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1、 四级作文评分原则四级考试大纲写作要求 能在阅读难度与课文相仿的书面材料 时做笔记、回答问题和写提纲，能就 一定的话题或提纲在半小时内写出120 -150词的短文，能写短信或便条，表 达意思清楚，无重大语言错误。 四级作文评分原则1. CET是检查考生是否达到大学英语教 学大纲规定的四级和六级教学要求， 对作文的评判应以此要求为准则。 2. CET作文题采用总体评分(Global Scoring) 方法，阅卷人员就总的印象 给出奖励分(reward scores), 而不是 按语言点的错误数目扣分。四级作文评分原则3.从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。作文应表达题目所规定的内容，而内容要
2、通过 语言来表达。要考虑作文是否切题，是否充分 表达思想，也要考虑是否用英语清楚而合适地 表达思想，也就是要考虑语言上的错误是否造 成理解上的障碍。 4. 避免趋中倾向。该给高分的给高分，包括满分 ;该给低分给低分，包括零分。一名阅卷人员在 所评阅的全部作文卷中不应只给中间的几种分 数。四级作文评分标准四级作文评分标准1.本题满分为15分 2.阅卷标准共分五等:2分、5分、8分、11 分及14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。 3.阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分 ，若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似，即定 为该分数(即8分);若认为稍优或稍劣于 该分数则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7 分)。但不得加
3、或减半分。 四级作文评分标准 4. 字数不足应酌情扣分：累计字数 110-119 100-109 90-99 80-89 70-79 60-69 50 -59 491 2 3 4 5 6 7 9 (1)如题目中给出主题句、起始句、结束句 ，均 不得计入所写字数。 (2)规定的内容未写全者，按比例扣分。 (3)如果扣为0分，要慎重处理。四级作文题目 Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write an eye-witness account of a traffic accident. You should w
4、rite at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chinese: 假设你在某日某时某地目击一起车祸 ，就此写一份见证书。见证书须包括 以下几点： 1车祸发生的时间及地点 2你所见到的车祸情况 3你对车祸原因的分析四级作文评分标准及样卷 2分：条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分 句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。样卷 5分：基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较 多的严重语言错误。样卷 8分：基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字 勉强连贯;语言错误相当多，其中有一些是 严重错误。样卷四级作文评分标准及样卷1
5、1分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语 言 错误。样卷14分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好 ， 基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。样卷 四级作文四级作文2 2分样卷分样卷I saw the Traffic Accident in Tianjin Road. The Traffic Accident has been at the morning, May 1 Two children by bike went to school. A car is so fast, the streel. And the car touched two children by bike, a
6、nd the Traffic Accident has happened. One is touched so far way and the other is put down. Mary people come here, and they sent to two children who go to Hospiton. Wait a time, The ploiemen arriverd in the Accident place. My opiontoin: The car driver is so fast by car, and He didnt attendation to th
7、e children by bike aside the road. Two children by bike didnt heared the car come. All of above, I think the car driver must be serier the Traffic Accident.四级作文2分样卷四级作文5分样卷It was 8:00 this morning, I went on my way to school. When I just at the school gate, I saw the terrible traffic accident happen
8、d. A student ride his bike in a high speed, and just when he arrived the school gate, a large truck traveled out of the gate and hit him down. He flied over 3m before his bike hit him on the ground. Surely, the poor boy was hurt very bad.四级作文5分样卷I think there are two reasons for the accident. First,
9、 it was just the time we began our first class, the bike rider perhaps did not want to be late, he ride his bike so fast, even didnt low down his speed at the gate. Secend, the truck is too large, and at that time, there were too many people walk through the gate, so the bike driver have no other wa
10、y to chose, but to ride in the middle of the road. 四级作文8分样卷The trafic accident was taken place at the junction of two highways when I was driving my car home at about 4 oclock.The yellow car involed in the accident was running at a high speed along the right-hand when it happened. Hardly it reached
11、the junction when it cracked with a truck running from another direction. There was no time for the drivers to change the directions.四级作文四级作文8 8分样卷分样卷I think the accident mostly attributed to such reasons: Firstly and the foremost, it was the carelessness of both of the drivers that mostly made the
12、accidents happen. It was not too careful for them when running a car. Secondly, the weather also should be responsible for it. The fog made the vision of drivers vague. Last but not the least, the constructure of the roads was unreasonable. The trafic lights are needed at any junctions. 四级作文11分样卷It
13、was last Friday morning. The accident happened when I was on my way to school. It was so terrible that I would never forget it.I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the road. Then, with a big sound, the accident happened. The red car stoped suddenly on the road so that the
14、driver of following car couldnt respond immediately. The back of the red car was badly damaged, but fortunately there was no people injured in this accident.四级作文11分样卷I think the main reasons are as follows: First of all, the red car shouldnt stop suddenly without any signals. Secondly, the following
15、 car should keep a certain distance from the front car so that the driver could have enough time to take measurs when any badly situation. Finally, these two drivers were careless. If they had paid more attention to driving, this accident wouldnt have happened. 四级作文14分样卷It was the morning of April 6
16、th, 2003. At about 7:30, I went to school by bike as usual. It was a rainy day and the road was slippery. On the way, I noticed a boy riding in front of me, talking loudly with his friends. He didnt wear a raincoat; instead he held an umbrella in one hand, and rode with another hand. As he turned left to Guangming Road, he failed to see a car coming fro
