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1、 20162016 高考英语短文改错专练（一）高考英语短文改错专练（一）假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同学写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（）,并在其下面写出该加的词。删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；2只允许修改 10 处，多者（从第 11 处起）不计分。Passage 1Last Sunday, it was my fathers funny day. After supper, my f
2、ather went to see the film. But in our surprise, he came back just about half an hour later. I asked him what was the matter. He smiled and told us about the funny thing what had happened in the cinema. He was sitting in his seat while a woman came to her and said the seat was hers. Surprising, they
3、 looked at their ticket carefully, only to find the seats shown in their tickets were the same while the colors were different. So they looked at the tickets carefully. After a while, my father apologized to the woman, saying, “Sorry, I make a mistake. Take this seat, please.” The fact was that his
4、ticket found out under the glass on his desk was for the film a month ago.Passage 2It was my first Mid-Autumn Festival spent with my parents when I was 12. In the early morning, my parents and I went to the park at their car. There were lots of visitors stood in the front of the ticket window. We wa
5、ited a long time and buy three tickets. In the Tiger Mountain of the park, I was too eager to see the fierce frightened animals that I quickened my steps through the crowd. Unfortunately, I got separated from my parents. I had hard time looking for him, but I had no luck. Wandering in the park, I fe
6、lt alone without any companions. Worse still, I had no money, so I had to walk home, covered as much as 5 kilometers.Passage 3September 15, 2013 FineOne week ago, we finished our mid-exams. Today I was having a PE lesson while I fell down and hurt my foot. I was in greatly pain at that moment, but I
7、 tried to act as if nothing has happened until the class was over. Though I had difficulty walk back to my classroom, I still didnt tell anyone but even refused the offer of help of my classmates. As result, the hurt in my foot became bad. Now I know Im wrong. We can tell others our need for help an
8、d accept his help. Some day we can not help others in return. In this way, we can get along to each other happily and peacefully. Passage 4Patience is of great importance in our daily life. Once I waited a bus to come at a stop. 30 minutes past, but no bus came. Both upset and annoyed, I decided to
9、walk on feet. But no sooner had I left when the bus arrived. I thought if I had waited for one more minute, I would have caught it. If I chose to take a next bus, I would have to wait for other 30 minutes. Only then do I realize my problem. Being impatient will possible waste all the effort that we
10、have put it in. Now whenever I am close to lose my patience, Ill think of this experience.Passage 5How harmful cigarettes are getting now! My grandmother died of lung cancer at age of sixty on Jan 27, 2009. Only then did I know cigarettes were the mainly cause of her cancer. She knows smoking was ha
11、rmful, so she just couldnt quit. She always hid her addiction, hoped that I would never start smoking. My grandmother was my role models and I loved her so much. Now I still wake up in every day wishing that smoking has never been invented. Our promise to her is that I will never smoke as long as I
12、live, so that I dont have to go through which she did. Passage 6Today it was a sunny day. In the morning I went to a nearby food store to buy some breads. After the man in the store packing the bread in a small bag for me, I began to walk home with bag in my hand. On the way I met my next-door neigh
13、bor, Miss Wang, that was walking her dog .We greeted with each other and begin to talk about the weather. As we were talking, his dog came up at the bag in my hand though the bread gave off a delicious smell. As a result, some of the bread fell to the ground or the dog began to enjoy it. Five minute
14、s late, I was back at the store to buy bread again.Passage 7An most interesting thing happened to me last winter. During my winter vocation, I spend my lucky money on a special gift for Grandma. One Friday afternoon, I went to a cell phone store and chose a larger button phone special designed for s
15、eniors. I gave them to my grandma when I came to visit her at the weekend. Upon receive the phone, Grandma was very happy and eager learn how to use it. I had patiently explained all the important functions she needed. Grandma learned carefully but wanted to have a try straight away. Under my help,
16、she successfully called her good friend. That afternoon Grandma proudly told the neighbor that she could make calls with the new phone I bought her. They all praised what thoughtful I was.20162016 高考英语短文改错专练高考英语短文改错专练（一）答案与解析（一）答案与解析Passage 1本文是一篇记述了作者与父亲周末看电影时所发生的一件小趣事。1.thea。考查冠词的用法。文中my father went to see the film 提到的“看电影”，用英语表示时，应用see a film 或 go to the cinema。除此，英语中类似的说法还有：see a doctor, see a play 等等。2.into。考查介词搭配的用法。句子 B
