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1、四级写作,四级写作 大学英语四级考试写作部分考试时间为30分钟。要求应试者写出一篇不少于120个词的短文。Scoring 内容是否切题 是否充分表达思想 语言是否能清楚而明确地表达思想。,具体评分标准,710分制，作文部分占15%，满分标准分为106分。阅卷时，作文部分满分为15分，阅卷标准分为5等：2分、5分、8分、11分和14分。,2分条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 5分基本切题，表达思想不够清楚，连贯性差，有较多的严重错误。 8分基本切题，有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯，语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 11分切题，表达思想清楚，文
2、字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 14分切题，表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。,看图说话题第1段.描述图画第2段.分析原因/利弊（例子）第3段.解决办法(有时候会需要写)/总结,第1段.描述图画（3-4句）,第一句 the picture shows us that. the chart demonstrates that. From what can be seen from the picture, . As shown in the picture, a teacher is teaching a bunch of students multiplicatio
3、n table; but the students think the study of basic knowledge is outdated when they are looking for jobs.,第二句,It explains that. It reveals that to some extents, many of us have overlooked the importance of learning basic skills because we consider them useless in the job market.,第三句,From my point of
4、view, I think that learning basic skills is absolutely critical in our study and life. 第四句 The reasons are as follows./ There are several reasons contributing to my idea./ I have some reasons to explain.,第2段.分析原因/利弊（例子）（5-7句）,To begin with/ in the first place, basic skills lay a strong foundation fo
5、r further learning and exploration. Furthermore/ Secondly/ In addition, basic skill is something that evaluates the quality of a person comprehensively. For example, if a candidate cannot master easy skills, how can you expect him to do complex jobs in the work unit? Last but not the least, basic sk
6、ills can broaden a persons horizon and exercise his learning ability, which always plays a decisive role in the process of work and study.,第3段.解决办法(有时候会需要写)/总结（2-5句）,Based on what I have explained/ In conclusion/ to sum up, despite the fact that many people assert that learning basic skills is outda
7、ted and not important anymore, yet I still hold the view that those basic skills such as maths, counting and Chinese are important. Therefore, I suggest that we all should attach importance to the study of basic skills. Only basic skills to be learned can we adapt to the fierce competition in the jo
8、b market.,From what can be seen from the picture, based on a study conducted by US Bureau of Labours Statistics, people of doctoral degrees have the highest weekly earning whereas people who have less than high school diploma earn least money. It reveals that the higher degree a person has, normally
9、 the better paid he is/the more money he gets paid. From my point of view, there are several factors contributing to this phenonmenon. The reasons are as follows.,Personally speaking, I firmly believe that the degree is one of the most important factors that influences income. To begin with/ in the
10、first place, getting high degree means having excellent ability, which naturally leads to high payment. Furthermore/ Secondly/ In addition, people who have invested time, energy and money in education definitely should get more rewards in return. Thus, high salary reflects their investment in these
11、regards. Last but not the least, people with higher education will contribute more to the society than those who are less educated. For this reason they should be paid better. For example, educated people can be scientists, doctors, lawyers and so on, whereas those less educated people can only to r
12、elatively easier jobs.,Based on what I have explained/ In conclusion/ to sum up, despite the fact that many people assert that the degree is not equivalent to better payment, yet I still hold the view that the higher education one gets, the higher salary one obtains. Therefore, I suggest that we all
13、 should attach importance to the opportunity of being educated. Only more knowledge to be learned can we be more competitive in the job market and better paid.,传统社会现象分析题,第1段:描述现象 第2段:说明原因 第3段:个人看法（解决方案）,传统社会现象分析题,1.西方节日受到年轻人热捧,而中国传统节 日受到冷遇。 2.邻里之间关系变得越来越淡漠。 3.“Should college students go to work imme
14、diately or pursue their post graduate study after graduation? 4. How to Be Likable in Social Life？ 5. Cellphones are overly used in todays world.,在今天, 因特网对人们之间交流的影响越来越大。 In todays world, internet has increasingly biggerinfluences on communication between people. 在过去,我们都会面对面交谈；而现在,我们越来越依赖电脑和网络。 In th
15、e past, we talked face to face whereas nowadays, we have become more and more dependant on computer and internet. 简而言之,对很多人来说,没有网络他们就活不下去。个人认为,网络是一把双刃剑,一方面能加速人之间的交流,一方面又会削弱它。 In a word, for many people, they cannot live without internet. Personally speaking, internet serves as a double-edged sword.
16、On one hand, it can make communication between people faster whereas on the other hand, it can weaken it as well.,有些人认为电子交流会在未来的某一天代替人与人之间的交流。 Some people think that electronic communication can replace face-to-face contact of people one day in future. 从我的观点来看这种情况不太可能发生。理由如下。 Yet from my point of vi
17、ew this situation is not very likely to happen. The reasons are as follows. 首先,面对面交流比通过电脑交流更直接,更像是真正的交流。 In the first place, face-to-face contact is more direct than communicating through computers; and is more like a real communication. 其次,通过面对面交流我们能感觉到更多的感情,感情是人类独有的东西。 In addition, face-to-face contact can make us feel more emotions, which are something exclusively owned by human beings.,
