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1、写作技巧点拨系列(四)完美衔接过渡, 编织流畅作文【典例呈现】阅读下例，体会其中的过渡性词语。假设你是星光中学的李华，将参加主题为“Lets Ride Bicycles”的英语演讲比赛，请撰写一份演讲稿，内容主要包括：1. 目前汽车造成的空气污染和交通堵塞等问题；2. 骑自行车的益处，如节能环保、有利于健康、是一种低碳的生活方式等。Good morning, everyone, Im Li Hua from Xingguang Middle School. The topic of my speech is “Lets Ride Bicycles”. As is known to all （众
2、所周知）, with the improvement of peoples living standards, cars have become a popular means of transport, bringing great convenience to our life. However（然而）, they have also caused some problems such as air pollution and traffic jams. How can we solve the problems then（那么我们怎么才能解决这些问题呢）? As far as Im co
3、ncerned（据我所知）, riding bicycles is a good solution. For one thing, bicycles dont need any petrol and they are energy-saving. For another, bicycles are environmentally friendly because they wont give off waste gas. Whats more（此外；而且）, riding bicycles is a good way for us to exercise and it is beneficia
4、l to our health. Therefore（因此）, lets take the responsibility to build up a low-carbon city by riding bicycles. Come on and join us! Thank you! 【核心点拨】能使书面表达的整篇文章浑然一体的就是一些过渡性词语的使用。这些衔接过渡性词语在句与句之间、段与段之间起承上启下，使文章前后连贯、结构紧凑、过渡自然的作用，从而提升了表达的层次，成为增分的亮点。具体使用时，请注意下面两点：一、使用过渡性词语1. 表递进关系的过渡词besides, in addition
5、, moreover, whats more，whats worse等。2. 表转折对比的过渡词but, however, yet, instead, on the other hand, on the contrary, despite, in spite of, whereas, nevertheless等。3. 表结果的过渡词so, thus, therefore, as a result, so that等。4. 表换一种方式表达的过渡词 in other words, that is to say, to put it another way等。5. 表达普遍规律generally
6、speaking，in general，all in all等。 6. 表总结的过渡词in a word, in short, to sum up, finally, in conclusion, in summary等。7. 表特定的顺序关系的过渡词first, firstly, second, secondly, third, thirdly, above all, first of all, then, next, finally, in the end, at last, eventually等。二、使用过渡性句子段与段之间除了借助于一些篇章层次上的连接性词语，如however, on
7、 the other hand, on the contrary, similarly, therefore, in conclusion, in short等以外，还经常需要使用一些表示过渡的句子来确保其连贯性。常见的过渡性句子类型有：1. 设问引出下文为了引出下文所要表达的内容，作者有时采用设问的方式引出下文。2. 总体陈述不同观点有时作者在前一个段落列举各种现象或者引出某个要供大家讨论的话题，接下来就要从整体上论述人们对此持有的不同看法，然后再具体论述各种观点，如Different people have different opinions about it. 等。3. 举实例佐证有时
8、为了增强某个观点或者现象的说服力，我们可以使用实例加以佐证。可以使用for example/instance, such as, as follows等来引出下文。【写作指导】常见的逻辑连接语表示平行、对等或选择关系and, both. . . and, as well，as well as, either. . . or, not only. . . but also等。表示转折关系but, yet, however, nevertheless, in spite of, although, on the contrary，on the other hand，otherwise, while
9、等。表示因果关系so, therefore, as a result (of), because, owing to, due to, thanks to, on account of，seeing that等。表示时间顺序关系shortly after, first, second. . . ，then, next, finally, immediately, suddenly, soon, in the end, eventually等。表示空间顺序关系here, there, on the right/left，on the side of. . . on the other side
10、of，in the middle/center/front of， next to等。表示对称关系on the one hand, on the other hand; for one thing, for another thing等。表示递进、强调关系besides, furthermore，whats more, in addition, moreover, worse still, above all, certainly，important of all, to make matters worse, after all，in fact等。表示解释、说明关系namely, actua
11、lly, such as, for example/instance, that is to say, in other words, and so on, to tell you the truth, according to this，believe it or not等。表示结论in short, in brief, in a word, as you know, as far as I know, on the whole，in conclusion等。【对点训练】. 根据句意填入适当的过渡性词或短语1. For them, the improvement of students is
12、 the best reward. _, I want to say “Happy Teachers Day” sincerely to teachers. 2. In summer days, the weather is too hot to stand. _ students have to stay outside all the day. _, the training is very hard. 3. _, he understood what I said. ThereforeButIn additionAs a result4. Compared with the wester
13、n, the Chinese children are shyer in communication. _, as the only child in the family, they cant enjoy the happiness from brother or sister. 5. In this aspect, working is not only a way to make a living, but also a way for us to achieve ourselves. _, working can bring satisfaction to us in spirit.
14、6. The boy wasnt allowed to enter school. _, he was too young to go to school. On the other handIn other wordsThats to say7. _, the coldest weather comes in January. 8. We dislike people _ him. 9. I dont dislike him at all; _ I am very fond of him. 10. My aim was _ to determine what I should do next
15、. Generally speakingsuch ason the contraryfirst of all. 阅读下列短文，选择适当的过渡词或短语填空so，as，due to，but， in a word， in a sense（2013重庆高考）This mother is not the only one that has the problem of the generation gap. _ different attitudes and opinions, a solid generation gap appears. The teenagers think their paren
16、ts dont understand them _ they prefer to talk to their friends rather than tell their parents their problems. Due toso_, the generation gap is a sign of social progress, _ it also results in difficulties in communication. Both the parents and the teenagers should make every effort to solve the problem. As teenagers, what matters most
