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1、,高分作文范例 2008-6 四级题,Recreational activities and study are not mutually exclusive. Rather, they reinforce one another. As the saying goes, “All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy.“ A life burdened with study and work leads you nowhere, for you would get tired and bored with your daily routine work
2、. On the flip side, proper recreation will relieve the tension and discomfort of our tedious life because it offers you various ways to let out your pent-up emotion.,1. many information 2. different material 3. be good for their future job 4. A be better than B 5. Its number is increasing very fast.
3、 6.Every coin has two sides. 7. different,1. abundant information 2. diversified material 3. be beneficial to their future job 4. A be superior to BB be inferior to A 5. Its number is soaring 6. Every coin has a flip side. 7. variousan variety of (ranging from to),Polish your writing,I think,suppose
4、; consider; believe; estimate; regard; assume;,A is important,essentialvital indispensable,because of ,owing tothanks todue toas a result of,Try to ,我们应不遗余力地美化环境。 We should spare no effort to beautify our environment.,We are sure that ,另一方面，寄宿学校正在发挥越来越重要的作用，尤其是最近几年，这是无可争辩的。 On the flip side, it is i
5、ndisputable that boarding schools are exerting a growing important effect, especially in last few years.,sth will,关于科学技术存在许多争论，其中一个问题是当国家发展现代科学技术时，传统的技术方法是否可能会消亡？ There are heated discussions over science and technology. One of the questions under debate is whether traditional technology methods are
6、 bound to die out when a country begins to develop modern science and technology.,Its important to /sth is important.,保护眼睛很重要。 We cannot overemphasize the importance of protecting our eyes too much. 众所周知，树木对我们很重要的。 It is universally acknowledged that trees are indispensable to us.,Government should,
7、该是有关部门采取适当的措施来解决交通问题的时候了。 It is high time that the authorities concerned took proper steps to address the traffic problems.,I have to,考试迫在眉睫，我不得不放弃运动。 Since the examination is around the corner, I am compelled to give up doing sports.,We are not satisfied with Sth is not satisfactory.,交通状况令人不满意。 The
8、 condition of our traffic leaves much/something / a lot to be desired.,Frequently used expressions,broaden ones horizon With access to sth, sb can self-discipline (n.) self-disciplined (a.)be addicted to physically and mentally,Most of the sentences in the paragraph are simple ones and you may find
9、it boring to read them. Now try to combine some of the sentences into compound or complex sentences where possible or necessary. Dont start too many sentences with the word “I”.,The First Day I Came to College I still remember the first day when I came to college. It was a sunny day. Everything seem
10、ed fresh to me . All the freshmen were excited. I was very excited, too. I had long dreamed of becoming a college student. Later my dream had come true. This was really a turning point in my life. I looked at the modern classroom buildings and the large library.,I felt proud of my college. I knew th
11、at going to college would be a good opportunity for me to obtain a great deal of knowledge. The knowledge would be useful for my future career. But I knew that studying at college was a great challenge to me. I had to learn how to overcome the difficulties in my study and life at college. Anyway, I
12、was determined to study hard. I must live up to the expectations of my parents and my friends. I was sure that I could face the challenge. I would make the best of the opportunity. I would prove myself a worthy college student.,I still remember the first day when I came to college. It was a sunny da
13、y and everything seemed fresh to me. I was very excited like other freshmen, because my dream of becoming a college student had come true. This was really a turning point in my life. Looking at the modern classroom buildings and the grand library, I felt proud of my college. I knew that it would be
14、a good opportunity for me to obtain a great deal of knowledge useful for my future career and the society, but studying at college was also a great challenge to me, for I had to learn how to overcome the difficulties in my study and life. Anyway, I was determined to study hard in order to live up to the expectations of my parents and my friends. I was sure that I could face the challenge, make the best of the opportunity and prove myself a worthy college student.,The First Day I Came to College,
