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1、大学英语四级翻译技巧讲解四级段落翻译的评分标准:本题满分为15分，成绩分为六个档次: 13-15分、10-12分、7-9分、4-6分、1-3分和0分。13-15分 译文准确表达了原文的意思。用词贴切，行文流畅，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。10-12分 译文基本上表达了原文的意思。文字通顺、连贯，无重大语言错误。7-9分 译文勉强表达了原文的意思。用词欠准确，语言错误相当多，其中有些是严重语言错误。4-6分 译文仅表达了一小部分原文的意思.7导词不准确，有相当多的严重语言错误。1-3分 译文支离破碎。除个别词语或句子，绝大部分文字没有表达原文意思。0分“未作答，或只有几个孤立的词，或译文与原
2、文毫不相关许多人喜欢中餐。在中国，襄饪不仅被视为一种技能，而且也被视为一种艺术。精心准备的中餐既可口又好看。启饪技艺和配料在中国各地的差别很大。但好的忘饪都有一个共同点，总是要考虑到颜色、味道、口感和营养(nutrition) 。由于食物对健康至关重要，好的厨师总是努力在谷物、肉类和蔬菜之间取得平衡，所以中餐既美味又健康。Many people enjoy Chinese food. Cooking is lookedupon as an art as well as a skill in China. A carefullyprepared Chinese disn is not only
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6、re，tne Chinese foodis both delicious and healthy. (红色字体为有错误部分 ) 评语:水 本译文用词贴切，行文流畅，注意到了负式的变化以及衔接词的使用。属于13-15分分数档的高分翻余*# 1分参考译文* Many people like Chinese food. In china， cookingis regarded not only as a kind of skill but also as akind of art. Chinese food, which is prepared carefully,is both delicious
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8、grain, imeat, and Vegetables. Asa result, Chinese food is delicious and healthy.* 评语:， 本主六夫半了结大部分原立的误电;，交宇通是连贯，用到了复杂句式，显示出了较强的语言功底。属于10-12分分数档的翻译。8分参考译文Many people love Chinese food. In China，cooking is not only regarded a kind of skill, but alsoart. Well-prepared Chinese dishes taste goodbesides go
9、od look. There is a big different incooking skills and ingredients between differentparts of China. But one thing which is common ingood dishes is that they all consider about the colonthetasting and the nutrition. As food is so importantbalance between corn, meat and vegetables. As aresult, Chinese
10、 dishes are delicious and healthy.划线句为正确句)评语:译文基本表达原文意思，但用词欠缺，语言错误相当多，且其中很多属于重大语言错误，所以归为7-9分档。 *+ 5分参考译文*# _Many people like Chinese food. Cooking is notonly a _ skill but also it is a kind of art. 此 isdelicious and beautiful that Chinese mealscarefully prepared. It is differently in cookingand mate
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14、型 (拆分，从句，同位语，非促合分析汉语句子主干，找出主语、谓语、宾语及其他成分确定单词和短语的翻译表达和句子，字迹工整，划线涂改校对翻译内容，除关注是否漏译外，尤其注意:可数名词复数，谓语第三人称单数四简单词拼写错误图是否用带忆连接两个句子在没有并列关系的句子中是否有且只有一个谓语 (两个动词之间有没有不定式符号to)回“有”的意思是否表达准确 (have，there be，with)主谓是否搭配 (主语是否能够发出谓语的动作，需不需要改成被动语态)单词词性NE 中文 “过号”后面信息的表达汉语中的多号，译成英文后仍为多号; 汉语中的喜号在翻译成英文后，可将后面的信息处理为:非谓语动词结构状语介词短语结构定语从多结构或将后面多子用and连接，写出完整铅子若过号前后的信息时态不同或主语不一致，可将其分成两个独立的多子eeee e加
