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1、 文体概述英语日记一般记录一天发生的事件或是自己感受最深 的事，可分为记事、议论、描写、抒情等。写英语日记要 注意下面几点：一、格式英语日记由书端和正文组成。书端指写日记的星期、 日期和天气，顶格写在左上角，先写星期，再写日期，最 后写天气。(例如：Friday February 26th, 2016 Sunny)二、时态谓语动词多用一般过去时态，但是要根据具体情况使 用其他时态。三、写正文时应注意的问题1. 围绕一个主题来展开。 2. 若无法用已学语言知识来表达某种意思， 可采用“同义转换法”。 3. 结尾最好用一句话来总结自己的感想或体 会。常用语块1.因为 _ 2. 对感到惊讶 _ 3.
2、 对严格要求 _ 4. 为做好准备 _ 5. 到达 _ get to/reach/arrive at (in)because of (doing) sth. / because+句子be surprised at be strict in/with get/be ready for6. 给一些忠告/建议 _ 7. 帮助某人做某事_ 8. 出发；动身 _ 9. 发生 _ 10. 积极参加 _take an active part ingivesome advice onhelp sb. with sth.set off take place11. 散步/休息 _ 12. 采取有效措施做某事_ 1
3、3. 乘坐公交车/火车/自行车_ 14. 拍照 _ 15. 在家/在上班 _be at home/ be at worktake a walk / take a rest/breaktake effective measures to do sth.by bus/ train/ bike (take a bus/ train/ bike to)take photos/ pictures套用句式 1.今天我在广州经历了一件难忘的事。2. 昨晚我和一些好朋友去KTV唱歌。3. 这是我第一次做2. Last night I went to the KTV with some of my good f
4、riends.1. I had an unforgettable experience in Guangzhou today.3. This was the first time that I had done sth.4. 在公园散步的时候，我遇到一个外国人正在欣 赏城市的美景。5. 首先，其次，此外，最后，4. When I was taking a walk in the park, I saw a foreigner enjoying the beauty of the city.5. First, Besides, Whats more, Finally, 习作修改(做短文改错，背经
5、典范文) Wednesday July 20, 2015 FineYesterday I went to Qingdao with my family by the train. The sunshine and fresh air there made us comfortably. We went to the seaside, where the seawas as blue as the sky. Bathing in the sunshine onthe beach were really an enjoyable thing. I picked up a lot of colorf
6、ul shells with my little fortable was There we buy many interesting souvenirs. I wasplanning to send them my friends. We ate many thing there, such as fish, prawn(大虾), beef and soon. They were very delicious. At night they lived in a hotel nearby where was clean and tidy but the price was reasonable
7、. Qingdao is such a beautiful and interesting place that it is well worth see a second time.bought tothings we which/that and seeing 1. 去掉train前的the因为乘坐交通工具不用 定冠词the。 2. comfortably comfortable作宾补用形容 词。 3. were was动名词作主语谓语动词用单数 。 4. buy bought这是一篇日记，讲述过去发 生的事情用一般过去时。 5. 在my friends前加to表示“把某物送给某人 ”用s
8、end sth. to sb.。6. thing things根据前面的many可知要用 thing的复数形式。 7. they we根据上下逻辑关系，应是“我们” 晚上住在宾馆。 8. where which/that先行词是hotel，指物， 故用which/that引导定语从句。 9. but and表示“顺承”关系用并列连词and ，译为“而且”。此处并无“转折”关系。 10. see seeing固定结构be well worth doing 意为“某事很值得做”，是主动表被动。课堂练习假设你是李华，今天(星期日，3月20日，晴) 在公园爬山时遇到一个外国人来旅游。你和他进 行了交流
9、。请围绕这个事情写一篇日记。要点如 下： 1. 想跟他谈话却不知所措。 2. 你向他介绍你的城市。 3. 他给你一些学习的建议。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以 使行文连贯。3. 开头语已为你写好。Sunday March 20, 2016 FineThis morning when I was taking a walk in the park, I saw a foreigner enjoying the beauty of the city. This was the first time that I had seen a foreigner. I wanted
10、 to talk with him, but I was so excited and nervous that I didnt know what to do and how to start a conversation, though I did well in English classes. Eager to practise my spoken English, I encouraged myself and went to say hello and welcome to him. He was very friendly and we talked for about 15 m
11、inutes. As a native, I introduced some tourist attractions and tasty food to him. Finally, he gave me some advice on how to further improve my English. It was more than an experience!课外作业 假设你是李华，今天(星期六，4月2日，多云)学校 组织去科学馆参加题为“Human Activities and Wildlife Protection”的活动。请围绕这次活动写一 篇日记。要点如下： 1. 野生动植物的现状
12、。 2. 保护野生动植物的意义。 3. 保护野生动植物的措施。 注意：1. 词数100左右。2. 可以适当增加细节，以 使行文连贯。3. 开头语已为你写好。Saturday April 2, 2016 CloudyThis afternoon I took part in an organized activity with the theme of “Human Activities and Wildlife Protection” in the science museum. From the activity, I learn that at present the environmen
13、t is being destroyed because of peoples harmful activities, which causes a decrease of wildlife. Besides, many people hunt wild animals for their meat and money. To make matters worse, in response, the decrease is doing harm to peoples life. So it is necessary to take effective measures to protect our environment, such as creating wildlife reserves and passing laws to raise the awareness of wildlife protection. Wild animals are friends of our human beings. To protect them is to protect ourselves. All in all, I benefited a lot from todays activity.
