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1、好作文？,1、覆盖了所有的要点。 2、应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。（词汇、句型高级和语法多样化） 3、有效的使用了语句间的过渡性词汇，使全文结构紧凑，行文连贯，条理清楚。,如何做到覆盖全部要点？,书面表达五步法,书面表达,审,连,查,抄,列,1.审：审文体、审要求、审人称、审时态 文体：记叙文、说明文、议论文、应用文 要求：（见试题） 人称：第一、二、三人称 时态：过去时或者一般现在时.,4. 查：复查全文 （1）体裁格式是否正确； （2）内容要点是否全面； （3）全文的行文是否通顺、连贯。 （4）句子的时态、语态是否正确； （5）主谓是否一致； （6）标点符号与大小写有无错误； （7）字数是
2、否相符等。,注重书写美观, 保持卷面整洁, 提高印象分。 (1) 切忌书写不清、涂涂抹抹； (2) 保持单词之间的距离基本一致, 一般为一个大写字母A的间隙； (3) 错词只用一条横线或斜线划掉； (4) 每段前空格约4个字母的位置。,5. 抄,如何使词汇、句型高级化？,一、适当的运用一些词组、习语来代替单个单词或平淡的句子，以增加文采，丰富语句的表现力。,指点迷津,你将很容易找到我的家,You will find my house easily.,-,-,-,S,V,O,时态：一般将来时。S+Will +V原形,1、You will find my house easily.,have no
3、 difficulty in doing sth,Youll have no trouble/difficulty (in) finding my house.,她很喜欢运动。,She likes sports very much.,-,-,-,S,V,O,1.Be fond of 2.be into 3.be interested in 4.enjoy,She is fond of sports. She is into sports. She is interested in sports. She enjoys sports.,我们将尽力学好英语。,Try to do sth,Well
4、try to learn English well.,do everything sb can to do sth make every effort to do sth. spare no effort to do sth.,Try to do sth,1.I hope to receive your letter soon.2.Because the weather was good,ourjourney was comfortable.,Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.,Because of/Thanks to/Owing to t
5、he good weather,our journey was comfortable.,二、尽量避免过多地重复使用某一单词、短语，选择使用其他恰当的同义词、词组来代替。,He learns English well,and he learns maths well ,too.,do well in be good at,三、学会套用句型,1.He was very tired. He couldnt walk any farther.,tooto,He was too tired to walk any farther.,2.Because so many people communicat
6、e in English every day, it will become more and more important to have a good knowledge of English. With so many people communicating in English every day,it will become more and more important to have a good knowledge of English.,With+宾语+宾语补足语 （doing/done/adj/to do/adv）,1.Because he has a lot of ho
7、mework to do, he doesnt watch TV. 2.Mr.li came into the classroom, he has a book in his hand. 3.The farmer sleeps, and his window is open.,With+宾语+宾语补足语 （doing/done/adj/to do/adv）,With a lot of homework to do,with a book in his hand,with his window open.,3.If you study hard, you will make great prog
8、ress.,Study hard and youll make great progress.,祈使句+and/or+陈述句（陈述句要用将来时态）,4. I was late for school because I got up late.,The reason whyis that,The reason why I was late for school was that I got up late.,5. He did not know what had happened until he had read the news in the newspaper. It is/was tha
9、t （强调句） It was not until he had read the news in the newspaper that he knew what had happened.,6. You would cherish it more only after you lost it. Only +状语+部分倒装Only after you lost it would you cherish it more.,四、通过合句，将意义相关的句子用一定的连接方式连接起来，或通过收缩，去掉一些多余的成分、或无意义的重复，避免冗长累赘，松散无力，以增强句子的连贯性，达到更好的表达效果。,The
10、school is surrounded by many green trees.It looks very beautiful.,The school surrounded by many green trees looks very beautiful.,The school looks very beautiful with many green trees surrounding it.,有效地使用过渡性词汇。,完成句子 1. _(据我所知), everyone is happy about this new arrangement of things. 2. _(就拿北京来说吧).
11、It is one of the oldest cities in the world. 3. _(总之), lets greet every day with a smile.,In short / In a word,Take Beijing for example,As far as I know,4. There are many advantages of smiling. It can _make us happy, _ please others.5. Li Ming used to be a healthy boy, _ over a year ago, he got into
12、 the habit of eating a lot of junk food and snacks. _, he spent a lot of time lying on the sofa, watching TV, and did little exercise. _, he put on so much weight that he found it difficult to climb the stairs.,As a result,not only,but also,but,Besides,6. I think it is a kind or win-win activity. _,
13、 I can help take care of the children. _ , I can improve my English, make more friends, and enrich my life during the summer vacation.,For another thing,For one thing,7. ,Cellphone is popular among teenagers. , Cellphone makes it possible for teenagers to talk with their family. , Cellphone makes te
14、enagers feel cool.,As we all know,On the one hand,On the other hand,I think the Internet is helpful not harmful as someone else thinks. We all know that the Internet is very important in our daily life. On the Internet, we can read news and get much information. We can send E-mails or make phone cal
15、ls to our family. And we can attend the net school, read many books and even teach ourselves English. ,In my opinion,rather than,As we all know,is playing,a more and more important role,Use better phrases to replace the common ones.,Practice Improve the passage,not only,but also,Besides,但是值得提醒的是，同学们在使用复杂的句型和结构时，要有把握能正确地表达；也要注意分寸，应根据书面表达的内容和篇章结构而定，做到地道得体，千万不能生搬硬套，画蛇添足。,多看 多背 多模仿 多翻译,Homework,人生难免经历失败，但吃一堑，长一智。请用英语写一篇100120 词的短文，描述一次在你生活中令你印象深刻的失败，并略加评论。,
