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1、English writing,Practice writing peopleEr Lang Middle School Zeng Yongmei,Tell you about myself,Im Zeng Yong mei, an English teacher from Er Lang Middle School. Im 32 years old. I am of medium height and a little heavy. My hair is short, black and straight. Im quiet and calm. In my spare time , I lo
2、ve reading. I like eating vegetables because I care for my health. I want to travel around the world if possible.,Lets review,words and phrases about: appearance (外貌): characters(性格): short 短的，矮的 outgoing 友好的，外向的 tall 高的 quiet安静的，文静的 thin 瘦的 calm镇静的，沉着的 heavy/fat 胖的 wild鲁莽的，轻率的 medium build 中等体格 ser
3、ious严肃的，庄重的 medium height 中等身高 athletic健壮的funny有趣的,好玩的smart机灵的， 聪明的,Lets review,Some adjectives about :Hair(头发): color(颜色):Long 长的 white 白色的 black黑色的 Short 短的，矮的 red 红色的 yellow黄色的 Curly 卷曲的 brown棕色的 blonde金黄色的 Straight 直的 blue蓝色的 green绿色的,Lets review,Some words and phrases about: professions/jobs(职业
4、) : teacher 教师 doctor 医生 nurse 护士 reporter记者 worker 工人 student学 farmer农民 athlete 运动员 singer歌手 writer 作家 bank clerk 银行职员 actor/actress 男/女演员 waiter/waitress男/女服务 policeman/policewoman 男/女警察,Write a passage about Yao Ming,基本资料 Name （姓名):姚明(Yao Ming) Profession/job(职业): a basketball player Age（年龄）：29 A
5、ppearance(外貌): tall, a little heavy, short black straight hair Nationality（国籍）：China Feather/Character(性格):outgoing Favorite food（喜欢的食物）tomatoes Hobbies （业余爱好）： playing computer games, surfing the Internet, music, and reading Dream : a doctor,Step1,decide pronoun and tense 确定人称和时态,write oneself, use
6、 I /we.描写自己，用第一人称（I/we）。 write others , use he/she/they.描写他人，用第三人（he/she/they）。write persons in the past or dead (过去或已故),use the simple past tense(一般过去式).write persons now or alive（现在或活着),use the present tense（一般现在时）.,人称,时态,Step 2,decide basic points 第二步：确定基本要点,When we write a person, the passage us
7、ually include the following points(要点): Name(姓名): Profession（职业）: Nationality（国籍）: Feather/character（性格）:outgoing. Appearance（外貌）: Hobbies/interests（业余爱好）: Dream （梦想）:,Step 3,expland the words into sentences 第三步：扩展成句，把要点变成完整的句子。,（注意：有些要点可有多种表达法。）,age：29,Yao Ming is 29 (years old). Yao Ming is in his
8、 twenties(二十多岁).,profession ： a basketball player,Yao Ming is a professional basketball player.,Yao Ming comes/is from China. Yao Ming is a Chinese (man).,Nationality: China,He is tall. He is a little heavy. He is a little fat. He has short black straight hair. His hair is short, black and straight.
9、,Appearance: tall, a little heavy, short, black ,straight hair,Yao Ming is outgoing. Yao Ming likes to talk with people.,Feather: outgoing,注意：描写某人的性格时，最好有列子支持。,Yao Ming loves/likes/enjoys playing computer games, surfing the Internet, music and reading. Yao Mings hobbies /interests are playing comput
10、ers, surfing the Internet ,music and reading.,hobbies/interests: playing computer games ,surf the Internet, music ,reading,dream job: a doctor,Yao Ming wants to be/become a doctor .Yao Mings dream is to be/become a doctor.,Step4,connect the sentences into a passage 第四步：连句成文。,小技巧： 1，当多次提到同一个人或物时，后面的均
11、可用代词代替。 2，可使用适当的连词来连接句子，使文章读起来不枯燥。,词与词搭配，句与句相连， 首尾呼应。,Lets compare Which one is better? Why?,A: Yao Ming is a professional basketball player. Yao Ming is 29.Yao Ming comes from China. Yao Ming is tall. Yao Ming is a little heavy. Yao Ming has short black straight hair. Yao Ming is outgoing. Yao Ming
12、 enjoys playing computer games, surfing the Internet, music and reading. Yao Mings dream is to become a doctor . B: Yao Ming is a Chinese professional basketball player. He is 29. He is tall and a little heavy. He has short black straight hair. He is outgoing and he likes talking with other people.
13、He enjoys playing computer games , surfing the Internet , music and reading. His dream is to be a doctor .,Step5,Checking and correcting errors 第五步：查错改错。,主谓一致吗？时态正确吗？语态正确吗 有“半截话”吗？,要尽量剔除错误,第六步：誊写,卷面整洁不一定要加分。卷面潦草一定要扣分。,第六步：誊写,Lets practice writing a passage according to the chart.,Find one similarity
14、(相同) and one difference（不同）,A: Im Zeng Yongmei, an English teacher from Er Lang Middle School. Im 32 years old. Im of medium height and a little heavy. My hair is short, black and straight. Im quiet and calm. In my spare time , I love reading. I like eating vegetables and care for my health. I want
15、to travel around the world if possible. B: Yao Ming is a Chinese professional basketball player. He is 29. He is tall and a little heavy. He has short black straight hair. He is outgoing and likes talking with other people. He enjoys playing computer games , surfing the Internet , music and reading. His dream is to be a doctor.,第一人称,第三人称,写人,Homework,请给你的笔友写一封信，介绍你自己。开头已为你写好了。 Dear_, Im happy to write to you. I am_,
