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1、罗田一中 彭爱英,高三英语试卷评讲,第四部分：书面表达 第一节：完成句子 71. They had delayed having children, for the usual reason, to set up (创建) their career. (set)72. A United Nations spokeman in New York said to thenews media yesterday the request would be considered (将会考虑) (consider) 73. It has set us back in so many respects th
2、at Im not sure ( 我无法确定）how long it will take for us to catch up. (sure)74. I would rather stare at a clear, star-filled sky than watch （也不愿看）TV commercials. (watch)75. We all stand firmly at your side, whatever /No matter what happens（无论发生什么）, my son! (happen),76. - Is there a flight to New York at
3、8:00 tomorrow morning ?- There might be （有可能）.You can phone the airport and make sure. (be) 77. I was going along the street looking for a place (找个地方） to park when the accident occurred. (look) 78. Not until the motorbike looked almost new, did he stop （他停止） repairing and cleaning. (stop) 79. Had y
4、ou worked harder, you wouldt have failed （就不会失败）in the competition. (fail)80. Her father gave her advice on learning English that she (should) use it （她用英语） as much as possible. (use),难点解析： 77. I was going along the street looking for a place（找个地方）to park when the accident occurred. (look) 考点：,动词的in
5、g形式作伴随状语,改编高考题： （2010江西卷24） The lady walked around the shops, _ （留意）bargains. (keep),keeping an eye out for,比较： 71. They had delayed having children, for the usual reason, to set up (创建 ) their careers. (set) 考点：,不定式作目的状语及创建 set up,改编高考题： （2010全国卷34） With Fathers Day around the corner, I have taken
6、some money out of bank _ (买礼物)for my dad. (buy),to buy presents,80. Her father gave her advice on learning Englishthat she (should) use it （她用英语）as muchas possible. (use)考点：,高考真题（2010湖北79） After circling around the earth for 3 days, Shenzhou Spaceship received the command from the ground that _ (它着陆
7、) as scheduled the next day. (land),it (should) land,表建议，命令，要求等名词所接同位语从句，表语从句也要 用虚拟语气 (should ) do,要有句子结构意识（分析句子结构，了解句子成分） 通读句子，找出考点 得分原则：结构正确，用所定的英语词完整表达所给的汉语信息，给满分。（关键词：结构正确 用给定的词） 4. 建立完整的语法体系，积累各类短语，固定搭配等。 5. 加强训练。,应对策略：,第二节：短文写作,认真审题 初步构思，列出提纲 精选词句，连句成篇 书写工整，争夺印象分 回头审读，复查全文,短文写作解题策略,假设你是李华，福建省某
8、中学高中学生，今年暑假将前往澳大利 亚参加主题为 “WATER FOR LIFE” 的交流活动。请你以参访 代表的身份，根据以下图片提示，用英语写一篇发言稿。,注意： 1、根据图片的内容适当展开，以使行文连贯； 2、开头和结尾已写好，不计入总词数； 3、文中不能出现考生的具体信息； 4、词数：120左右。 参考词汇：短缺 shortage； 资源 resourceLadies and gentlemen,Good morning. Im Li Hua from Fujian, China.Its my great honor to be here to say something about
9、global water shortage and ways of dealing with it._ _ Thats all. Thank you,审题,审体裁，格式（应用文 书信，演讲，议论文，记叙文，招聘启事，新闻报道等） 审人称，时态 审内容要点,审题,1，体裁: 应用文演讲稿 2，人称：第一人称 3，时态：现在时 4，要点：水资源短缺问题我们该怎么办,列提纲,(para1): (para2):(para3):,列提纲,ways ?1)reserve water2)turn sea water into fresh water3) .,Conclusion(倡议/愿望）,the pro
10、blem of.,【各档次的给分范围和要求】 第五档(很好)；(21-25分) 1. 完全完成了试题规定的任务。 2. 覆盖所有内容要点。 3. 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 4. 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误，但为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词汇所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 5. 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分，使全文结构紧凑。 6. 完全达到了预期的写作目的。,正确使用关联词能增强文章的流畅性，使文章层次清晰， 行文连贯。 1，表递进：,besides, futhermore, whats more, in addition, moreover, whats worse, to make t
11、hings worse,2，表转折：,however, but at the same time, despite, in spite of, nevertheless, while, regardless of , though,3，表比较：,on the contrary, instead(of), while, compare to/with, in comparision with, in contrast (to),5，表个人观点：,in my opinion, as far as Im concerned, so far as I know personally,6，表因果：,as
12、 a result (of), because (of), on account of, due to, owing to, thanks to, now that, therefore, consequently,in a word , in brief , in conclusion , in short , in summary on the whole , to conclude , to sum up , as has been noted,4，表总结：,Enjoy and compare:eg 1) . dont have clean water to drink . have n
13、o access to clean drinking water2). make people know the importance ofprotecting the environment .raise the publics awareness of environmental protection.(尽可能使用一些高级词汇，并灵活运用各种句型结构),3)酌情使用名词性从句，定语从句等复杂句型： Eg: Everybody knows that . As is known to all , . It is known to all that . Water is important to life on the earth. Water is what make life possible. It is water that makes life possible.,提示：还可根据需要恰当运用状语从句，强调句型, 非谓语动词, 虚拟语气等，,4）变主动语态为被动语态：Eg : Governments should make laws to stop water pollution. Laws against water pollution should be made .,
