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1、2017 浦东一模作文浦东一模作文(25 分分) Directions: Write an English composition in 120-150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese.假如你是某电视台青少年教育类节目主持人, 现在有机会可以采访下列四位名人中的某 仪人, 你会选择采访谁?你会问些什么问题? 为什么? 中国女排教练: 郎平 Jane Lang 流行乐歌手: 周杰伦 Jay Chou 阿里巴巴集团创始人: 马云 Jack Ma 诺贝尔文学奖获得者: 莫言 Mo yan审题审题 内容：10 分：
2、1.1（“我”的采访的背景介绍）+4（问什么问题）+4（为什么）+1（总结） 2.“为什么”可以指“我为什么选择采访*？”也可以指“我为什么要提这些问题”，两者任 选其一都可行。 3.如果将提出的问题和为什么问这个问题放在一起写，是可以接受的。 4.学生容易忽略采访的背景介绍某电视台青少年教育类节目主持人、四位名人、选 择其一。扣一分 5.学生未能说明“为什么”，只写了想问什么问题，内容分 5 分以下。 6.如果以第二人称来称呼被采访对象，内容分降一个档次。结构： 1.没有分段或分段不合理，在结构分中酌情扣分。高分作文：9+8+4=20 A If I am the host of an edu
3、cational program for teenagers, I will invite Jay Chou to be our guest and interview him. First, questions about how to overcome difficulties will be raised. As we all know, Jay Chou was not a successful figure when he released his songs for the first time. Like many ordinary people, he struggled, s
4、ought for jobs and felt frustrated. However, with his passion for music and hard work, he was discovered by many celebrities and started a different life. So I think he can give us many useful suggestions on how to undergo difficulties and overcome obstacles and share his lessons with us. Then I wou
5、ld like to ask for some suggestions about how to deal with social problems. We teenagers are about to step into our society and it is inevitable for us to be faced with sensitive affairs. Showing his patience, wisdom and thoughtfulness, Jay Chou smoothly solve the recent issue between a writer and h
6、im, which is very tough and thorny. I think, teenagers can learn a lot from his experiences and be more capable in solving social problems. In conclusion, as a successful and well-named celebrity, Jay Chou is a good choice to interview.B As the host of an educational program for teenagers, Id like t
7、o interview Mo Yan, the winner of the Nobel Prize for literature. First, Ill ask him about qualities teenagers should be equipped with from his point of view. Since he has made a huge success in article writing, there must be some special opinions and experiences to share. Through the communication,
8、 Mo Yan can provide teenagers with wise suggestions and guide them to build good personality, also paving the way for them to achieve success. Second, Id like to ask how to keep a calm mood after winning such an honor. Needless to say, its normal to feel proud and self-satisfied after achieving ones
9、 success. But these attitudes tend to lead children to failures because they havent developed mature attitude yet. Therefore, from Mo Yans share of stories , we may benefit teenagers in this aspect and reach the goal of educating. To sum up, as a famous celebrity, Mo Yan is no doubt a good example f
10、or teenagers. I do hope teenagers can learn much from this interview.高分作文：19=8+8+3 与 20 分的相比, 呈现内容不够丰富; 推进形式不够自然。 A As a crazy fun of pop music, there is no doubt that Ill choose to interview the pop song singer- Jay Chou.As we all know, Jay Chous music has affected people from generation to generat
11、ion. The key to his success is not only his gift for music but also his persistence in making good music. If possible, Ill ask him to talk about his experience on the road of music. I believe how he overcame the difficulties on his road of pursuing music will inspire the teenagers nowadays to face u
12、p with challenges and run after their own dreams without complaints and regrets. Setting up our idol as a model, we can learn from him and improve ourselves of course. Jay Chou is the best choice to educate the young people nowadays because of his popularity.Jay Chou is an idol to us as the belief t
13、o peoples mind. Well benefit a lot from him. B I am the host of a teenager education programme and have an opportunity to interview one of the four following celebrities, Jane Chou, Jack Ma and Mo Yan. Having pondered the question of whom to interview, I will choose Jack Ma. Jack Ma, the founder of
14、Alibaba, is the man that Im most interested in. What we can see is his success. But behind his success, there are countless difficulties he has overcome. Facing Jack Ma, I will definitely ask this question without hesitation, what supported you to go through all the time suffering hardships? His dil
15、igence and persistence that result in his success are really respectable to all. On the other hand, as a saying goes “ in prosperity think of adversity”. Jack Ma is certainly the person who has done this. Although hes so successful in his business, he is more satisfied with it and always kept modest
16、. He keeps on making effort. Due to these qualities, I consider him as a noble person. And thus, I will ask his how he can always be full of passion, prevent himself from being lured by interesting things in the outside world and never deviate from his initial intention. Being so interested in Jack Ma, I will certainly choose him as the celebrity I will interview.中等作文：15=7+6+2 本文内容均涉及到题目要求，介绍了参访的背景，提出问题并说明了原因，但语言表 述有
