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1、Successs ahead!决胜高考专项训练：写作训练Successs ahead!决胜高考专项训练：Basic Writing文体和出题方式：应用文：书信、通知、日记、调查报告出题方式：文字类、表格类、图画类、图表类文体和出题方式：应用文：书信、通知、日记、调查报告出题方式：文字类、表格类、图画类、图表类制胜法宝：写作四步骤 1.审题：文体、人称、时态等 2.分解组合信息：确定5个句子 解决单词、词组谋划句型 3.成文：加入承接词和承上启下的句子 4.誊写：修正细节错误（大小写，名词单 复数等）偶像（idol）女生男生 伟 人18%18%父 母25%11% 影视明星50%14% 体育明星6
2、%48% 没有偶像1%9%根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容：1调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象；2男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异；3“父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异；4男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同；5你的偶像及理由。（07广东）上周，我们以“谁是你的偶像”为题，在2600名学生中 进行了一次调查（survey）。以下是调查数据：难点预测：1）如何正确表达百分数？2）如何表达比较、对比？3）如何使文章连贯流畅？难点解析：一、如何正确表达百分数？男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异1）50%的女生把影视明星当作偶像。2）48%的男生更喜欢体育明星。50% of the girls choose f
3、ilm and TV stars as idols.Half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols.One second of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols.48% of the boys prefer sports stars.难点解析：一、如何正确表达百分数？男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异1）50%的女生把影视明星当作偶像。2）48%的男生更喜欢体育明星。50% of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols.Half of the
4、 girls choose film and TV stars as idols. One second of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols.48% of the boys prefer sports stars.难点解析： 二、如何表达比较、对比？1、男女生在以明星为偶像方面的差异Half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols.48% of the boys prefer sports stars.Half of the girls choose film and TV star
5、s as idols, _ 48% of the boys prefer sports stars.while难点解析： 二、如何表达比较、对比？2、“父母”在男女生偶像中的排序差异。“Parents” ranks the second for the girls.“Parents” ranks the fourth for the boys. “Parents” ranks the second for the girls, _ “parents” ranks the fourth for the boys.“Parents” ranks the second for the girls;_
6、, “parents” ranks the fourth for the boys.buthowever难点解析： 二、如何表达比较、对比？3、男女生在以伟人为偶像方面的异同。“男生和女生以伟人为偶像的比例一样多。 ”The percentage of the girls who choose “great figures” is _ _.the same as(boys that of the boys)that of the boys难点解析： 三、如何使你的文章连贯流畅？慧眼识珠： Last week , we did a survey among 2,600 students, the
7、 topic of which was “ who is your idol”. The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols , while 48% of the boys figure sports stars. As the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls , but it is the fourth that “parents” ranks for the boys. However, the percentag
8、e of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls. As for myself, Hellen Keller is my idol because hardly can I imagine how she overcame her disabled obstacles to become a successful person in the world.承上启下的词句一：1、The survey shows that2、As the data shows,3、According to the data
9、,4、From the survey we can draw a conclusion that5、Judging from the data,承上启下的词句二：As for myself, Hellen Keller is my idol because hardly can I imagine how she overcame her disabled obstacles to become a successful person in the world.In my eyes,Personally (speaking), As far as Im concerned, From my p
10、oint of view, 慧眼识珠： Last week , we did a survey among 2,600 students, the topic of which was “ who is your idol”. The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols , while 48% of the boys figure sports stars. As the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls , but i
11、t is the fourth that “parents” ranks for the boys. However, the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls. As for myself, Hellen Keller is my idol because hardly can I imagine how she overcame her disabled obstacles to become a successful person in the world.定从
12、强调句非谓语倒装慧眼识珠： Last week , we did a survey among 2,600 students, the topic of which was “ who is your idol”. The survey shows that half of the girls choose film and TV stars as idols , while 48% of the boys figure sports stars. As the data shows, “parents” ranks the second for the girls , but it is t
13、he fourth that “parents” ranks for the boys. However, the percentage of the boys choosing “great figures” is the same as that of the girls. As for myself, Hellen Keller is my idol because hardly can I imagine how she overcame her disabled obstacles to become a successful person in the world.实战演练：上周末
14、，我们以“你的业余爱好是什么”为题 ， 在高中1500名学生中进行了一次调查。以下是调查数据：爱爱好(hobby)女生男生 旅 游8%8% 阅阅 读读25%11% 体育运动动12%60% 音 乐乐48%20% 没有爱爱好7%1%根据以上数据，写一篇短文，包括以下内容：1调查时间、调查问题以及调查对象；2男女生在以体育运动为爱好方面的差异；3阅读在男女生爱好中的排序差异；4男女生在以旅游为爱好方面的异同；5你的爱好及理由。Successs ahead!决胜高考系列之 ：Reading and Writing文体主题句支撑句议论文记叙文说明文Step 1. 概括：主题句+支撑句文体主题句支撑句议论
15、文文章论点 （一句）文章论据 （两三句） 记叙文 故事的写作目的 或主题（一句）故事大意:六要 素(两三句） 说明文 说明的对象、观 点或现象等解释或分述Step 1. 概括：主题句+支撑句Step 1. Find out the key words and sentences:In the past, a “good student” referred to one only good at study. For example, what the school cared about was how well a student did in his school subjects. It did not matter whether a student had good health or not as long as he got the top marks. Therefore, many students showed little interest in anything else. Nowadays, under the new marketing system, students have different opinions about the aim of study. Some hold that entering a go
