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1、Giving adviceGiving adviceWritingWriting1. Review how to express advice.2. Polish a paragragh. 3. Write a paragragh.Tasks Tasks 1.Why not (do) 2.Why dont you (do) 3.Youd better (do) 4.You should /can/could/need (do) 5.How / What about doing ? 6.Would you mind doing7.You are supposed to (do) 8.If I w
2、ere you, I would (do) 9.V-ing is helpful. 10.Its helpful for you to (do) 11.Its a good idea for you to (do)Topic 1: learn EnglishTopic 2: relaxAlice， I feel more and more stressed out in Junior Three. First, I study hard, but I still cant get good grades. Then, I often have headaches and feel sleepy
3、, so I cant concentrate on my study. Besides, my parents dont understand me at all. They always think Im wasting time. Sometimes I even argue with them. That makes us unhappy. Do you have the same problems? I need your help.Im looking forward to hearing from you soonYours, Liu Ming First of all, you
4、 can ask teachers for help. Second, you can take exercise. In my opinion, taking exercise can make you to energetic because you wont feel sleepy. Its helpful to your health. Its helpful to your study. Third, you can get a part time job and make some money. Finally, youd better to understand your par
5、ents. .1.要点：齐全enough 2.内容：建议合理、具说服力reasonable / 3.结构：文段连贯 、逻辑 4. 语法：标点词句准确correct 5. 语言：词句多样 colorfulconvincing coherent/logicalLetter 1: In my teachers eyes, I am certainly a good student in English learning. I listen in class and finish homework in time. But Im not happy with the resultsLetter 2:
6、I like watching TV in my free time. I dont like going out to exercise. I also like eating potatoes and drinking cola while I am watching TV. I am fat now and I have few friends. Could you give me some advice?.Dear _,Im sorry to hear you are in trouble now. I can understand your feeling. Dont worry.
7、Here are some advice for you. _ _ _ _ _ _I hope my advice would be helpful.LilinGive adviceGive advice1. 要点：是否齐全 2. 内容：建议是否合理、具有说服力 3.结构：文段是否连贯 、逻辑 4.语法：标点词句是否准确 5.语言：词句是否多样 6 书写：是否规范UnderlineUnderline good words good words /sentences/sentences1. 要点：是否齐全 2. 内容：建议是否合理、具有说服力 3.结构：文段是否连贯 、逻辑 4.语法：标点词句是
8、否准确 5.语言：词句是否多样 6 书写：是否规范主要错误 佳句摘抄 Give advice & Help others 1. Polish your own writing.2. Appreciate others. 3. Write down the advice about the other topic.Homework HomeworkFinally, youd better to understand your parents. First of all, you can ask teachers for help. Second, you can take exercise. I
9、n my opinion, taking exercise can make you energetic so that you wont feel so sleepy. I think its really helpful to both your health and your study. Examples Reasons convincing convincing （有说服力的）（有说服力的）Although she is a little girl, she knows something about science.First(ly)，Second(ly)， Third(ly), Besides, Whats more, In addition, At first, First of all, In the beginning， finally，at lastOn （the） one hand,. On the other hand, . Not only.but also.Coherent & Logical
