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1、江苏省石庄高级中学07届高考书面表达专题讲与练江苏省石庄高级中学 秦建华就漫画主题发表感想 随着高考英语的改革，英语作文的命题 更具有开放性。就漫画主题发表感想是 开放式作文的一种,它通过漫画只给出主 题或两三点提示，感想则由考生去发挥 、构思。考生的思路是不同的，写出来 的文章当然不会是一样的，此类型的书 面表达只有在描述漫画所反映的内容时 可以给出参考范文。除此之外就漫画主 题发表的感想只能是仁者见仁,智者见智 了。怎么写这种类型的书面表达，我们 通过实例探讨如下。 例题： 目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费而 只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有效 的医疗保障体制。请
2、根据下面图画，以“Health Care” 为题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容，重点 阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。 第一步：描述图所反映的内容 仔细审图，挖掘要点： 从图中的another heart attack我们可以推 断： 老大爷因患心脏病到医院看病，医药费 50，000美元。 费用超过了老大爷的承受能力，看到帐 单，老大爷非常震惊，差点跌倒在地。 这无疑对大爷来说又是一次心脏病。 搜索表达的词组或句型 ： suffer from/be seized with heart trouble/attack go to hospital for medical care a
3、medical bill with $5,0000 from the hospital beyond whatcould afford be astonished/shocked cant stand on ones feet another attrack for sb 扩展成句成文： From the picture, we can see that the old man was suffering from heart trouble. He had to go to hospital for medical care. When he saw the medical bill wit
4、h $5,0000 from the hospital, he was so shocked that he couldnt stand on his feet. It was beyond what he could affordIts really another heart attack for him. 第二步：围绕图中所反映的内容阐述这 种现象所带来的后果和观点： 结合题中的文字说明进行联想： 后果 可以考虑：现在医疗费如此昂贵，许多 人付的得起吗？ 付不起又要看病怎么办？ 付债 借不到钱又怎么办？其结果是： 不得不忍受疾病的痛苦，等待生命的结 束等等。 自己的观点： 根据现象所带来
5、的后果去阐述 呼吁采取措施降低医疗费; 建立医疗保障制度; 积极探索和发展新的医疗和保健模式; 第三步：译出以上要点 At present, many people cant afford heavy medical fees. They may get into deep debt in order to get proper medical care . If they cant borrow any money,they have to bear the pain of diseases. They have to wait for the last day of their life.
6、 We strongly call for the medical expenses to be reduced Medical insurance system should be built up. We should explore and develop a new health care. 第四步：将上述要点连贯成文 At present, many people cant afford heavy medical fees. Because of this, they may get into deep debt in order to get proper medical car
7、e . Worse still, some cannot borrow any money so they have to bear the pain of diseases or wait for the last day of their life.What a pity! We strongly call for the medical expenses to be reduced The government should build up medical insurance system ,and try its best to explore and develop a new h
8、ealth care . 第五步:加上结束语成文 Health CareFrom the picture, we can see that the old man was suffering from heart trouble. He had to go to hospital for medical care. When he saw the medical bill with $5,0000 from the hospital, he was so shocked that he couldnt stand on his feet. It was beyond what he could
9、 affordIts really another heart attack for him. At present, many people cant afford heavy medical fees. Because of this, they may get into deep debt in order to get proper medical care . Worse still, some cannot borrow any money so they have to bear the pain of diseases or wait for the last day of t
10、heir life.What a pity! We strongly call for the medical expenses to be reducedThe government should build up medical insurance system ,and tey its best to explore and develop a new health care so that everyone will be able to enjoy their life as long as possible. 配套练习： 一 请用英语写一篇120词以上的短文，简要描述漫画内容，并结
11、合生 活实际，就漫画主题发表感想，题目自拟。 参考词汇：油灯lamp象征symbolLove is lamp In the picture, an oil lamp gives out bright flame against the dark background. The oil lamp here is a symbol of love. Just as is said in the picture, love is a lamp; the darker the background is, the brighter it looks. It is true that the harde
12、r the situation is, the more valuable love is. Lots of examples might be easily given. For example, when someone is starving to death just a little food and water may save his or her life. When a little girl in a poor area drops out of school, Just a small sum of money from you may support her to fi
13、nish school and change her life. In a word, we should offer our help to the persons in need. I believe that if every one of us can give love to others, the relationship between people will be harmonious and our society will be a better place for us to live in. 二 根据下面图中的相关信息写一篇以“成才之路”为题的 短文。注意：1词数100
14、左右; 2可以适当增减细节，以使行文连贯; 3开头语已为你写好。 It is known to us all that behind success are stories full of tears and pains。The Road to Success One Possible Version It is known to us all that behind success are stories full of tears and painsAs it is depicted in the cartoon, a small child is driven to play the p
15、iano The child is nervous, reluctant and unhappy, but he has to do what he doesnt want to because his parents have whips in their hands and even the teacher also has oneIt is a long way to gain successEvery child has the right to enjoy a happy-go-lucky childhoodUnder such a circumstance of China nowadays, all the children face the painful road to successOn the one hand, we want to live a happy life in the future, we have to study hardThere is much truth in the saying: “No pains, no gains” On the other hand, is it really worthwhile to gain so-called fame at the cost of th
