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1、 书面表达（1）：根据下面的表格以“How to Reduce the Citys Present population”为题，写一篇作文，谈谈你对这个问题的见解注意：1。只需把表格中的要点写清楚。短文的开头与结尾已写 出，不记入总数。 2。词数：100-120。参考词汇：政策 policy ； 压力 pressure ； 郊区 suburb ； 生活小区 living block ； Our city is too crowded now, and to solve this problem , three proposals are put forward - - - 正文- - -If
2、these proposals are well carried out , the citys population will be greatly reduced . 建议具体措施目的I。A。晚婚 B。一对夫妇，一个孩 子减少人口自然增长（人 口出生率）II。严格控制外地人口进城 务工经商减少外地人口对城市的 压力III。 在郊区建立便于生活、 集学校、电影院、医院 、购物中心于一体的生 活小区吸引城市居民到郊区的 生活小区工作和生活答案： How to Reduce the Citys Present population Our modern city is too crowded ,
3、 and to solve the problem , three proposals are put forward . Most people believe that we should first practice the policy of late marriage and “ One couple, one child” in order to reduce the birth rate. Secondly, the city government mush have a tight control of country people entering cities to eng
4、age in trade or do manual labor so as to reduce the pressure on the city caused by the increasing population . Finally more and more people suggest that living blocks with shopping centers ,schools , hospitals, cinemas and theatres should be in the suburbs . In this way the city people will be encou
5、raged to move there to live and work . If these proposals are well carried out, the citys population will be greatly reduced. 书面表达（2）假如你是李欣，对和“All right”的 “Thats all right”用法及区别不太清楚，你的英语老 师给你作了简单的讲解，还鼓励你向英文 报纸的外籍编辑(editor)写信问这个问题。 现在，请你用用语向某一英语报纸的编辑 写一封信，询问和的用法和区别，并请他 举例说明。最后问他是否有空来学校作英 语讲座，谈谈如何学好英语
6、。注意：1）不要逐条翻译 2）注意书信格式 3）词数：100-120。答案：Dear editor, My name is LI Xin. Im a middle school student . I wonder if I can ask you a question . My teacher told me that there was something different in meaning between the two sentences “All right” and “Thats all right”. But I cant understand them very well
7、. Would you please tell me the difference between them in simple English ?And I also hope that you will give me some examples. By the way , would you be kind enough to come to our school to give us a lecture o how to learn English well? Wish to get your reply soon. Yours truly Li Xin 书面表达（3）假如你是学校学生
8、会主席。现请按下列要求， 以学生会的名义用英文写一个举行英语演讲比 赛的书面/口头通知，欢迎全体同学参加。1）目的；诣在提高全体学生的英语口语水平 。2）报名时间与地点；星期五，六月四日前， 学生会办公室3）比赛时间和地点：下周三晚7：00-10：30 学生礼堂4）在本校工作的加拿大老师格林先生和五位 本校英语老师将被邀请当评委，前六名优胜者 或奖。5）字数：100-120答案（3） Notice In order to improve our spoken English, we are going to have an English-speaking contest from 7:00
9、to 10:30 p.m. next Wednesday in the school auditorium. Mr. Green , who came from Canada and now works in our school, together with five English teachers will be invited as judges.The first six winners will be given rewards . Those who would like to take part in the contest may sign up in the office
10、of the Students Union , before this Friday , June 4th. All the students are welcome to the contest .May 30th , 1998. the Students Union答案： All the students,may I have your attention please? Our Students Union are going to organize a - in order to -in -. Mr. Green -together with -. The first six winn
11、ers -.Those who will-should -in -before -. Thank you for all your attention! The Weak Are the Slaves of the Strong An old man was sitting in an armchair at home , reading his newspaper. Besides him lay a dog sleeping soundly . Suddenly the old man decided to leave home for a while , but he could not
12、 go out with his slippers on . So he woke up the dog and let it fetch the shoes for him . Out of his expectation, the dog didnt even stand up , but just barked with two eyes closed again. The old man was completely puzzled .As he was wondering what was happening , he saw the cat coming towards him w
13、ith the pairs of shoes in its month. Seeing this , he was totally dumbfounded. Is this the law that the weak are the slaves of the strong? 书面表达：评分原则以及给分范围第七档： （25-29）能写明全部或绝大部分 要点；语言基本无误；行文连贯，表达清楚。第六档： （20-24）能写明全部或绝大部分 要点；语言有少量错误；行文基本连贯，表达 基本清楚。第五档： （16-19）能写明大部分要点；语 言有一些错误，行文不够连贯。第四档： （12-15） 能写明基
14、本要点；语言 虽然有许多错误，尚能达意第三档： （8-11）能写出部分要点语言错误 多，影响意思表达。第二档： （4-7）只能写出一两个要点，语 言错误教多，只有个别句子能懂第一档： （0-3）只能写出与所给要求内容 有关的一些单词。内容要点：1）老人在家，坐在椅子上，看报，狗在 旁边睡觉。2）老人想出去，唤醒狗，去拿鞋3）狗闭眼叫，老人迷惑不解4）猫叼鞋走来，老人目瞪口呆注：内容要点可用不同的方式来表达， 对紧扣主题的发挥不扣分。99年高考英语作文评分原则 ：1）本题总分为30分，其中内容和语言占 29分，词数占1分，按七个档次给分。2）平分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初 步确定其所属档次，然
15、后以该档次的要求 来衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。词 数在90-110之间的，加1分。内容要点：1）开头语 2）结束语3）盖起了一幢新教学楼4）新建了一座图书馆5）新操场位于学校前面 6）种了许多树99高考作文答案 ：Dear Mr. Smith, I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school. Quite a few changes have taken place. On one side of the road there is a new classroom building . One the other sid
