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1、六年级数学上册课件-比的基本性质和化简比江苏省连云港市田家炳中学高一生物现代生物进化理论的主要内容课件八一建军节主题教育活动PPT模板军队国防改革强军梦学习书面表达专题讲座假设你是李华,在一所中学读 书。最近收到美国朋友Smith先生的 来信.他三 年前参观过你校,听说现 在变化很大,希望了解有关情况。 参照下图,给他写封回信,介绍你 校的变化。注意 :1,回信须包括图画的主要 内容,可适当增减细节,使内容连 贯。 2,词数100左右。书书 面面 表表 达达三年前三年前现在现在原操场新操场旧教学楼旧教学楼图书馆新教学楼六年级数学上册课件-比的基本性质和化简比江苏省连云港市田家炳中学高一生物现代
2、生物进化理论的主要内容课件八一建军节主题教育活动PPT模板军队国防改革强军梦学习Dear Mr Smith Im very happy to hear from your letter ,Lets tell you the new school.Our school happened great change.An new labrary build in the three years ago.A new classroom building was built at other side of road. Our new playgroud out the school.At last w
3、e planted many trees. That all, thank you.8高考书面表达评分原则第二挡(较差)(6-10分) 未恰当完成试题规定的任务* 漏掉或未描述清楚一些主要内容* 语法结构单调,词汇项目有限* 有语法或词汇错误,影响了对内容的理解* 较少使用语句间的连接词,内容缺少连贯性,8 六年级数学上册课件-比的基本性质和化简比江苏省连云港市田家炳中学高一生物现代生物进化理论的主要内容课件八一建军节主题教育活动PPT模板军队国防改革强军梦学习三年前三年前现在现在原操场新操场旧教学楼旧教学楼图书馆新教学楼1 . Whats the form of your writing?1
4、 . Whats the form of your writing?六年级数学上册课件-比的基本性质和化简比江苏省连云港市田家炳中学高一生物现代生物进化理论的主要内容课件八一建军节主题教育活动PPT模板军队国防改革强军梦学习自己的地址日期对方的地址称呼正文签名六年级数学上册课件-比的基本性质和化简比江苏省连云港市田家炳中学高一生物现代生物进化理论的主要内容课件八一建军节主题教育活动PPT模板军队国防改革强军梦学习称呼正文签名三年前三年前现在现在原操场新操场旧教学楼旧教学楼图书馆新教学楼3, What are the major contents?3, What are the major co
5、ntents?2. Whats the main tense ?2. Whats the main tense ?六年级数学上册课件-比的基本性质和化简比江苏省连云港市田家炳中学高一生物现代生物进化理论的主要内容课件八一建军节主题教育活动PPT模板军队国防改革强军梦学习此封信所涉及到的 一般过去时 一般现在时 现在完成时 被动语态 主要时态:主要内容新旧操场的位置 新教学楼的位置 新图书馆的位置 树三年前三年前现在现在原操场新操场旧教学楼旧教学楼图书馆新教学楼4 . Whatre the phrases On the other side,where the playground used t
6、o be, stands another new building-our library. The playground is now in front of the school .We have also planted a lot of trees in and round the school. I hope that you will be able to return and see the changes for yourself someday.Best wishes, 高考书面表达评分原则第五挡(好)(21-25 分) 完全完成了试题规定的任务* 覆盖所有主要内容* 语法结
7、构和词汇能满足任务要求* 语法或词汇应用基本准确,有些许错误但主 要是尝试较复杂语法结构或词汇所致,* 应用简单的语句间的连接词, 使全文紧凑,22精精确确词词的的使使用用范范例例1. He will be arriving soon . 1. He will be arriving soon . He will be arriving He will be arriving prettypretty soon . soon .2. They poured the waste water into the 2. They poured the waste water into the rive
8、r .river . They poured the waste water They poured the waste water directlydirectly into the river . into the river .3. He got angry .3. He got angry . He got He got a little bita little bit angry . angry .4. I dont understand . 4. I dont understand . I dont I dont quitequite understand . understand
9、 .高高级级词词的的使使用用范范例例1. If you have any problems , 1. If you have any problems , you can you can shout outshout out . . If you have any problems , If you have any problems , just yelljust yell . . 2. They planted trees 2. They planted trees around the schoolaround the school . . They planted trees They
10、 planted trees throughout the throughout the campuscampus . . 3. The police 3. The police treatedtreated the whites the whites better better thanthan the blacks. the blacks. The police The police favoredfavored the white the white overover the the black.black. 4. “What are they doing ?” he 4. “What
11、are they doing ?” he thoughtthought . . “What are they doing ?” he “What are they doing ?” he figured figured . .六年级数学上册课件-比的基本性质和化简比江苏省连云港市田家炳中学高一生物现代生物进化理论的主要内容课件八一建军节主题教育活动PPT模板军队国防改革强军梦学习 Dear SmithLi HuaYours24I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my schoo
12、l. Youre right. Remarkable changes have taken place since you last visited. On one side of the road is a new classroom building; On the other side ,where the track used to be, stands another new building-our library. The playground is located right in front of the school . In addition , we have plan
13、ted a lot of trees in and round the school. I hope that you will be able to return and see the changes for yourself someday.Best wishes, 24高考书面表达评分原则第五挡(很好)(21-25 分) 完全完成了试题规定的任务* 覆盖所有主要内容* 应用了较多语法结构和词汇* 语法结构或词汇方面有些许错误。但为尽量使用较复杂结构或高级词汇所致;具有较强的语言应用能力 * 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分,使全文紧凑,完全达到了预期的写作目的高考书面表达评分原则* 词数少于80和多于120的,从总分中减去2分。* 如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。25六年级数学上册课件-比的基本性质和化简比江苏省连云港市田家炳中学高一生物现代生物进化理论的主要内容课件八一建军节主题教育活动PPT模板军队国防改革强军梦学习Homework