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1、作文大纲解读,题型：主观题型，分为Section A 和Section B两个部分 Section A 写作文 Section B 写便条：要求根据提示写大约50-60词的便条,通知, 请贴等.要求做到格式正确,语言得体。考试时间为10分钟，满分10分,便条评分依据,评分从格式、内容和语言(包括语法)三个方面进行，在评分时，先考虑格式和内容，再考虑语言。若格式和内容都符合要求，但语言很差，最多得6分。便条的总字数包括三部分格式在内，要求50-60字，不到50或超过80字扣1分。,评分标准,10-9 格式正确，内容完整，几乎无语法错误，语言得体，读者能完全理解 8-7 格式正确，内容完整，有少量
2、语法错误，语言得体，读者理解上几乎无困难 6-5 格式基本正确，内容基本完整，有一些语法错误，语言大致得体，读者理解上有少许困难 4-3 格式基本错误，内容基本不完整，语法错误较多，语言基本不得体，理解上有一些困难 2-0 基本不能完成写作任务，语法错误普遍，语言完全不得体，读者完全不理解,格式：3分,包括日期，称呼和结尾三部分，各占1分 日期正确：April 24th,2010/April 24,2010/ April 24th/ April 24/ 24/4/2010 4/24/2010 位置在右上角,英语月份简写正确形式,Jan. Feb. Mar. Apr. May June,July
3、 Aug. Sep. Oct. Nov. Dec.,称呼（heading） 结尾(Ending),称呼正确: (Dear)Mike:(,) / 位置在日期下面一行左侧 结尾正确：Yours sincerely,/ Yours,/ Sincerely yours,/ Sincerely 错误: Sincerely, Mike(若在一行扣0.5分) Yours Sincerely(两个单词的首字母都大写扣0.5) 若名字没写或任命XXX(或Mike/Hilda)扣1分,格式需前后一致，如全左或全右，若不符合，扣1分 凡不符合上述正确格式或表达均要扣分。错一部分扣1分,内容与语言（占6分）,1 描述
4、 2分 2 邀请 2分 3 首句需用自己正确的语言表达，若完全抄提示扣1分 4 语言表达较差(包括语法和拼法错误),扣1-2分,语言得体性 占1分,语言风格与情景不一致，扣1分(如: Yours truly, Truly yours, If you consent, etc.)，只有语言表达较好才可得分,评分总体要求,1 语言没有严重错误，格式对，内容完整，语言得体，自述符合要求(40),可给9-10分 2 便条总字数(包括三部分格式在内)要求在50-60字:不到40或超过80字扣1分书写 整齐 清晰，无乱涂乱改 字体大小合适,2007真题,SECTION B NOTE-WRITING (10
5、 MIN) Write on ANSWER SHEET ONE a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation: Your classmate, Jimmy, is head of the universitys swimming club. He has invited you to join the club, but you like some other sport. Write him a note, declining and explaining why. Marks will be awarded for
6、 content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.,2007真题样文一,Jimmy，Thank you for your invitation me to join the club. I would like to go. But I dont like swimming, and I can do it. So I think take part in some others sport. Thank you the same to you. YoursXXX,样文二,Jimmy，I feel grateful for your inv
7、itation. Swimming club is really something exiting. Especially, to work with you. But I think I have to say sorry. You know, for a long time, I am interested in tennis and volliball. And, I have already gotten a great deal of reward and prize. I dont want to give them up. Jane,样文三,April 22, 2011 Dea
8、r Jimmy,Thank you so much for inviting me to join the swimming club. Id like to but Im afraid I cannot. To learn tennis has long been my dream and the best tennis teacher will be leaving next year. So this is the last chance for me and I would like very much to seize it.Best wishes.Yours,Tom,请求便条写作要
9、求,a讲清事情的因由（为什么请求） b请求行为 c请求实现方式 d致谢,套句,请求帮助： Would you do me a favor? Would you be so kind as to?/ Could I trouble you to send this book for me?/ I wonder if you would tell me?/ If it is not too troublesome, could you?/ I hope this request will not trouble you too much. 请求允许：Please give me a few mor
10、e days./May I have a look at your dictionary? / Would you mind if I opened the window? / I wonder if I could open the door. / Would it be possible to have a talk with you?,请求做事(要求与暗示)：Lets go to the bookstore this afternoon./ I want to have a look at your book. / I wish you could/ I would like ask y
11、ou to clean the room./ You are making a big mess./ I feel a bit hungry now. What time is it now?,请求便条,某大学著名教授上周来你校做讲座，你(因为-)迟到了，耽误了一半讲座，也没有拿到讲座的讲稿。但是这个讲座对你很有帮助。请你给这位教授写张便条索要一份上次讲座的讲稿。,April 20，2008 Dear Professor Hu, I am very happy to have the chance to listen to your lecture on “American Literatur
12、e”. But it is a pity that I was late that day due to an accident on my way to the lecture and failed to get the handout. Your lecture is really instructive for my English study, so I wonder if you could kindly e-mail the handout to the address: .Heartfelt thanks. Respectfully yours,Amelia,请求便条要点,请求
13、便条的写作除了基本的时间，称呼，结尾客套用语，签名等四项结构条件外，在其正文处一般还要 下面58条内容 1 请求行为的前在序列，即请求理由陈述，如I am very happy to have the chance to listen to your lecture on “American Literature”， but it is a pity that I was late that day due to a minor accident on my way to the lecture. I missed the first half of the lecture and faile
14、d to get the handout. Your lecture is really instructive for my English study,2 请求的行为(语言标记由下划线表示，请求内容由粗体的部分表示)如，I hope I can get your further help. “I am wondering if it is possible for you to give me a list” 3 请求可能的实现方式, “to the following e-mail address:”,4 请求行为的后续行为，即致谢. 因为请求行为对对象而言，都是一定的付出，不论请求行为
15、能否实现都应表示感谢，这是很礼貌的，如 heartfelt thanks many thanks,请求便条,明天有朋友来杭州，你想领他到西湖玩，可是明天该你值班，写个便条给你的朋友王玲，请她代你值班。,邀请 约会便条写作要求,a 邀约事由 “ a new movie” b 邀约行为 “I would be very grateful if you could” c 约会可能的方式(时间地点)及磋商,如on Friday at Room 114; if the subject does not suit you or that time is not convenient for you.- d
16、 请求行为的后续行为 “many thanks”,语言表达 套句,同学之间距离近的可用较随意的语句 Lets go to the coffee bar near the school gate to have a chat 关系稍远的 要表示尊重 礼貌 If it doesnt trouble you much, shall we meet at the Zhongshan bus station at 7 this evening? We are going to have a ball to celebrate the new year on December 31, at 7 p.m.
17、and would lobe to have you join us.,发出邀请,April 20, 2008 Dear Fiona, I am going to hold a dinner party with several other friends of ours. The party will be held in Room 6 of Lijing Hotel at 5:00 p.m. today, I sincerely hope you can attend and we will have a very happy time together. Please let me know whether you can make it. Yours, Amelia,
