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1、重庆市万州区 2015 高考英语书面表达训练（5）及参考范文【2013【2013 广东省广州市调研测试广东省广州市调研测试】基础写作 (共 1 小题，满分 15 分)明天的英语课轮到你进行课前英语小演讲。请根据以下信息，以“健康早餐”为主题写一份演讲稿。写作内容写作内容1.现象：有些同学不吃早餐；有些同学吃早餐，但营养不均衡。2. 后果：严重影响身体健康；影响学习效率。3. 建议（1）早起，吃营养均衡的早餐。（2）营养均衡的早餐包括：含有碳水化合物的谷类，以提供每天所需的能量；鸡蛋、牛奶等提供蛋白质；蔬菜、水果等帮助消化。谷类：graun；碳水化合物：carbohydrates；蛋白质：pro
2、tein； 消化：digestion 写作要求写作要求1.只能使用 5 个句子表达全部内容。2.演讲的首句已给出，不计入句子数量的总数。评分标准评分标准句子结构准确，信息内容完整，篇章结构连贯。【参考范文参考范文】基础写作：基础写作：（说明：由于我们工作的疏漏，试题中本题所给的参考词汇有一处拼写错误，（说明：由于我们工作的疏漏，试题中本题所给的参考词汇有一处拼写错误，“谷类谷类”应是应是grain。考生如果写成了。考生如果写成了 graun，在本次评卷中不扣分。），在本次评卷中不扣分。）Im very much honored to give you a speech on healthy b
3、reakfast. Some students in our class often go to school without breakfast while others do have breakfast but not a well-balanced one. Consequently, their health and study efficiency are negatively affected. A healthy and well-balanced breakfast should consist of whole grains, eggs and milk, fruits a
4、nd vegetables. The grain which contains carbohydrates can provide the energy we need every day. Eggs and milk supply protein and fruits and vegetables are good for healthy digestion. Therefore, I strongly suggest that we should get up early and have a well-balanced breakfast before going to school.【
5、基础写作评分说明：基础写作评分说明：】 基础写作主要考查学生的语言结构的应用能力，能够应用正确、规范的语言表达特定的内容。本试题要求学生根据所提供的信息，使用五个句子表达写作内容中所提供的全部内容。命题思想是要求考生在表达这些内容时能够：关注写作对象（读者），正确使用英语演讲的写作手法。正确使用连接手段、分词、介词短语等来整合信息。正确使用复合句，如定语从句：The grain which contains carbohydrates can provide the energy we need every day. 宾语从句：I strongly suggest that 等。正确使用表示原
6、因、结果、目的等的表达方式等。在评分时，应注意以下几个方面：1 按照评分标准，实行分析法评分：按语言、内容和连贯三项标准分别给分；2 在语言方面，重点评判句子的语法结构是否正确、用词是否规范；学生是否使用了合适的句型结构。3 在内容方面，重点评判学生是否表达全部规定的内容；如果学生在表达完整的内容时，适当添加一些内容，不扣分；4 在连贯方面，重点评判五个句子是否构成一篇连贯的短文，逻辑是否合理。（具体内容见评分标准）基础写作基础写作【评分标准评分标准】评分说明 基础写作的评分建议采用分析法，即按照语言、内容和连贯三项指标分别给分，最后累计作为该题的总得分。项目赋分赋分评分标准7-8具有很好的语
7、言运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性高，词汇方面使用较好，只有少许错误。5-6具有较好的语言运用能力；语法和句子结构准确性较好，有一些语法结构或词汇方面的错误，但不影响理解。3-4语言运用能力一般；语法和句子结构基本准确，语法结构或词汇方面的错误不影响理解。1-2语言运用能力较差；语法和句子结构基本不够准确，语法结构或词汇方面的错误较多，而且影响了对句子意义的理解。0语言运用能力很差；语法、句子结构、词汇错误很多，句子意义无法理解。语言备注每多或少写一个句子，扣 1 分。5包括了所有信息内容。4包括了大部分信息内容。内 容3包括了基本信息内容。2包括了小部分信息内容。1包括了少许信息内容。0没有包
8、括所提供的信息内容。2内容连贯，而且结构紧凑。1.5内容连贯性比较好，而且结构比较紧凑。1内容连贯性较差，而且结构不够紧凑。连 贯0内容缺乏连贯性，而且结构松散。备注文不对题，给 0 分。（B） （20 分钟）请你根据对下面这幅漫画的理解用英语写一篇短文。你的短文应该包括以下内容：1. 这幅漫画描述了什么？2. 这幅漫画想要告诉我们什么？3. 发表你个人的看法。注意：1. 可参照图示作必要的发挥想象。2. 词数 150 左右。3. 作文中不得提及考生所在学校和本人姓名。参考词汇：温室 greenhouse_【参考范文】As is shown in the first drawing, it i
9、s windy and rainy outside, and yet the flower in the greenhouse is at its best.In the second drawing, however, things are quite different. When exposed to the outside, the flower appears weak and fails to stand against the bad weather.Based on the above drawings, we can see that one can hardly chall
10、enge possible difficulties if he stays in a comfortable surrounding too long a time. Similarly, with living standards improving, people tend to provide their children with material comfort and as a result, children are often spoiled. They may possibly succeed with the protection of the comfort. But
11、what if they leave the so-called comfort? Theyll probably be destroyed by the tough reality as what happens to the flower.It is obvious that the education of the young is vital to the nation. Dont let them grow up in the greenhouse all the time. If exposed to the outside surroundings, theyll be stro
12、nger and better prepared for their future.【广东省广东省 2012 届高三考前冲刺卷届高三考前冲刺卷(六六)】读写任务(共 1 小题，满分 25 分)阅读下面的短文，然后按要求写一篇 150 词左右的英语短文。Anger is a natural response to feeling attacked，injured or violated.Its part of being human; its energy seeking expression.Our anger can be our friend.It helps us survive，giv
13、ing us the strength to fight back or run away when attacked or faced with injustice.In itself its neither good nor bad，but it can be frightening.Angry feelings can lead to destructive and violent behavior，and so we tend to be frightened of anger.The way we are brought up，and our cultural background，
14、will very much influence how we feel about expressing anger.When something makes you angry，you feel excitement in your body and emotions.Your glands (腺) are pumping your blood full of the hormone (荷尔蒙 ) adrenalin (肾上腺素)，preparing for fight or flight.You are full of energy，alert，ready for action.As long as the buildup of tension is usually released in action or words，you should be able to cope with feeling frustrated occasionally! But if，as a role，you have to bottle up your feelings，the energy has to go somewhere.It may turn inwards and cause you all sorts of problems.Suppressed (压制)
