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1、杭州个人陈述中千万不要再用这些套路英国大学学院招生服务中心(Ucas) 负责人表示学生在个人陈述中所用的 “陈词滥调”会损害其未来的职业发展。Ucas数据显示,“从小我一直是, ”(From a young age I have always been.)是去年申请者最常用的开头。70万学生中有超过1,779 名学生在个人陈述中喜欢用“最感兴趣的是”(interested in) 或“被, 所吸引”(fascinated by) 结尾。下面梳理了个人陈述中被人用烂的句子,各位准备写申请的同学要留心哟! 1. “自打记事起,我就 , ”(For as long as I can remember
2、 I have.) 2. “我申请这个课程是因为 , ”(I am applying for this course because.) 3. “我一直对 , 感兴趣”(I have always been interested in.) 4. “在我一生当中, 我一直很享受 , ” (Throughout my life, I have always enjoyed.) 5. “回顾我的教育经历,我 , ”(Reflecting on my educational experiences.) 6. “护理专业是一门十分具有挑战性的, ”(Nursing is a very challengi
3、ng and demanding career/profession/course) 7. “在学术上,我一直是 , ”(Academically, I have always been.) 8. “我一直想从事 , 职业” (I have always wanted to pursue a career in.) 9. “我一直对 , 充满热情”(I have always been passionate about.) 10. “教育是充满力量的武器,你可以用它来改变世界。”(Education is the most powerful weapon which you can use to change the world.) Ucas首席执行官 Mary Curnock Cook 表示,个人陈述一定要个人化。“学会介绍自己在求职面试中是一项很重要的技能,用那些陈词滥调无法让你的才能凸显。”