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1、Task-based writing by Xie Minyu(Narration)1.Learn how to summarize a narrationstory 2.Learn how to describe an experience in task-based writingPart onehow to summarize a narration or story5按照要求概括了原文的全部主要信息，没有增加与原文无关 的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语语言结结构正确，行文规规范。 4基本按照要求概括了原文的主要信息，没有增加与原文无关 的信息，没有照抄原文的句子。语语言结结构正确，行文规
2、规范 。 3基本按照要求概括原文的主要信息，但包含一些不相关的信 息，有个别别句子抄自原文。语语言结结构基本正确，行文不够规够规 范。 2不能按照要求概括原文的主要信息，包含较较多不相关信息， 大多数句子都抄自原文。语语言结结构不准确，行文不够规够规 范。 1没有按照要求概括原文的主要信息，基本是不相关的信息， 大多数句子都抄自原文。语语言结结构不准确，行文不够规够规 范 高考任务型写作概括部分评分标准What part is the narration composed of?narrationwhenwherewhywhowhathowDear dad,I am writing to yo
3、u in my classrom now, and I hope you are all well. Actually, I have something to tell you. This Monday I spent 80 yuan on a pair of shoes that I was eager for. Then it cost me 100 yuan to pay for the exercise books. On Friday, I visited Shenzhen Happy Valley, and of course, the admission price is no
4、t cheap. So dad, I know it is hard to say ,but I have no money . I hope you can help your poor son. I promise that I will be strict with myself in trying not to waste money in future.when wherewho whatwhyhownow, this Monday, Friday my classroom, Happy ValleyI, my fatherhave no moneywrite to my fathe
5、rask for help, make a promise A possible version：The writer wrote to tell his father the reason why he had no money and asked for help. And he also made a promise not to waste money. The passage is mainly about The author tells us that. The story is mainly about and it tells us that According to the
6、 passage, we know that. You may begin like these:According to the passage, we know that the writer wrote to tell his father the reason why he had no money and asked for help. And he also made a promise not to waste money.A possible version：1. Focus on main ideas(who,what,how) and leave out examples,
7、 details(when,where and so on).2. Do not include your own opinion.3. Write it in the proper person and tense . (主要是第三人称和过去时）4.Control the number of words about 30.5.How to check the summary:看要点看人称 /看时态看语法看结构My husband received a letter a month ago from a young woman who had been his student when she
8、 was in middle school. She was writing because she wanted to thank for having a great influence in her life.In the letter she wrote, “You were the teacher who helped me discover my talent 天才；天赋 for math. Before you came to teach us, I had been terribly poor at math, and had never thought that I woul
9、d be interested in it.To my surprise, you magically showed me the beauty of math. I guess that was the turning point of my attitude towards it. Gradually my interest in it began to grow. Thanks to your encouragement, I made continuous progress in math, and finally made up my mind to study it in the
10、university. Today I am working as an accountant at Valley Medical Center in California. You played an important part. Thank you!”What a wonderful gift to a retired teacher! My husband has received many letters from students over the years. This one was special, for it arrived at this time in his lif
11、e when he is in very poor health.My husband received a letter a month ago from a young woman who had been his student when she was in middle school. She was writing because she wanted to thank for having a great influence in her life.In the letter she wrote, “You were the teacher who helped me disco
12、ver my talent 天才；天赋 for math. Before you came to teach us, I had been terribly poor at math, and had never thought that I would be interested in it._To my surprise, you magically showed me the beauty of math. I guess that was the turning point of my attitude towards it. Gradually my interest in it b
13、egan to grow. Thanks to your encouragement, I made continuous progress in math, and finally made up my mind to study it in the university. Today I am working as an accountant at Valley Medical Center in California. You played an important part. Thank you!”What a wonderful gift to a retired teacher!
14、My husband has received many letters from students over the years. This one was special, for it arrived at this time in his life when he is in very poor health._Possible versions： A thank-you letter from an former student of the writers husband meant a lot to the retired old man. From the letter, th
15、e writer learnt how great influence a teacher might have on his students. The writers husband received a letter from an former student in which she expressed her thanks to him. The writer was touched by it and learnt that a teacher might have a great influence on his students.Part twoHow to describe an experienceStep 1:确定时态the past tense （过去时）Step 2:确定主题句I also have similar experience of feeling homesick. The school I attend is a boarding school. When I got there the first day three years ago, I was told tha
