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1、写作指导-现象解释,Directions:for this part,you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic:The Day My Classmate Fell Ill (or Got Injured ). You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 1）简单叙述一下这位同学生病（或受伤）的情况 2）同学、老师和我是如何帮助他、她的 3）人与人之间的这种相互关爱给我的感受是,Topic
2、 It so happened that_ _ Just at the moment, _. _ It impressed me most because _ _.What happened next was _. At first, _Almost at the same time, _. _What,s more, _.,one day we were,having an English class in the language lab,my classmate Lucy next to,me fell unconscious suddenly.,her face was so red
3、that it seemed to,be burning,moving and unforgettable,my teacher phoned a doctor.,a girl student wetted,her handkerchief and put it on Lucy,s head,some students made a temporary bed,_.As a result, _. As I understand, _On the one hand, _.On the other hand, _. _Therefore, _.,for Lucy by putting some d
4、esks together.,Lucy soon came to herself.,love makes a beautiful world,Lucy is always ready to help others,we will try our best to help,her when she is in need,we should love each other and make this world a better place.,指出事件发生在语音室。 引出要叙述的内容：同学Lucy突然生病。 用red,burning形象描述Lucy当时的情况。 概况事件给我的印象之深，为后文的具体
5、描写作铺垫。 老师采取的措施。 一位女同学的行动。 另外一些同学具体帮助Lucy的行动。 大家对Lucy帮助的结果是使她Lucy苏醒，注意come to 的正确使用。 我对这件事情的看法:人与人之间的相互关爱使世界更美好。 站在Lucy 的角度上谈自己的感受一。 换一个角度谈自己的感受。 结论：重申自己的感受。,2、现象解释型题二 Directions:For this part,you are allowed thirty minutes to write an eye-witness account of a traffic accident. You should write at le
6、ast 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸，就此写一份见证书。见证书须包括以下几点： 1)车祸发生的时间及地点 2)你所见到的车祸情况 3)你对车祸原因的分析 An Eye-Witness Account of a Traffic Accident,It so happened that _._. Just at the moment, _ It impressed me most because _.What happened was _. At first, _.Almost
7、 at the same time, _.What,s more, _. _.As a result, _. _ As I understand, _ . On one hand, _. On the other hand, _. Therefore, _,on the morning of last Suday I was,on the way to school.,a car,was driving out of a street corner,the driver drove so fast.,a tragedy,I saw a woman riding a bike,with her
8、eyes looking up at the sky,she was knocked off her bike by the speedy car.,the car got out of control and ran into a tree,on the roadside,both the woman and,the driver were injured seriously.,both the driver and the passer-by are responsible for the accident.,the driver was driving too fast,the woma
9、n was so careless,had both of them been careful enough, the tragedy could have been avoided,点评指出车祸发生的时间与地点。 描写车祸发生前的情况。 继续说明车祸的发生前的情况，为车祸的发生做铺垫。 总体概括车祸的严重性：tragedy 描写车祸当时的场景一：一位妇女不专心骑车。 描写车祸当时的场景二：被车撞倒。 车祸发生当时的场景三：车失去控制，撞在树上。 车祸的结果：司机与骑自行者均受伤。我对车祸发生起因的看法：双方都有责任。 车祸发生的原因一：司机车速太快。 车祸发生的原因二：骑车者不小心。 结论：
10、假设二人都小心点，车祸将不会发生。,4、现象解释型题四 Directions:For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the fopic:Harmfulness of Facke Commldities. You should write at least 100 words and you should base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below: 1)目前社会上有不少假冒伪劣商品（fake commoditi
11、es）。为什么会有这种现象？ 2)举例说明假冒伪劣商品对消费个人、社会等的危害。,IAs is known to all, . _ seem to get accustomed to . In fact, _. _The reasons of _lie in several aspects. Firstly, _. _ Secondly, _. Thirdly, _ _. Finally, _. _As a matter of fact, _. On the one hand, _. _,there are a lot of fake commodities,in the market,People,get accustomed to fake commodities on market,more kinds and larger quantities of,fake commodities are appearing around us.,
