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1、成化高中 张 鑫第23讲 书面表达写作技巧指导（一 ）Clothes make the man.人要衣装，佛要金装。Beauty is the combination of three-tenthsof gift and seven-tenths of grooming.三分长相，七分打扮。如 何 使文章 起来“靓”技 巧1. 使用较高级的词汇3. 使用恰当的连接词2. 使用较丰富的句式abundant sentence patternsproper conjunctionsadvanced words and phrases4 合 理 添 加 句 子一、善用高级词汇Which is bett
2、er?1 周末我们会有很多作业要做。 A .We have endless homework to do at the weekend. B. We have a lot of homework to do at the weekend . 2 在我所有的老师里,毛老师给我留下了很深的印象。A. Of all my teachers, I still remember Mr. Mao.B. Of all my teachers, Mr. Mao gave me the deepest impression.3、 高级培训班结束后回到家，他的妻子感到精疲力 尽。 A. His wife came
3、 back home after the advanced training class, feeling very tired. B. His wife came back home after the advanced training class, feeling very exhausted. 4、他没听我课上讲的东西。 A. He turned a deaf ear to what I said in the class. B . He didnt listen to what I said in the class. on the way / around the corner .
4、The weekend is coming .Nowadays, people think education is veryimportant . be of great importance / significanceattach great importance to Because the weather was good, our journey was comfortable.Thanks to the good weather，The students there neednt pay for their books.Books are free of charge for t
5、he students there.You can find my house easily. Youll have no trouble difficulty finding my house. I had a good idea.A good idea occurred to / struck / came to me.I came up with a good idea.use “ complicated / advanced words” 首先_ 起初_第一次_ 某人第一次做某事时_ 在开始的时候_ 同时_ 过了一会_ 从那时起_ 直到现在_不久以后_ 之后不久_ 随着时间的流逝_ f
6、irst of all/ to begin with for the first timethe first time +句子up to nowbefore longsince then/ from then onin the beginning/ at the beginning of meanwhile/ at the same time after a whileat firstIts not long before. As time goes by,就我而言_众所周知_ 正如这样的情况 _另外,此外_ 更糟/严重的是_更重要的是_ 结果_我想 _ 也就是说_ 说实话_as far as
7、 I am concernedAs we all know/ As is known to allAs is the casebesides/ whats more/ moreoverwhats worse/more seriousAbove allas a result/ thereforeIt occurred to me that thats to say/ in other wordsto be frank/ to tell the truth就像 _ 就是因为 _不只是因为 _或多或少_ 迟早_为树立榜样_代表某人_ 一方面另一方面_ 相反的_ 总之_ 最后但同等重要_比如_ 如下_
8、想当然地认为_just like just becausenot just because more or less set a good example to sooner or laterrepresent (v.) sb/ on behalf of sb(介短) for one thingfor another on the contrary/ Instead in conclusion/ in short/ in briefas followsfor example/ take for examplelast but not leasttake it for granted that位
9、于_ 占地_ 有年历史_ 有人口_ 享有的美誉_ 考取大学_ 出国深造_ 他是的骄傲_ 被授予/被认为是_cover an area of own/have a history ofyearshave a population of+数字 enjoy the reputation of be admitted touniversity go abroad for further studiesHe is the pride of be honored/considered as be located in根据我个人经验_与息息相关_ 在这信息时代_鉴于社会实际的需要_事实上_ 我们有理由相信_
10、然而，很可惜的是_according to my personal experiencebe closely related toin the age of information (and communication)in the view of the practical need of societyin fact/ as a matter of fact We have reasons to believe thatHowever, its a pity that请加上恰当的连接词1）We can go downtown and do some shopping. _, we can
11、pay avisit to some places of interest.2）I shared the cost of the gas with myfriends ._, I saved $80.3）Eating sugar is bad for our teeth. _ , it may make us fat.In additionAs a resultWhats worse使用恰当的连接词Rewrite the sentences1. They arrived at the school. They felt the happy atmosphere.2. I will be giv
12、en another chance. I will succeed.3. He wants to improve his English. He studies hard. 方法1. 使用从句或非谓语动词使句子高档When they arrived at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere. Arriving at the school, they felt the happy atmosphere.If I am given another chance, I will succeed. Given another chance, I wil
13、l succeed.In order to improve his English, he studies hard.二、善用高档句式Many boys learn to smoke. It does harm to their health. Many boys learn to smoke, which does harm to their health.The meal was very nice. We all enjoyed it very much. The meal was so nice that we all enjoyed it very much.She walked o
14、ut of the room .Many students followed her.Followed by many students , she walked out of the room.When he heard the good news , he burst into tears. HearingWhen it is compared with other cartoons, The Wolf and the Sheep is more interesting.C2. He went there yesterday. (强调)He did go there yesterday.3.To prevent the pollution is very impor
