solve the problem of pollution when we realize the importance of environmental protection 2. Time is so precious that we cant afford to waste it. 3. As he was diligent, he failed in passing the exa
13、m. 4. By no means should teenagers get into the habit of smoking.,每次可以借五本书最多借十天,We can borrow five books at most, and we can keep them for ten days.,At most five books can be borrowed at a time and they can be kept for ten days.,哪种表达法分数会更高？,三、主动不如被动巧,原文 The young man couldnt help crying when he hear
14、d the bad news.,修正 Hearing the bad news, the young man couldnt help crying.,原文 If everything is taken into consideration, we ought to have another chance.,修正 Everything taken into consideration, we ought to have another chance.,四、从句不如分词傲,1. 我们学校周围种了很多花和树，吸引了大量的学生来参观。（with 的复合结构）_, it attracts a larg
15、e number of people. 2. Yesterday, we went to the East Gate, and we bought a lot of clothes.（定语从句） Yesterday, we went to the East Gate, _ 3. His wonderful performance on the stage impressed me. （主语从句） _most was his wonderful performance on the stage.,Where we bought a lot of clothes.,What impressed m
16、e,EX、改写句子,With so many trees and flowers surrounding our school .,4. Because my friend was frightened of losing his job, he said nothing to the police. （使用分词结构） _, my friend said nothing to the police. 5.When he arrives, please give me an e-mail.（使用V-ing形式） On his arriving, please give me an e-mail. 6. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper.(使用强调句型) It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.,
