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1、,写什么？怎么写？,With the development of science and technology. More and more people have access to the Internet. There are many difficults in our life. Confidence is of crucial importance for our young generation。 We need to utilize self-dependence when we are confronted with troubles.,Use make use of em
2、ploy apply utilize exploit,语言结构内容,常见错误,时态 There is a lamp which was brighter in darker places. I wrote to inform you that I decided to resign from the job.,主谓一致 What I have done have influenced others. What I have done has influenced others. A striker, together with his rival, are getting through a
3、tough time. A striker, together with his rival, is getting through a tough time.,从句的使用： And they do their best to help who need help. And they do their best to help those who need help,非正式文体特点,缩略形式：a.k.a. Im, its, cant, e.g. i.e.(I am) looking forward to your reply. 口语表达：by the way, as you know, wel
4、l, cool, check it out.It scared the hell out of me.it was extremely astonishing! Join us for the weekend.We would appreciate it if you could come for the weekend.,尼玛的 我妈一个月就给我三百！ 三百啊！三百啊！ 你让我怎么活怎么活怎么活？ 上学啊上学 我在学校如何生存 尼玛包纸一个都一元了啊！ 一元啊！一元啊！ 吃到底也见不到肉啊！ 有木有！有木有！ 我是个苦逼孩纸 求包养 （85字不加标点）,I beg to be kept as
5、 mistress, because each month my mother only gives me 300 RMB which could hardly support my life at school, as Baozi (almost with no meat inside) nowadays are sold at 1 RMB.（39词不加标点） Baozi=steamed bun with meat/vegetable inside.,2011应用文 Write a letter to a friend of yours to 1)recommend one of your
6、favorite movies and 2)give reasons for your recommendation,We ought to be confident students. We should cope with all sorts of difficulties. These difficulties were inevitable in our life. Our life is long process. This process needs to be considered seriously. We ought to be confident students who
7、should cope with all sorts of difficulties that were inevitable in our life that is a long process that needs to be considered seriously.It is of great importance for us to become confident students who are capable of coping with all sorts of difficulties that were inevitable in our life, as life is
8、 a long process that needs to be considered seriously.,Describe the drawing Interpret its meaning Give your comment on it,语法结构和词汇的多样性（文采） We should learn. It is of vital significance for us to understand the importance of learning. 语言的准确性（拼写，标点，用词恰当） 书写工整,年轻人面对社会,2003温室花朵经不起风雨,2004,2007.,2008,2012,两
9、代关系,2003年温室花朵 2005年,文化,2002年An American girl dressed in traditional Chinese costume.,06.,09.,，,10,环境问题,09年应用文，白色污染 2011年,完形，阅读A，阅读B，翻译，写作 2：00-2：15 写作A，10分 （2，11，2） 2：15-2：50 写作B，20分 （3，30，2） 2：50-4：00 阅读A，40分 （每篇18min） 4：00-4：20 完形，10分 4：20-4：40 阅读B，10分 4：40-5：00 翻译，10分,应用文,1. 称呼 Dear, Will Smith.
10、Mr. Smith,2. 正文。写三段，7句，3-5个关联词，3-5个从句，100词左右 第一段两句话 第一句：自我介绍I am a staff member/students from 第二句：写作目的I am writing the letter in purpose of,第二段写2-3句：回答题目要求 第三段写两句： 第一句：表示感谢（私人建议,道歉除外） My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond words. My appreciation goes to you for your patience of read
11、ing this letter. 第二句：期待回信 (I am) looking forward to your reply/hearing from you soon.,3. 落款 （写在正文右下方） 第一行：结尾客套话： Yours sincerely, 第二行： Li Ming,大作文,三段（3句，5句，4句），160-200词，12句话，5-7个关联词，5-7个从句 第一段：图画描述段 第一句：总体描述事物 公式：事物+动作+环境 第二句和第三句：细节阐述,A football match has reached its climax before a critical penalty
12、 kick! In the eyes of the attacker, the goalkeeper grows into a giant and its hopeless to shoot in. Meanwhile, the defender minimizes himself and despairs of keeping the goal.,第二段：论述段（5句） 第一句：主题句（1句），点明象征意义 The message conveyed in the picture is that people tend to underestimate their abilities and
13、magnify difficulties when confronted with challenges.,第2-4句：论证 （两大方法结合）从四大手法入手 1. 背景（background） To understand the present situation, we need to consider the historical/economic/political/moral/background to it.2. 事实 （facts）It is a generally accepted fact that ,3.自问自答.How can this phenomenon be unde
14、rstood more thoroughly? As far as I am concerned, the problem of(主题)is in reality（解释） 4. 数据（statistics） 核心机构：the Chinese Academy of Social Sciences According to the statistics from the Chinese Academy of Social Sciences, 10.2 percent of Chinese youth are lacking in confidence,从四大论证手段入手（主要） 1. 因果论证 （
15、cause and effect） 2. 分类论证（classification）what have been mentioned above can be classified into two/three categories: 3. 举例论证 （exemplification）1-2个 Numerous examples can be given, but this will suffice. 4. 正反对比 （advantages and disadvantages）,According to the statistics from the Chinese Academy of Soc
16、ial Sciences, 10.2 percent of Chinese youth are lacking in confidence. (数据) Some people with tremendous potential have buried their chances to win under stones of negative thoughts. (事实+因) Therefore, to awake ones dormant spirit and lead to bigger success, a strong positive attitude is indispensable
17、. （果）,Numerous examples can demonstrate the power of a positive outlook. (举例论证) A case in point is Deng Yaping, the internationally famous athlete. She is very short, but becomes a legend in world table-tennis field. Her perseverance and strong will enable her to win not only 18 champions but also respects from all over the world.,
