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1、新东方 托福写作强化课堂,主讲人：廖歆,请表达以下几个句子,科技发展了，人们都过上了现代生活。 看电视太多，孩子容易学坏啊！ 工作太忙成为了很多工作的人不关心家人的借口。 在国内旅游比在国外旅游更省钱。 友谊与金钱关系不大；然而，它取决于两个人的爱好、性格、目标和经历。,师傅领进门，自虐靠个人,我的课的三个宗旨： 面向考试、提高成绩、求真务实,过去我们总是,翻译,国内的考试题,假设你是李华，作为选派的交流生在美国某中学学习了一年，寄住在Mr.Brown家里，刚回到国内，给他写了一封信，内容为 帮助寄回忘带回的字典； 感谢在美国期间他所提供的帮助； 邀请他到中国旅游。 要求字数不少于80字,写作
2、是表达不是翻译,写作是表达而不是翻译,过去的人冬天没有暖气，出门见不到汽车，连吃肉都困难，哪有什么幸福可言？,怎么表达比较好？,过去的人冬天没有暖气，出门见不到汽车，连吃肉都困难，哪有什么幸福可言？ 过去的人们感觉不幸福，因为没有暖气，他们在冬天会感觉到寒冷；没有汽车，难以到达远方；很难找到肉吃，没有营养。,过去的人们感觉不幸福，因为没有暖气，他们在冬天会感觉到寒冷；没有汽车，难以到达远方；很难找到肉吃，没有营养。 People in the past didnt feel happy. They felt cold without radiators; they found it hard
3、to reach remote places without automobiles; they were malnourished without meat on their tables.,是这样翻译的,过去的人冬天没有暖气，出门见不到汽车，连吃肉都困难，哪有什么幸福可言？ over the past were no heating in winter, out did not see a car, and even meat are difficult, so how happy is that?,可怕的学生直译,过去的人冬天没有暖气，出门见不到汽车，连吃肉都困难，哪有什么幸福可言？ T
4、he past people in winter do not have heating gas, can see car exit door, eat meat difficult, where have what happiness can say?,表达下面这句话,出国留学可以学习知识，增强阅历，为未来打下基础！ gain, obtain, acquire, increase, develop, accumulate,出国留学帮助我们积累知识，获得新的经验，为未来做准备。 Studying abroad helps us accumulate knowledge, gain new ex
5、perience and prepare ourselves for the future.,通过出国留学，我们积累了知识，获得了新的经验，为未来做了准备。 By studying abroad, we accumulate knowledge, gain new experience and prepare ourselves for the future.,prepare concern excite disappoint frustrate,表达下面这句话,越来越多的孩子患有网瘾，分数下降得厉害，身心健康也受到危害。,More and more children become addic
6、ted to the internet, resulting in falling grades and poor physical and mental condition. More and more children spend too much time on surfing on line. As a result, they are no longer willing to spend their time on study and sports.,表达下面这句话,学习艺术可以陶冶情操,Appreciating arts and music is a character educa
7、tion. Appreciating arts and music helps students mold and shape their characters. Appreciating arts and music teaches values and virtues.,写作是表达而不是翻译 无处不在,坏电影害人； 孩子们受够了坏电影； 孩子们饱受坏电影之苦； 烂片大行其道，孩子不堪其扰； 坏电影让孩子生活在水深火热之中 suffer,Children suffer from bad movies. Children suffer a lot from the flood/inundati
8、on of pornographic movies.,考砸了，我想死的心都有了； I suffer a lot from the low grade in my last exam; 你这馊主意会害人不浅； People will suffer a lot from your bad idea. 你磨磨唧唧的，搞死我了都； I suffer a lot from your delayed decision.,倩女幽魂 Beautiful girl, lingering soul. A Chinese Ghost Story 满城尽带黄金甲 The city is full of golden
9、armor. The curse of golden flower.,十面埋伏 Ten face ambush The house of flying dagger 仙剑奇侠传 Immortal sword and strange hero legend The legend of the swordman,How to train a dragon? 怎样训练一只龙呢？ 驯龙高手 We do chicken right! 我们 烹鸡美味，尽在肯德基！,句子的三种训练方法,多种方法表达同一句意； 扩充丰富已有句型； 对句式进行各种变换。,我认为，我同意这个观点：勤奋才能成功。,I think
10、I agree with the idea: I will succeed if I work hard.,用高级词汇替换低级词汇,I insist that I support the announcement: I will succeed if I spare no effort for working.,添加副词和形容词,I unavoidably insist that I strongly support the classical announcement: I will definitely succeed if I spare no effort for working.,找
11、出潜在的逻辑关系,I unavoidably insist that based on my personal experiences and education, I strongly support the classical announcement: final success results from hard work.,去掉累赘，变成地道又简略的表达,Based on my personal experiences and educational background, I strongly support the classical saying: final success
12、comes from continual hard work.,I think I agree with the idea: I will succeed if I work hard. Based on my personal experiences and educational background, I strongly support the classical saying: final success comes from continual hard work.,学生最常犯错误,拼写错误,effecient; televition; seperate; listenning;
13、Infomation; newpapers;,aginst; satelite; comminute; indispensible; programmme; changable,低级语法错误,all people is fond of seeing tv; he buy a newspaper in the way home; as far as I am concerned, in my opinion, undoubtedly, I believe television is better. The first reason I have putted forward is that by
14、 watch tv, we know there are so many events,语法错误,There are three evidences support my opinion. Big company is good for people. Because they can learn more knowledge. Dinosaurs have extincted.,不断句,Take the experiences of my grandmother as an example, (断句) she is extremely interested in news and curio
15、us about the events happened every day, (断句) she love sports,A great amount of people concern the advantage brought by building a factory, establishing a new school and environment protection, therefore, they may ignore some possibly defect, which including the heavy fiscal burden. Despite of that t
16、hey find the drawback, I believe we should learn some knowledge from most of the book given by Doctor King in order to eliminating the negative influential.,托福写作：两种题型，两种分值,Integrated Writing 综合写作 Independent Writing 独立写作 Raw Score 原始分值 ：05分 Scaled Score 最终分值 ：030分,分值换算,Percentile Rank,我们的目标是,综合写作3分以上 独立写作5分,托福写作基本知识,字数要多少？ 400左右 需不需要写标题？ 不需要 作文如何分段？ 缩行式与空行式 标点符号后面是否需要空格？ 要空格,托福写作基本知识,英式英语还是美式英语？ colo(u)r, program(me), labo(u)r 书面语还是口语？ 当然是书面语 BTW，U dunno， &， 4u2B or not 2B, thats a ?,
