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1、假如你是 李华. .,审题,体裁: 信件(a letter of advice),主体时态: 一般现在时,人称: 第二人称,假如你是中学生李华，你收到正在学习汉语的美国笔友Peter的电子邮件，说他在汉语学习中遇到了困难，感到非常着急。请根据以下要点给他回信并提出建议，帮他来解决这方面的困难。 1.不要担忧，要有信心。 2.给自己更多练习汉语的机会。 3.让自己浸泡在汉语的环境当中。,假如你是中学生李华，你收到正在学习汉语的美国笔友Peter的电子邮件，说他在汉语学习中遇到了困难，感到非常着急。请根据以下要点给他回信并提出建议，帮他来解决这方面的困难。 1.不要担忧，要有信心。 2.给自己更多
2、练习汉语的机会。 3.让自己浸泡在汉语的环境当中。,1.Beginning:state the problem & your purpose(问题和目的),2.Body:give advice&reasons (建议和理由),3.Ending:express your hope(表达希望),3parts,假如你是中学生李华，你收到正在学习汉语的美国笔友Peter的电子邮件，说他在汉语学习中遇到了困难，感到非常着急。请根据以下要点给他回信并提出建议，帮他来解决这方面的困难。 1.不要担忧，要有信心。 2.给自己更多练习汉语的机会。 3.让自己浸泡在汉语的环境当中。,I have received
3、 your letter. Im sorry to hear that you are going through a hard time learning Chinese. Now Im writing to give you some suggestions.,Dont be anxious and trust yourself. Grab every opportunity to practice using the language. Involve yourself in a Chinese environment.,Looking forward to your improveme
4、nt soon.,write an outline,Dear Peter, I have received your letter. Im sorry to hear that you are going through a hard time learning Chinese. Now Im writing to give you some suggestions.To begin with, dont be anxious and trust yourself. Chinese is one of the most complex languages in the world, so it
5、s normal for a beginner to have some trouble. Besides, grab every opportunity to practice using the language. The more you practice, the more fluent you will be in it.,organization,Above all, involve yourself in a Chinese environment. Make sure that you are surrounded by books and TV programs in Chi
6、nese, and by friends speaking Chinese, which is essential to the learning of any language. Looking forward to your improvement soon.,Writing.1,假设你是李华，你的好朋友Jane最近发现自己在发胖很烦恼，她写信请你给她就如何减肥提建议，请你根据以下的内容给Jane写一封信。 要点：1.健康饮食；2.多锻炼；3.喝足够多的水。,Knowing that you have trouble in losing weight, Id like to give yo
7、u some suggestions.,It is important to have a healthy diet. It is helpful to do more exercise. It would be a good idea to drink enough water.,I am sure if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and stay healthy.,1.Beginning:purpose,2.Body:advice,Dear Jane,Knowing that you have trouble in losing
8、 weight, Id like to give you some suggestions.First, it is important to have a healthy diet. In order to lose weight, you can eat more vegetables and fruits. Besides, it is helpful to do more exercise. The more exercise you take, the more fat you will burn off, and you will be thinner. In addition,
9、it would be a good idea to drink enough water. Because water can support our body and activities, and help us lose weight.,I am sure if you take my advice, you will become slimmer and stay healthy.Yours,Li Hua,Writing.2,假设你是李华，得知你的老师Mr.Huang喜欢吸烟，并且已经养成长期吸烟的习惯，请你给他写一封信，向他提出戒烟的建议。 要点：1.担忧老师的身体健康。2.提出戒
10、烟理由和如何戒烟的建议。3.祝他早日戒烟成功。,write an outline,Since I knew that you have got into the the habit of smoking, I have been very worried.,First, choose a day when you are relaxed to throw away all your cigarettes and make a list of all the benefits you can get from stop smoking. Then, reread the benefits whe
11、n you want to smoke again. Finally, do some sports every day and you are sure to succeed.,Dear Mr.Huang,Since I knew that you have got into the the habit of smoking, I have been very worried. You see, not only smoking wastes your time and money, but it is also harmful to you health physically and me
12、ntally, so I believe you should stop smoking immediately. Here are some suggestions for you.,First, choose a day when you are relaxed to throw away all your cigarettes and make a list of all the benefits you can get from stopping smoking. Then, reread the benefits when you want to smoke again. Final
13、ly, do some sports every day and you are sure to succeed.I hope my suggestions are useful to you, and you will make it soon.Yours sincerely,Li Hua,Homework,1.Polish your writing1. 2.Try to finish writing2.,sentence patterns套用句型,A.state your purpose,1.Im sorry to learn thatso Im writing to give you s
14、ome suggetions. 2.Im glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on. 3.Knowing that you., Id like to share some suggestions with you.,B.give your advice,1.Trust yourself. Dont worry. 2.Its helpful/important to. 3.It would be a good idea to. 4.should/be supposed to do sth.,Remember！,C.express yo
15、ur hope,1.I would appreciate it if you could take my advice into consideration/account. Looking forward to your improvement soon. 2.I hope you will find these suggestions helpful. 3.Im sure if you take my advice, you will make great progress.,Remember！,Firstly, / Secondly, / Thirdly, ,First of all, / Besides, / In addition, / Whats more, / Furthermore, / Finally, / Last but not least, ,For one thing, / For another, ,衔接与连贯,表示多个建议，可以用上：,
