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1、备考 2010 写作专题 3 记叙文 重点诠释：重点诠释： 1记叙文是以叙述人物的经历或事物的发展变化的过程为主的一种文体。 2在记叙文体的高考书面表达中，命题形式主要是提纲式或图表式。 3通常要求考生以第一人称或第三人称来写作，第一人称主要是写自己的经历，第三人称 主要是写他人的经历或事迹。 4由于记叙文叙述的事情通常发生在过去，因而，其时态主要用一般过去时。 5记叙文通常是按照事情发展的先后顺序来表达内容的。 写作典例：写作典例： 请仔细看一下下面的图画，注意图画中的细节： 假设你是李华，在美国探亲。2000 年 2 月 8 日清晨，你的目击一起交通事故。警察局让你写 一份材料，报告当时所
2、见情况。根据下列图画写出报告。 注意：1、目击者应该准确报告事实； 2、词数 100 左右； 3、结尾已为你写好 剖析：本题图文结合，审题时要重视细节。 1 明确写作要求： 本题要求写一篇目击者的报告，用第一人称写； 2 认真审图，确认全部信息要点： 图中的环境条件； 人物位置（此点对完成本题十分重要） ； 人物活动； 人物表情； 空间结构； 图中的全部附加文字（英语和汉语） 。 3 确定内容要点： 时间：2000 年 2 月 8 日早晨 7 点 15 分； 地点：公园路公园门前； 我正沿公园路向东走； 一辆汽车从第 3 街向右拐，驶入公园路时撞倒了一位过街的老人； 汽车未停，沿公园路向西开走
3、； 汽车是黄色的，车牌号是 AC864，司机是一位女性。 One Possible version: It was 7 : 15 on the morning of February 8, 2000. I was walking along Park Road towards the east when an elderly man came out of the park on the other side of the street. Then I saw a yellow car drive up Third Street and make a right turn into Park
4、Road. The next moment the car hit the man while he was crossing the road. He fell with a cry. The car didnt stop but drove off at great speed heading west. I noticed the driver was a young woman and the plate number was AC864. About two minutes later I stopped a passing car and took the old man to t
5、he nearest hospital. 针对训练：针对训练： 1请仔细看一下下面的图画，注意图画中的细节：请仔细看一下下面的图画，注意图画中的细节： Pollution does harm to us all! A chemical factory lies near my home. The manager was criticized by the government because the factory gave out lots of harmful smoke every day, but he paid no attention. Then the factory was f
6、orced to stop production and the manager said angrily, “Is there any evidence to show that we did harm to peoples health? In fact, we havent.” Just then, a doctor came, with the result of the medical exam, saying the manager was suffering a lung cancer. It is very clear that the pollution has harmed
7、 not only the people around the factory but also the manager himself. The manager regretted having caused so much pollution. Now he has realized the importance of keeping the air clean. 2根据图画写一篇短文，叙述某天小明与其妈妈发生的故事。 One day, Xiao Ming saw a little girl fall over. He wanted to help the girl up, but his
8、 mother stopped him and said, “Dont do that, otherwise others will think it was you who knocked her down.” Another day, the mother was shocked to see Xiao Ming just let the fallen oil bottle be. And Xiao Ming said to his mother, “If I had straightened the bottle up, you would have thought that I did
9、 it.” I disagree with what the mother did in the story. I think parents should set a good example to their minds. They should not only care for their childrens health, but their minds. They should let their children know it is a pleasure to help others who are in trouble. We live in the society whic
10、h is a big family for all of us. Everyone should do something good to build up our society, right? 3高考是全社会关注的大事，学校和家庭表现尤为突出。家庭成员对考生从学习到生活给 予无微不至的“关怀“，结果却给考生带来负面影响。根据图画所描述的内容写一篇文章,并发 表自己的观点(夹叙夹议)。词数 120 左右。 As the College Entrance Examination is drawing near，_ As the College Entrance Examination is d
11、rawing near, the situation is getting worse and worse. ccuFrom the picture, we can see that Li Ming is “studying hard“. There are many books for him to read and many papers for him to do. How poor he is! At the same time, all his family are also busy working for him. Nowadays, many parents expect to
12、o much of their sons or daughters. They hope that their sons or daughters study hard in order to be admitted to an ideal college or a key university. It is for this reason that parents are strict with their children. However, they dont realize what they have become a heavy burden or a great pressure
13、. It is the hard work or the great pressure that changes their children that much. So I hope parents provide a proper environment for their children. Only in this way, will they try their best and succeed at last! 本文是夹叙夹议类的文章，主要反映家庭对考生的特别“关注“给他们带来负面影响。在 写作过程中，对主题要审准、审清，对发展过程和结果进行叙述。 4下列图画描述的是你的一段亲身经
14、历，请据此为一家中学生英文报的故事专栏写一篇短 文。 注意：1. 短文必须包括图画所表现的主要内容，可以适当增减细节，使其连贯、完整； 2. 叙述必须用第一人称； 3. 词数 100 左右。 生词：违章者offender n. 十字路口crossroads n. The other day my brother and I went to the cinema by bicycle. My brother was riding with me sitting on the seat behind. As we came to the crossroads a young man and a g
15、irl came up and stopped us. “Weve found you at long last,” they said. But we didnt know them. Pointing to a policeman not far away, the young man explained, “He stopped us about half an hour ago and made us catch the next offender. So come on, stand here. Hope you dont have to wait as long as we did
16、. Good luck.” 5下面四幅图描述了你班同学上周的一次研究性活动。请你根据图画内容用英 语写一篇短文,在某英语刊物上介绍这次活动情况 Last week, we did research into how laid-off workers get their new jobs. We had a discussion in three groups and then began our research separately. Group One surfed on the Internet and learned that most of the laid-off workers had already got their new jobs. In the vocational training centre, the students in Group Two were told that there were five training cours
