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1、 写作的用词和造句 Date1Lecture用词的标准1)忌用口语词 e.g. “You know”, “Well”, “gonna”2）忌用生僻词Date2Lecture闪光词的基本标准1）准确Context(上下文) e.g. commit crimeConnotation(内涵) e.g. 30%discountCollocation(搭配) e.g. apply to/forCulture(文化) e.g. dogDate3Lecture闪光词的基本标准2）多样 e.g. a big/great/sharp increaseDate4Lecture准确、多样E.g. a good ma
2、n: kind, honest, generous, brave, warm-hearted, sympathetic, selfless good food: tasty, nourishing, rich, fresh, appetizing, abundant, deliciousDate5Lecture词汇选择-Tips1)考试中一般不要出现good, bad , many, thing, think, people, opinion 等等。2)一定要学会换词，用形象，具体的词替换太宽 泛的。 Date6Lecture用词造句-多样化(1) The goats grazed peace
3、fully in the farm and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (并列分句1+2) (2) Grazing peacefully, the goats in the farm were unaware of the approaching hunter. (现在分语短语+ 简单句) (3) In the farm, the goats grazed peacefully and were unaware of the approaching hunter. (副词短语+并列 分句(1)-(2) ) (4) There were goa
4、ts grazing peacefully in the farm, unaware of the approaching hunter. (简单句+形容语 短语) (5) As the goats grazed peacefully in the farm, they were unaware of the approaching hunter. (原因副词从句+ 主句) Date7Lecture用词造句-多样化(1) The young pilot was on his first overseas training. (2) He felt very uneasy. (a) The yo
5、ung pilot on his first overseas training felt very uneasy. (b) The young pilot felt very uneasy during his first overseas training. (c) The young pilots first overseas training made him feel very uneasy. (d) Extreme uneasiness seized the young pilot on his first overseas training. (e) The young pilo
6、t was on his first overseas training, feeling very uneasy. (f) It being his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy. Date8Lecture用词造句-多样化(g) Being on his first overseas training, the young pilot felt very uneasy. (h) The young pilot was on his first overseas training and felt very
7、uneasy. (i) The young pilot, who was on his first overseas training, felt very uneasy. (j) When the young pilot was on his/first overseas training, he felt very uneasy. (k) As the young pilot was on his first overseas training, he felt very uneasy. (l) The young pilot was on his first overseas train
8、ing, so that he felt very uneasy. Date9Lecture闪光句之基本句型l简单句l并列句l主从复合句Date10Lecture主语从句E.g. 1) They need more help in English. 2) That is quite obvious. 可改为： It is quite obvious they need more help in English.Date11Lecture同位语从句E.g. 1) He works hard. 2）The fact does not necessarily mean that he is a co
9、mpetent leader. 可改为：The fact that he works hard does not necessarily mean that he is a competent leader.Date12Lecture定语从句E.g. 1) He sent her a letter. 2）In the letter he said that he was sorry for what he had done to her. 可改为： He sent her a letter，in which he said that he was sorry for what he had d
10、one to her. Date13Lecture复杂的简单句-with结构E.g. As the pace of change is quickening, more and more scientists find it hard to keep up with the latest developments even in their own disciplines.Date14Lecture复杂的简单句-with结构可改为：With the pace of change quickening, more and more scientists find it hard to keep
11、up with the latest developments even in their own disciplines.Date15Lecture复杂的简单句-分词结构E.g.Teenagers are pressured by school work. They are also encouraged by their peers. Under such circumstances, they resort to smoking.Date16Lecture复杂的简单句-分词结构可改为：Pressured by school work and encouraged by their pee
12、rs, teenagers resort to smoking.Date17Lecture倒装句否定词位于句首时 e.g. I have never been to Europe. 可改为： Never have I been to Europe.Date18Lecture倒装句only引出的状语位于句首时 e.g. The doctor realized only then that his patient needed surgery. 可改为： Only then did the doctor realized that his patient needed surgery.Date19
13、Lecture被动句e.g. We should take effective measures to stop various forms of pollution.可改为：Effective measures should be taken to stop various forms of pollution.Date20Lecture强调句e.g. Ah Fu saved my sister.(一般句式) 可改为： It was Ah Fu who saved my sister.(强调句式)Date21LectureAssignmentDirections: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic Is it Necessary to Attend Training Classes? You should write at least 150 words, and base your composition on the outline (given in Chinese) below:l现在社会上有各种各样的培训班l有些人认为有必要参加课外培训班，有些人则认为没有 必要l你的观点Date22Lecture
