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1、Were tough.Were strong.We can endure anything.,高 三 英 语 写 作 指 导,江苏省靖江高级中学 宋海英,Tasks,To learn about some requirements for an excellent composition To know how to write a good open-ending part To know how to write a good essay,五档作文评分标准:,完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖所有内容要点。 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 语法结构和词汇方面有些错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高
2、级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 完全达到预期的写作目的。,Main points of a beautiful composition:,1. 要点齐全 2. 词句优美 3. 开放部分思想深刻，内容丰富 4. 过渡恰当 5. 书写认真,Steps of writing a composition:,1 审题体裁，人称，时态；篇章框架 2 写点6-10个得分点，千万不可遗漏；写出动词短语 3 连词成句，连句成文 4 用短文改错的精神修改作文,疏于审题，随意动笔，涂改严重，等于自杀,How to write good sentences,1.
3、使用较高级词汇,She doesnt like sports.,She cares nothing for sports.,When he heard she died, he went pale with sorrow.,At the news of her death, he went pale with sorrow.,She cant pronounce the word correctly.,She has difficulty in pronouncing the word.,2. 运用较复杂结构：被动语态，非谓语动词，从句，倒装句，强调句，虚拟语气等,People suggest
4、 that the conference be put off.,It is suggested that the conference be put off.,She walked out of the room and many students followed her.,Followed by many students, she walked out of the room,To his surprise, the little girl knew so many things.,What surprised him was that the little girl knew so
5、many things.,被动语态,非谓语动词,从句,The couple was so curious about wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest.,倒装,So curious was the couple about wild plants that they decided to travel to the forest.,Regular radio broadcasts began in 1920.,强调句,It was not until in 1920 that regular radio broadcas
6、ts began.,Many lives were saved because there were the efforts of firefighters.,虚拟语气,But for the efforts of firefighters, many lives would not have been saved.,How to use linking words,表示平行、对等或选择关系 and, as well as, together with, not onlybut also. 表示转折关系 but, however, in spite of, although, otherwis
7、e, while 表示对比关系 on the contrary, instead of, on one handon the other hand. 表示因果关系 so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, thanks to.,表示时间、顺序关系 first, second , then, next, finally, for one thing . for another, in the end, 表示递进、强调关系besides, whats more, in addition, worse still, abo
8、ve all 表示解释、说明关系 such as, for example, for instance, in other words, and so on 表示结论 in short, in brief, in a word, in general, on the whole, in conclusion,How to use linking words,What is an open-ending？,To make commentsTo give suggestionsTo continue a story,江苏省考试说明书面表达样题,也就是要干什么，用什么措施来解决以上问题,Open-e
9、nding：,Yet problems have appeared as well. Water and air have been polluted. Too much energy has been wasted. Traffic Jams often happen during the rush hours.Facing the problem, our city government has decided to take some measures according to the 11th Five-Year Plan. Some factories which cause ser
10、ious pollution will be closed. More trees and flowers will be planted and more roads will be built or widened.,尽量一一对应,How to write open-endings,1. 要紧扣主题，首尾呼应，使文章有一定的完整性。 2. 思想健康，积极向上。“建议”和“意见”不要混淆。 3. 逻辑清晰，用英语进行思维, 语言准确。 4. 字数要合理，一般是五句话，50个词左右，过多了显得罗嗦，太少了又无法表明意思。,严重偏题,不知所云,观点不明,有观点, 有思想,An example,假
11、如你是高中三年级的学生张明,在学校组织了一项“有烦恼向谁说”的调查活动。请用英语给校报编辑写一封信，反映相关情况。内容包括：调查结果（如图所示）、持相应想法的理由及你对调查结果的建议、看法。,61% turning to friends and schoolmates,The majority of the students surveyed select their friends or schoolmates as their ideal listeners when they have troubles and want to get away from them.,同龄人容易交流和理解
12、,22% going to teachers and parents,Another 22% choose their teachers and parents to talk to.,阅历丰富,有生活和教育经验,17% keeping to themselves,There are 17% who dont share their troubles at all. They either think that their troubles are none of others business or find it hard to communicate with others.,不愿与别人
13、说自己的事或难以与别人沟通,假如你是高中三年级的学生张明,在学校组织了一项“有烦恼向谁说”的调查活动。请用英语给校报编辑写一封信，反映相关情况。内容包括：调查结果（如图所示）、持相应想法的理由及你对调查结果的建议、看法。,A sample,From my point of view, students should share their troubles with their friends and schoolmates since they are of the same age and can understand each other well. Besides, they can
14、also benefit from turning to their teachers and parents who should care for teenagers and help them in their life and studies. However, if one shuts himself away from others, he will find he has more and more troubles.,Practice,人类已经进入一个崭新的世纪，不同的人有不同的幸福感。某期刊正在中学生中进行幸福感的调查，请你根据下表的提示，用英语写一篇标题为“Happines
15、s”的短文，表达自己的观点。,注意：1、不能照抄表中的内容； 2、注意行文流畅；3、必须阐明自己的观点或看法； 4、词数150左右。,How to express your ideas or make your comments:,I agree/disagree that I think/dont think its proper to In my opinion, From my point of view, So far as Im concerned, ,Happiness Happiness means different things to different people. Fo
16、r example, some students believe that if they have a lot of money or large possessions, they will be happy. They believe that they will be able to do anything they want to if they have much money. Some students think that they should be in good health, and do whatever they like. Many students wish t
17、o have much wealth from their parents. In this way, they dont have to work hard, and they can own everything.,A sample,I dont quite agree with the above points. I dont think money means happiness. We cant buy everything with money, such as health, love and knowledge. I value knowledge, which makes me happy, for I can make great contributions to our society with knowledge. Although different people value happiness differently, my “wealth” of happiness is in my study.,
