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1、 相关短语1. the minority/majority of. 少数/大多数 2. traffic safety 交通安全 3. disapprove of 不同意；不赞成 4. persuade sb. not to do. 说服某人不做 5. follow/take the advice 听从劝告 6. as far as I am concerned 就我所知7. think highly of 高度评价 8. a good solution to. 一个好的解决办法 9. from my perspective 在我看来 10. have a heated discussion 进
2、行一次热 烈的讨论 11. draw the conclusion that. 得出结论 12. the key to success 成功的秘诀 13. focus more on. 更加关注相关句式 1. Recently we have had a discussion about whether parents should accompany their children at school. 最 近我们讨论了父母是否该在学校陪读。2. Nearly 70% of us disagree because they think it makes them fall into the h
3、abit of dependence.我们中有将近70% 的人不赞同,因为他们认为这会使他们养 成依赖性。3. While about 30% of my classmates think it necessary for our parents to accompany us.而我的同学中大约30%的人认为父母有 必要陪读。4. Some people say yes, who think that the Internet helps make friends on line. 有些人 同意, 他们认为互联网有助于网上交友。5. My opinion is that students sh
4、ould place their study, health and safety before other things.我的意见是学生应 该把学习、健康、和安全放在其他事 情之前。1. 基础写作是根据所给的内容组织成文, 不是自由发挥。部分考生喜欢在文章中使 用 “Every coin has two sides”过渡, 但是这 个句子并不包含任何信息点, 不适合在基 础写作中使用。2. 正反论证的议论文要注意使用转折和对 比的词, 如however, in contrast, compared with等。3. 如果文章最后要求考生发表自己观点, 考 生不能简单地说I agree wit
5、h.或者I disagree with., 而是要言之有物, 有理有据 。你班同学开展了一场“司机醉驾是否应该处罚乘客”的 讨论。请你根据下表提供的信息, 给报社写一封信, 介 绍讨论的情况, 并发表你的看法。 写作内容少数同学赞赞成处罚处罚 乘客 大多数同学反对处罚对处罚 乘客 1. 减少交通事故,促进进 交通安全 2. 不乘坐醉酒司机的车车, 不仅仅是对对自己负责负责 , 也 是对对司机和路人负责负责1. 乘客难难以判断司机是否 醉酒 2. 即使乘客知道司机饮饮 酒, 如果司机不听从乘客的 劝诫劝诫 , 处罚处罚 乘客是不公平 的 你的看法：例题导写 1. 确定文体结构。本文是正反论证,
6、因此正反观点之间 的论证应该是属于并列关系, 而双方观点的论点和分论 点则为总分关系。而最后，考题要求考生写出自己的 观点, 这个属于对全文的总结。因此, 文章的信息点划 分非常明确, 正反观点各占两个句子, 考生的观点应该 为最后一个句子。考生可以采用两种方法使自己的观 点明确。第一种：第一句的信息点可以包含“少数同学 赞成处罚乘客”(总起)和第一个原因, 而第二句则讲述第 二个原因(递进); 第二种：第一句为总起，第二句则包 含了两个赞成的理由。陈述“大多数同学反对处罚乘客 ”这方面也是同理。2. 词汇整理 句1： (1) 少数同学: the minority of students句2：
7、 (2) 交通事故 : traffic accidents(3) 交通安全 : traffic safety(4) 对负责任 : be responsible for 句3： (4) 大部分学生 :the majority of students 句4： (5) 劝说某人做某事 : persuade sb. to do sth. (6) 听从某人的劝说 : follow/take ones advice3. 难句翻译 句2：不乘坐醉酒司机的车, 不仅是对自己 负责,也是对司机和路人负责。 分析：本句的主语是 “不乘坐醉酒司机的 车”, 因此考生可以考虑使用动词不定式 not to do sth
8、.作主语。不仅也可 以使用not only.but also.或者as well as 这些短语。翻译 : Not to ride in a car driven by a drunken driver is not only a responsible behavior for passengers themselves but also for the drivers and other people on the road. / Not to ride in a car driven by a drunken driver is responsible for passengers th
9、emselves as well as the drivers and other people on the road.句4：即使乘客知道司机饮酒, 如果司机不听 从乘客的劝诫, 处罚乘客是不公平的。 分析：本句的主句是“处罚乘客是不公平的”, 考生可以考虑用it作形式主语的句型it is unfair to.，而“即使”可以使用even if引导的让 步状语从句。 翻译: Even if the passenger knows the driver has drunk alcohol and has attempted to persuade the driver not to drive
10、, it is unfair to punish the passenger when the driver does not follow the advice.4. 连句成文 (1)不同意某个观点: disagree with sb. /be against the opinion that /disapprove of the idea(2)表述“转折”的连接词: instead /rather than/ nevertheless/otherwise / on the one hand.on the other hand.(3) 表示“对照”的连接词 (3)whereas /in co
11、ntrast / /on the contrary /while / by contrast /compared with(4) 表示“让步”的连接词 (4)after all /in spite of / while it is true.参考范文 Dear Editor，Im writing to tell you about the discussion weve had about whether passengers who ride in a car driven by a drunken driver should be punished. The minority of the
12、 students hold the opinion that punishing the passengers helps to reduce traffic accidents and increase traffic safety. Not to ride in a car driven by a drunken driver is not only a responsible behavior for passengers themselves but also for the drivers and other people on the road.The majority of t
13、he students, however, disapprove of the idea, stating that it is difficult for common passengers to know whether the driver has been drinking or not. Whats more, even if the passenger knows the driver has drunk alcohol and has attempted to persuade the driver not to drive, it is unfair to punish the
14、 passenger when the driver does not follow the advice.As far as I am concerned, punishing passengers as well as the drivers is not only unfair but is also hard to carry out.Yours sincerely，Li Hua能力提高 1. 短语翻译 (1)尽管: despite / in spite of / although / though(2)由于: due to / because of / owing to / on a
15、ccount of(3)然而: however / yet(4) 因为 :because / since / as(5) 此外 : Besides / Whats more / In addition / Furthermore / Moreover(6) 即使 :even if / even though(7) 总之 : In general /In short /All in all / To draw a conclusion / On the whole(8) 但是 :but(9) 导致 :bring about/give rise to / lead to /result in(10
16、) 与无法相比: cant be compared with3. 翻译句子 (8) 尽管自行车有很多明显的优点, 但是它也存 在它的问题, 因为在速度和舒适度等方面, 自行 车是无法和汽车、火车这样的交通工具相比的 。 Despite many obvious advantages of bicycles, it is not without its problems because bicycles cant be compared with other means of transportation like car and train for speed and comfort.(9)很多人存在这样的误解, 认为离开学校就 意味着结束了他们的教育。显然, 他们忽视 了教育是人生重要部分这一基本事实。 A large number of people tend to live under the illusion that /wrongly believe that they have completed
