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1、英语专业八级写作专项训练（1）,BY： LJ,1.概况,1.英语专业八级写作要求考生能根据所给题目要求撰写各类体裁的文章,文章长度约400个单词,能够做到内容充实,语言通顺,用词愉当,表达得体.分值为20分,时间为45分钟.2.TEM8作文评分标准根据考生的思想与表达,语言运用能力和写作规范分别打分.分项可以打0.5分.,“思想与表达“满分为10分,按考生的表现赋分: 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9-10 极差 较差 一般 良好 优秀 “语言运用能力“满分为8分,按考生的表现赋分: 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8 极差 较差 一般 良好 优秀 “写作规范“满分为2分,按考生的表现赋分: 0
2、.5-1-1.5-2 较差 一般 良好 优秀P.S:空白卷,仅写了一些与任务无关的字句,仅仅照抄指导语得0分.,思想与表达ideas and arguments(10分),内容切题,内容充实,观点明确,论据支持论点,有独到见解 表达清晰流畅,有说服力 篇章组织结构:每段有主题句;句间衔接自然;段间过渡自然;第一部分明确提出观点;最后一部分自然得出结论;段落排列自然合理,语言运用能力language use(8分),准确性:语法正确;句子结构正确;固定搭配正确;习语正确;用词准确 丰富性:词汇丰富;句子形式多样 得体性:语气恰当;语言地道 流利度:完成规定词数,写作规范mechanics(2分)
3、,单词拼写正确 标点符号正确 大小写正确 书写美观 卷面整洁,1.审题及构思(10分钟) 必须在头脑中想出或写下(outline): A.中心论点(thesis statement) B.三个分论点(three arguments)2.动笔写作(30分钟) A.在开头中一定要表明自己的观点(中心论点) B.三个分论点分别作为三个中心段落的主题句,置于段首,并由过渡词引导. C.结尾重申论点3.检查及润色(5分钟) A.检查开头,结尾及主题句有无拼写及语法错误; B.不要大涂大改!一定要保持卷面美观,整洁.,2.写作步骤及时间分配,如何在10秒钟内虏获阅卷老师?,老师们的阅卷过程是郁闷枯燥的。使
4、自己的文章在大约 1分钟的阅读时间内，迅速地在他们的脑海中形成较多的兴奋点，是至关重要的。 1.卷面的设置。要想让阅卷老师对你的作文试卷有一种赏心悦目的感觉，作文的排版应该不多于2/3，不少于1/3，要留有余地. 2.不要涂鸦.不要将卷面写得密密麻麻。字体不要过大或过小更不要此处一个伤,别处一个疤! 能做到1.2,阅卷老师在两秒钟内已经对你有好印象了!,3.如何让阅卷老师爱上你的试卷,毫不吝啬地下高分?构思一个“前无古人,后无来者“而又“合情合理,天衣无缝“的中心句(thesis statement).P.S:当然,英雄的出世,要有时代的渲染和衬托.在提出中心思想前,要用美仑美奂,精彩纷呈的语
5、句为其出场营造氛围.,3.审题与构思,所谓审题，就是通过阅读写作题目及相关信息或要求，正确领会题目的含义，了解题目要求，为构思合乎具体写作要求的文章框架打下基础。 英语专业八级写作测试项目具有鲜明的特色：观点、情景、标题、写作要求具有内在的联系，构成一个整体。 因此，审题就意味着不是仅仅浏览一下标题，而是要兼顾其它部分。只有这样，才能真正明确写作目的，领会写作要求。提高审题的准确性有利于学生理解题目含义，了解写作要求，进而有针对性地构思作文内容、布局等。,审题步骤,1.读懂提示句(不要陷入出题陷阱)Some people claim that competition is more impor
6、tant than co-operation in the present-day society. How far do you agree with these people? You are to write a composition of about 300 words on the following topic:Competition or co-operation要求是:在多大程度上赞同这些人的看法,或者在多大程度上不赞同这些人的看法.因此,在提出自己论点时要加上表示程度的语句,同时最好要提及不赞同另一点的原因,Thesis statement: I would, in sup
7、port of the latter view, extremelyexceedinglywhollyentirely drum for the contention that competition bears more value than cooperation in the current situation.,立意要健康，否则，若引起阅卷老师反感，就杯具了On student lovers living togetherYou are left with one and the only choice: Personally, I dont think it is advisable
8、 for college student lovers to live together away from campus.,2. 有的作文给了文章标题，有的需考生自己提供。对于给出标题的，一定不能光看标题，而要将标题和提示句相结合以找到最好的切入点Some people simply see education as going to schools or colleges, or as a means to secure good jobs; most people view education as a lifelong process. In your opinion, how imp
9、ortant is education to modern man?（2000）标题：Education as a Lifelong Process,Thesis statement:Personally, I side with the belief that the new concept of education as a lifelong process makes greater sense to modern people.,不要急于动笔，深思熟虑后方能写出拿到对得住自己的分数的作文10分钟构思,THESIS STATEMENT,立意深远，否则阅卷老师会产生“审美疲劳” 从事件引申
10、到本质，从而探讨某一领域 比如：幼儿园校车事故 公务员打父亲 从一个范畴引申到另一范畴 比如：“非诚勿扰”等相亲节目， 学术做假 可引申到社会，经济，文化，道德等领域。 在全球化的今天，要学会用全球化的视野分析问题,Are the sentences suitable?,Last winter I visited an old man. The highest mountain in my hometown is Mount tai. Climbing mount tai can be very interesting. I do morning exercises everyday. Im
11、going to discuss the generation gap in our country. The “post-80s” generation has changed history. My parents helped me grow in three important ways. Nowadays cars are playing an important role in the modern life, but at the same time, they have also caused many problems, which force people to find
12、ways to solve the problems.,How to state your view?,Drum for I, personally, yield to the concept that in accord with my view aptly illustrate my point of view All strength fails to challenge my support for this contention Nothing can undermine the importance of,本次课后，请每个同学设计一句表达自己观点的中心句。 尽量不要雷同，现在准备好
13、，以后每次考试都可以用啦别告诉别人哦,请给出你的立意,Living on campus or off campus?,3.按照要求，对文章结构进行规划。In the first part of your writing you should present your thesis statement. and in the second part you should support the thesis statement with appropriate details. In the last part you should bring what you have written to
14、a natural conclusion or a summary. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriacy. Failure to follow the above instructions may result in a loss of marks. Write your response on ANSWER SHEET FOUR.,以中心思想为基准,衍生三个分论点(分论点一定要凝练general;切忌分论点间的重复(或者覆盖）!主题句措词必须相当养眼,拒绝单调,绝不平凡)你觉得下一个
15、提纲如何？to start with, competition is a pervasive necessity that grows out of the modern times.moreover, competition is the source of greater dynamic power than cooperation today.Finally, competition helps the stakeholders to raise the bar of expectation.,be conducive to,emerges from,What about this on
16、e?,Top on the list, competition activates potentiality. In the second place, competition fosters zeal and zest. Last but not least, competition cultivates ingenuity and creativity.,这套推理还可应用于。,Persistence Failures Discontent Dreams Reading AdventuresP.S: all the topics are about abstractinvisible obj
17、ects.,In-class practice,Which is more beneficial to people, success or failure?,因此。,平时要善于总结优美的逻辑性强的推理并进行背诵 今个这种对于抽象事物的推理方法背下来了吗？,案例分析,中心思想：Personally, I side with the belief that the new concept of education as a lifelong process makes greater sense to modern people.分论点：In the first place, the sort of formal education, or schooling, is no longer adequate for our profession.Equally important, the sort of fixed schooling cannot satisfy the growing needs of our daily life, either.,
