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1、,Watch the video.,What happened to the animals?,Module 4 Seeing the doctor Unit 3 Writing,Pre-writing(10minutes),have a headache,have a fever,catch a cold,have a toothache,have a cough,Free talk: Whats wrong with him?He .,Pre-writing(10minutes),What should they do now?,They should go to see the doct
2、or.,They should go to see the doctor.,A:How old is Jim? B:He is 14. A:Whats wrong with him? B:He had a fever and headache. A:How long has he been like this? B:He has been like this since yesterday.,?,?,fast food junk food,Free talk,sleep late get up late no breakfast,play computer no exercise,How,no
3、 fast food little junk food more fruit and vegetables,sleep early get up early have breakfast,dont play too much computer get some exercise,Fast food, no breakfast, no exercise,Make a medical report(医疗报告),Jim is a fourteen-year-old boy. He has had a fever and headache since yesterday. Thats because
4、he usually has fast food,but doesnt have breakfast every day. He doesnt take exercise,either. So he should stop eating fast food and have breakfast every day. And dont forget to get exercise.,Make others medical report like this.,Are their lifestyle healthy?,How can we get healthy lifestyle?,healthy
5、,unhealthy,keep a happy mood/always with a smile on face,There is an old English saying.It tells us that we must go to bed early at night and get up early in the morning.Then we shall be healthy.We shall also be rich and clever.This is true.The body must have enough sleep to be healthy.Children of y
6、oung age should have ten hours sleep every night.Children who do not have enough sleep cannot do their work well and they many not be healthy.The body also needs exercise.Walking,running,jumping and playing games are all exercise.Exercise keeps the body strong.Exercise also helps the blood to move a
7、round inside the body.It is very important.Our blood moves to all parts of our body.The head also needs blood.Exercise helps us to think better.,Healthy lifestyle,health,cough,fever,stomach ache,illness,exercise,sleeping,假如你是李佳，你将为学校主办的健康教育宣传栏准备一篇”Healthy Lifestyle”的小短文，谈谈你对健康生活的看法。内容包括： 1.每天运动2.健康饮
8、食3.充足的睡眠4.保持好心情。 请结合实际情况适当发挥。,Ending,Body 正文,说明健康生活对我们的重要性。(2分),卷面书写，酌情加减分（1分）,提出健康生活的2-3点建议，如运动，饮食和睡眠等等。 （每条建议3分）,作文自评，按照每点的具体分值给自己的作文评分。（满分15分）,作文展评，小组讨论评分，作文满分15分,Beginning 开头部分,Post-writing,号召大家一起健康生活。（2分）,每语句中有错误酌情扣0.5-1分。,第一档：12-15分 内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，几乎没有语言错误。 第二档：11-12分 内容涵盖所有的要点，表达清楚，但有少量语言错误。
9、第三档：8-10分 内容涵盖大部分要点，表达尚清楚 ,但有一些语言错误。（以上为及格线） 第四档：4-7分 内容涵盖部分要点，写出少量句子，但表达不连贯，语言错误较多。 第五档：0-3分 只写出个别单词，不成句子，表达不清楚。,评分档次和要求：,展示（show your passage）,Writing talent 写作达人：,A healthy lifestyle is very important for us.We need to start a healthy lifestyle.Here are some of my suggestions. First,take exercise
10、 every day.Doctors suggest that we walk at least 10,000 steps a week to keep fit.Second,eat healthy food.Eat fresh fruit and vegetables.Dont eat too much meat.Third,get enough sleep.In order to have enough sleep,we should go to bed early.Fourth,keep a happy mood.If you want to be happy,you can laugh. I hope you will live healthily.,
