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1、 Usain BoltBorn 8,21, 1986 Jamaica,1.96 meters ,hard- working, love ,determined, In 2008, at the Beijing Olympic Games, broke In 2009, in the World Championship ,Now,Usain BoltUsain Bolt was born on August 21st, 1986 in Jamaica. He is 1.96 meters tall and he is hard-working, full of love and determi
2、ned. In 2008, at the Beijing Olympic Games he broke the 100-meter and 200-meter world records. In 2009, in the World Championship he broke his own world records for the 100- meter and 200-meter races again. Now he is working hard to realize his dream to break more world records.审题的步骤、 、 、 、 、文体主体时态人
3、称信息点整合不要打草稿，但应有提纲人物介绍三段论1.主题段 -开头段Birthday , birthplace and family background 2.拓展段-中间段Appearance, qualities, interest /hobbies, education ,big events in ones life 3.总结段-结尾段 evaluation对人物做出综合性的评价。人物简介的一般步骤： Give the right order( )教育：education ( )外貌性格appearance ,character( )生平big events in his or her
4、 life ( in order of time )( )评估evaluation( )概况age, sex, birth-place, background概况,外貌,教育,生平, 评估 A. 概况 : 译：钟南山年出生在广州，他是中 国最伟大的医生之一. 1) Zhong Nanshan was born in Guangzhou in 1941 and he is one of the greatest doctors in China. 1) Zhong Nanshan ,born in Guangzhou in 1941, is one of the greatest doctors
5、 in China. 2)Zhong Nanshan, one of the greatest doctors in China, was born in Guangzhou in 1941.语法，句法高分tips 可以用分词短语,同位语结构,使文章简洁,通顺1.A. 概况 :语法，句法高分tips可以用分词短语,同位语结构,使文章简洁,通顺译：费孝通，我国著名的社会学家和社会活动 家，年月日生于一富裕家庭 年月日因病逝于北京Born in a well-off family on November 2,1910, Fei Xiaotong, a famous Chinese Sociolog
6、ist and active social worker, passed away for illness in Beijing on April 24, 2005 .B.外貌,性格:译：我的历史老师是个漂亮女人，她长着 两只大眼睛，留着长发.My history teacher is a beautiful woman who has two big eyes and long hair.My history teacher is a beautiful woman with two big eyes and long hair.巧用with做定语C. 教育经历：可以用非谓语动词, 使文章精
7、炼After she had graduated from the English department of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctors degree. Having graduated from the English department of Zhongshan University, she went on further education and received a doctors degree.1.在中山大学英语系毕业后,她继续学习, 获得了博士学位.D生
8、平：可以用复合句倒装,非限定定语从句 等，润色文章Not only is he interested in science, but also he has a gift for music.He set a new world record of swimming, which won a gold medal for China Team.1.他对科学极有兴趣,也有音乐天赋.2. 他创了一个新的游泳记录,为中国队赢得了一 块金牌.E评估：注意运用一些动词、形容词等短语、词组Lishizhen made great contributions to Medical literature.Le
9、ifeng set us a good example ,so all the people speak highly of him and all respect him .1. 雷锋给我们树立了一个良好的榜样,我们都 很敬重他.2. 李时珍为医学做出了巨大的贡献.话题词汇，词组，句型： 外貌： good-looking相貌英俊的，funning-looking外表可笑的， ugly-looking丑陋的， ordinary-looking外貌平平的， white-haired白头发的，near/far-sighted 近/远视的， charming有魅力的, 时尚的fashionable,
10、 苗条slim 性格气质： kind-hearted好心的， warm-hearted 热心的， absent-minded 心不在焉的，bad-tempered 坏脾气的，a strong will很强的意志力，naughty 淘气的， smart/bright 聪明的， wise睿智的，diligent 勤奋的， humorous 幽默的， attractive 有魅力的， talkative能说会道的，confident 有信心的， independent 独立的，patient 有耐心的 生日、出生地、年龄 , (who was) born in , is a , a , is a w
11、ith a height of and a weight of 家庭背景： was born in/ into a poor/rich family出生在贫穷的/富裕的家庭 as a child of years old, he还是个岁的孩子时 spend his childhood in 在度过了他的童年 live a happy/hard life 生活很幸福/艰苦 教育背景： be admitted to university考取大学 graduate from department of university 从某大学某系毕业 receive/get a doctors degree
12、获取博士学位 主要事迹： serve as做某种工作 devote oneself /ones effort to/ be devoted to一生致力于 concentrate /apply oneself to 专注于 make up ones mind to do/be determined to do决心做 have a gift for / be gifted in 有的天赋成就： 1. one of the best/most important最好的/重要的之一 2. set a example to为树立榜样 3. be honoured as被授予；win the prize
13、 获得荣誉 4. make great contribution to为作出巨大贡献根据下表内容写一篇120词左右的英语短 文介绍美国总统奥巴马。提示：1.文体2.分段3.时态4.人称5.信息点整合姓名Barack Obama 出生时间 1961年8月4日 出生地点 Honolulu, Hawaii 家庭父亲是肯尼亚黑人， 母亲是美国白人 梦想当总统 教育1988年考入（ Harvard Law School), 1991年博士学院 职业毕业后当律师， 大学讲师，后来一直从 政。 2008年11月4日， 在大选（ 他（ the general election)中击败（ John McCain
14、), 成为首位黑人总统 评价Obama的成功极大地激励了非裔美国人 。subject 主语predicate 谓语object 宾语attribute 定语adverbial 状语complement 补语predicative 表语appositive 同位语 C clause 从句Short forms 缩略语P.S. O.Att Advcom pre appBarack Obama , the son of a black father from Kenya and a white American mother, was born in Honolulu, Hawaii on Augu
15、st 4th, 1961.S. P.appAdv When he was only a small a boy, he dreamt of becoming the President ofthe United States.= In his childhood,/ As a small boy, he had a great dream that he would become the President of the United States.S. P.O.Adv.c In 1988, he was admitted into Harvard Law School , where he gained his doctors degree in 1991.=In 1988, he was admitted into Harvard Law School and he
