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1、阅卷过程 阅卷程序 关于评分标准的整体印象例文点评10年，09年，08年及07年各题目均分比较基础写作读写任务10年7.5611.45 09年7.0710.32 08年6.8311.32 07年6.758.89平均分题型年份基础写作该部分全省考生这四年均分都在及格分以下2009年2008年2007年2006年主要 内容我国中小 学生近视 问题采访 报道编写奥运 项目射击 的英语介 绍“谁是你的 偶像”调查 报告今昔通讯 方式的变 化题材 健康体育/热点 话题学校生活日常生活命题 形式中文提纲中文提纲表格(=柱 状图表)图画基础写作的特点和要求1题材贴近考生 2内容略有开放 3命题形式多样性 4
2、要求只能用五句 5三个评分要素 2009年高考作文 你是校报小记者，最近进行了一次采访。以下是这次采的 情况： 时间：上周末 对象：眼科医生(eye-doctor)王教授 主题：我国中小学生近视(short-sightedness)问题 基本信息：(1)发生率：略高于50(2)人数：世界第一 专家解读：(1)原因：很复杂 (2)治疗：没有哪一种药物能治愈近视 (3)建议：不要过度用眼；多参加户外活动 (4)特别提示：如何握笔也和近视有关 内容包括：1采访的时间、对象和主题； 2中小学 生近视的发生率及人数； 3专家解读。 基础写作考生存在的主要问题1. 词汇匮乏，造成用词不准，表达不地道2.信
3、息组合不合理，增加了表达的难度3.句式单调，缺乏必要的变化4.没有注意到时态的变化基础写作部分的教学建议一 强化三个重要基础训练 1.掌握简单句的五个基本句型和there be结 构 2.掌握并列句的结构 3.掌握主从复合句的结构 二 关注“三性一度”的 评分原则内容的完整性 用词的准确性篇章的连贯性 句子的复杂程度三 五个重要巧技 1.使用非谓语动词短语 2.使用with的复合结构 3.用从属连词，合并为主从复合句 4.用并列连词，合并为并列复合句 5.一些特殊句型 四 加强考生信息组合能力的培养 1）.信息分配均衡 2）.有利于采用多种句式进行表达读写任务该部分全省考生均分在及格分一下 读
4、写任务的要求和试题特点： 1.长度： 2.难度： 3.主题： 4.内容： 5.短文都是来自外国网站。2009年高考读写任务 Jackie is perhaps the most easily annoyed koala(考拉)at the Featherdale Wildlife Park in southern AustraliaAll the koalas there are unhappy and complainingYou would be too if you were used to night activities and someone kept waking you up
5、all day while you were trying to sleep it offThatS right-sleep it offThe average koala is always half asleep because it feeds on the leaves of a special kind that makes it sleepyThe reason Jackie and her fellow koalas are repeatedly awoken from their deep sleep is SO they can be hugged and photograp
6、hed by tourists，who make the trips to Featherdale and an increasing number of other national parks for just that special experienceWhatever department in the Aussie government in charge of such things is now moving to make the practice illegal，which is understandableHow would you react，my friend，if
7、you were trying to sleep off a dozen timesand some round，furry creature smelling of grass kept waking you? 内容包括：(1)人们在参观动物园时为什么喜欢和动物拍照；(2) 假如你处在那些动物的处境，你会有什么反应； (3)你认为是否 应该禁止游客和动物拍照。 2009年高考英语读写任务 考生存在的主要问题： 1.部分考生明显没有达到150字（30+120） 左右的写作要求. 2.整体而言，明显的语法错误偏多 3.段落不清，要点不明（没有进行适当的分段 ）4.段落内部组织混乱（严重影响文章得
8、分）5.上下文的连贯性不够6.书写不清楚任务型写作部分的教学建议1.加强写作过程中每一个环节的指导（从审题到最后的抄写）2. 必须要让考生能写出具有“典型特征”的段落 写好每段落的主题句3.写作训练的系统性：4.对主题句展开充分的论述（拓展句）高分作文的要求1.表达精炼简洁2.避免低级错误 3.保证赏心悦目 4.句子错落有致 5.句式多种多样 写作教学建议1.差生要抓基础(记单词,背句型,练范文) 2.优生要抓书写 3.全体要抓能力 4.最后要抓技巧 例：I have a brother, he is studying in a middle school. He has many hobbi
9、es. They are basketball, swimming, running. He likes the book, there are many interesting pictures in it. He works hard on his subjects and he has passed the exam. It makes my parents happy. I have a brother studying in a middle school, he has so many hobbies as basketball, swimming, running. He lik
10、es the book with many interesting pictures in it. He works so hard that he has passed the exam, which makes my parents happy.I must admit that Im not interested in and dont like biology even though it is very helpful and important. In order to enter college, I have to choose it as my elective subjec
11、t. According to my opinion, biology is not only difficult but also terrible. Only by doing a lot of homework and being busy with biology day and night can I manage to get high mark in the biology examination in the end. But I am excited that I come to develop a good sense of enjoying biology.I must
12、confess that I dont show great interest in, and even care nothing for biology even though it is of great help and significance. For the purpose of having easy access to college, I have to choose it as my elective subject. Based on my personal idea, biology is not only challenging but also terrible.
13、Only by doing endless homework and being occupied with (burying myself into) biology day and night can I manage to get high mark in the biology examination eventually. But what makes me excited most is that I come to develop a good sense of enjoying biology.(陈文杰)In January 2008, a blizzard, lasting
14、twenty days, hit the southern part of China. The snow storm which is the most serious among 50 years made over 43700000 km of forest and farm badly damaged .The blocked traffic, resulting from the blizzard, caused a great number of people who wanted to go back to their hometown detained in the stati
15、ons. About 100 people were killed and millions of people became homeless. In the southern part of China, the cleaning and rebuilding works are under construction. Those who want to give them their hands please call 021-44856739. （蔡悦）As many as 70% of students think it is of great pain when failing t
16、o learn what they show interest in, therefore, they prefer to choose their majors based on their interests while 45% argue that choosing a major should depend on what the society real needs so as to develop their interests in their appropriate future jobs. Whats more, there are 25% of students who tend to take th
