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1、高考复习-书面表达评析及指导If you are the teacher假定你是李华, 你的英国朋友Peter来信询问你的 英语学习情况并希望你简单介绍自己家乡，请你根据 下列要点写回信。 要点: 1. 我学英语已经六年了，在老师和同学们的帮助下 取得了一些进步； 2. 但是总觉得英语难学，尤其是英语中的一些习惯 用法； 3. 今后一定要努力学习这门有用的外语，争取能用 流利的英语和你写信； 4. 我的家乡发生很大的变化，盖起了许多高楼，拓 宽了道路，变得越来越漂亮和现代化； 5. 如果有时间可以到中国来，我会带领你参观我的 家乡。注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文
2、连贯； 3. 开头语已为你写好。June 8, 2008 Dear Peter,Im very glad to receive your letter. I will tell you something about my English study and hometown. .字数不够或未能传达读者任何信息，不得分。 samples of student workBad sample卷面不整洁; 涂改较多;语言错误多;层 次不清;得11分samples of student workread and writefind it hardfluent English to write Grea
3、t changesroadshad taken place in my hometownbuildingswidenedIt will be wonderful when you come to China if you are freeshow you aroundI will be glad to语言不地道;中文式思维;语言错误较多，得分13分samples of student worklearnof the teachers and myprogressread and writeit hard to learnhard work.write letters in fluent Eng
4、lishfoundhad becomeWelcome to China if you have time show you around 语言素质 较好;基本功不差;语句仍有毛病；得15分.samples of student workprogresswellwidenedare词汇有错误;卷面有涂改;得19分.samples of student workroadsMy hometown is becoming more and more影响书面表达得分的因素：“大错误”包括时态错误、句子结构错误、中式 英语等，如： 1.My hometown had big change, build m
5、any houses, 2. My hometown has great changes. 1.语言表达出现“大错误”及“小错误” Great changes had taken place in my hometown there. For example, many new houses had been built and roads had been widened.3. If you get to China that have time, me with you look my hometown.4. I will welcome to you.“小错误”主要是反应在个别单词拼写错
6、误、冠 词介词使用不准确等方面,如：Under my teacher and classmates all help to me ,.I hope youl l get a chance to come to China and Ill show you around my hometown if you are free .Welcome to China.With the help of my teachers and classmates,没有使用高级词汇和复杂句1. I will visit my hometown with you.2. If you have time, I wil
7、l take you to travel around my hometown. I will show you around my hometown if you are free.书写是否工整清晰也会影响答卷得分。卷面不整洁，涂改多；大小写;标点符号;书写不清，得分会很低！ 审题不认真，要点有所遗漏1. 彻底理解题意，看准答题要求（ 包括字数要求）。2. 把内容要点在稿纸上列成提纲。3. 连词成句，连句成文。4.成文后认真检查，确信无一遗漏 。注意： 完全完成了试题规定的任务，覆盖 所有内容要点。 应用了较多的语法结构和词汇。 语法结构和词汇方面有些错误，但 为尽力使用较复杂结构或较高级词
8、汇 所致；具备较强的语言运用能力。 有效地使用了语句间的连接成分， 使全文结构紧凑。书面表达评分最高标准（第五档 21-25分）One possible version: June 8, 2008 Dear Peter,Im very glad to receive your letter. I will tell you something about my English study and hometown. It is six years since I began to learn English. With the help of my teachers and classmate
9、s, I have made some progress in English. However I still find English hard to learn, such as some difficult idioms which made me confused. No matter how hard it is, I have made up my mind to master this useful language by my hard work.Not long ago I returned to my hometown and found great changes ha
10、d taken place there. Many new houses had been built and roads had been widened. My hometown is getting modern and more and more beautiful. I hope if you have a chance to come to China and I ll show you around my hometown when you are on leave.Best wishes, Li Hua My Suggestions: 1. beautiful words an
11、d expressions 2. proper sentence structures 3. connections between sentences 4. proper complex sentences 5. writing modelsSix steps for writing (写作六步骤）1. Cross-question(审题) Main idea Style Verb tense Person2. Seize the major points /key words (抓要点)3.Arrangement(布局) ！4. Sentences connection(连句)Words/
12、phrases Sentences6. Error correcting( 查错改错)5. Express your opinion (发表观点）Conjunctions/ conjunctive adverbssentencespassageDear SmithLi HuaYours22I was so pleased to hear from you and am writing to tell you something about my school. Youre right. Quite a few changes have taken place in our school . O
13、n one side of the road is a new teaching building; On the other side,where the playground used to be, stands another new building-our library. The playground is now in front of the school .We have also planted a lot of trees in and round the school. I hope that you will be able to return and see the
14、 changes for yourself someday.Best wishes, 技 巧1. 使用较高级的词汇3. 使用恰当的连接词词汇反映你知识贮存量的 多少，也是衡量英语水平 的一个重要标志。运用得当的句子结构可以 给文章增色不少，从而使 整篇文章因此而生辉 。使用恰当连接词，对写一 篇有“英语味”的文章很重 要，能使文章上下衔接自 然、紧凑。增强书面表达效果的技巧增强书面表达效果的技巧2. 使用较丰富的句式1. Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable. (幸亏)2.We all think he is a g
15、reat man. （评价很高）3.Suddenly I thought out a good idea. （occur ）Thanks to the good weather, our journey was comfortable.I. 怎样使用较高级的词汇We all think highly of him .A good idea occurred to me./ A good idea suddenly struck me.4.The students there neednt pay for their books.（免费的）5. She went to Australia in
16、order to study music. （purpose）6. When he spoke, he felt more and more excited. （the 比较级，the 比较级）She went to Australia for the purpose of studying music.The more he spoke, the more excited he felt.Books are free for the students there.II. 丰富的句式：(常用到的句型结构）利用不同的句型来表达同一个意思，能增 加文章的文采。How happy I was when I receive
