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1、WRITING 写作大学英语大学英语四级考试系列讲座四级考试系列讲座6. 考试过程中要留意的细节Contents1. CET-4作文评分标准及常见错误2. 解读新样卷中的作文如何调整、适应新形式3. CET-4 近年作文题目一览和作文命题趋势分析5. 如何提高写作技能4. 常见文体写作策略评分标准： 1.短文写作部分满分为15分（106）。 2.阅卷标准共分五等：14分、11分、8 分、5分、及2分。 3.阅卷人员采用总体评分(Global Scoring)方法，就 总的印象给出奖励分(Reward Scores) 。也就是根据 阅卷标准,对照参照卷评分,若认为与某一分数(如8分 )相似，即定
2、为该分数(即8分)；若认为稍优或稍劣于 该分数，则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7分)，但不 得加或减半分。 4.从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。既考 虑作文是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也考虑是否用 英语清楚而贴切地表达思想，也就是考虑语言上的错 误是否造成理解上的障碍。评分档：14分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性 较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。11分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少 量语言错误。8分 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚， 文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一 些是严重错误。5分 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。 有较多的严重语言错误。2分
3、条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大 部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 作文评分标准示例：请对照评分标准，研究一下2003年1月四级考试作文的评分标 准示例，找出失分的原因，以避免在自己的作文中出现。Directions: For this part, you are allowed thirty minutes to write a composition on the topic: It pays to Be Honest. You should write at least 120 words according to the outline given below in Chine
4、se.1. 当前社会上存在许多不诚实的现象。2. 诚实利人利己，做人应该诚实。It Pays to Be Honest14 points Although honesty is believed to be a virtue, there are still dishonest people in our society. For example, some businessmen sell fake product to their consumers; some students cheat in the exams.（第 一句点明话题，同时用although引导的从句指出诚实是美德，为后
5、文作了铺垫，再用例 子阐释第一句提纲。） Dishonest people are short-sighted. Those who sell fake products may make money at first, but consumers wont buy their products any more. As a result, they will lose their fortune or even be sent to prison. By contrast, honest people gain a lot. （从反面论述不诚实的 坏处，得出结论） Those who alw
6、ays tell truth or keep to their promise not only let others trust them but gain respect from other people as well. Such persons are sure to have a lot of good friends. Because they are trustable and respectable, everyone is eager to make friends with them, Besides, it is easier for a person with a g
7、ood record to get a good job. Generally speaking, every employer wants his employees to be honest. So we can say that anyone who is honest will be paid back later. （从其它 方面论述诚实的好处） In a word, honesty wins trust, respect and honor. So it is important that we should be honest. （这两句分别进行了总结和点题）11 pointsN
8、owadays, many people choose not be honest in our modern society. We almost can find such things every day of our life: some students cheat in the exam for higher marks; some corporations tell wrong data to the public in order to get more investment; and some doctors treat their patients with unneces
9、sary and expensive medicines in order to make money, sometimes damaged the patients health, even their life.Seeing this situation, I think it must be changed. Being honest will benefit not only others, but also ourselves. First, your honesty will make others willing to trust you. Second, being hones
10、t can lead you to face your problem bravely, which helps to solve it. And the last, honesty surely helps to make the society more harmony.So, I think everyone should start to be honest and everyone should have the idea that our society can not do without honesty.这篇文章全部采取正面论述的方法，略显苍白和单调，但文章尚连贯。8 poin
11、tsIn our modern social life, there are many examples around us show many people are cheated. Advertisements cheat people, salesmen cheat people, even ones closest friends cheat him or her. So many heartbreaks are heard everyday that we cannot help asking: where is our honest exist?Everybody is taugh
12、t honest in the primary school or even in the kindergarten. Honesty does good not only to ourselves, but to others as well. If we are honest to others, we will be happier and be in a better mood. Otherwise, well feel guilt at last. To a company and its advertisement, honesty will bring it more consu
13、mer and more profit. If we cheat others, friends will not believe you and they will leave you alone. To a company, no consumer will buy your product again!So, as the above is said, it pays to be honest. Lets create a morally outstanding social.仅在第一段就有那么多的错误和不规范的表达，其余的就不用说了。好在还能扣题 ，连贯性也过得去。CET作文常见错误
14、在阅卷过程中，语法错误，尤其是较为严重的错误，是阅卷人员的主要“照 顾点”，有时甚至是惟一的点；当然那样处理是有道理的，大家可以设想一 下，一篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢 ？如果因为语言上的错误而导致失分，那将得不偿失。因此，认清各种各 样的语法错误，尽可能地避免少犯，对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。 现将语言错误逐一归类，抽出其中的12种典型错误，以警示大家，供参考 。1.动词时态、语态的误用I was walking along the road, and there are not so many cars on the street. (误)I was w
15、alking along the road and there were not so many vehicles on the street. (正)We have little time to read some books which we interest. (误)We have little time to read some books in which we are interested. (正)I am a student who has studying in the college for two years. (误)I have been studying in the
16、college for two years. (正)2. There be句型的误用 There exists some new problems such as being dishonest. (误) There exist/arise some new problems such as being dishonest. (正)There are many students think college education is worthwhile. (误) There are many students who think college education is worthwhile. (正)3.主谓不一致Someone/Somebody think that reading should be selective. (误)Some think that reading should be selective. (正)When one have money, he can do what he want to.(误)When one
