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1、welcome to my class目前，对帮助或救助他人现象在社会上引起了很多争议，有 些人表示赞同，有些人表示反对。请你结合下表，以“Should we help people in need?”为题目，写一篇英语短文来介绍这一 现象并给出自己的看法。 赞同的人认为： 反对的人认为： 1、 这是中华民族的传统美德 之一； 2、生命很宝贵，帮助别人有 可能挽救别人的生命； 3、鼓舞更多的人，社会变得 更美好。 1、没必要，又不是自己的亲 戚或朋友； 2、自己会受伤甚至有可能会 丧命； 3、可能会陷入麻烦，遭别人 嘲笑。 注意：1，对所给要点，不要简单翻译，要有适当发挥；2，词数120左右
2、，开头已经写好，不计入总数；3，参考词汇： 美德 virtue At present, in our society, there is a heated discussion on whether we should help people in need. 书面表达如何写？ 五个步骤： 1、审题（文字信息，图画信息） 题材 人称 时态 要点 2、以词及点：用一两个单词或短语写出 每句话的细节要点。 3、连词成句。 4、连句成文（借助过渡词）。 5、检查修改，规范抄写。表达赞同的观点： 1, Some people think that. 2, Some of people hold the
3、 view that. 3, Some are in favor of the idea that. 4, Some of them hold the opinion that 5, People who are for the idea think that. 6, Some people believe that 7, Many people agree that. 8, Other people agree to .表达反对的观点： 1, However, some of them hold a different view. 2, Some of them hold opposite
4、opinions. 3, Others argue that 4, However, some are against the idea. 5, However, some people dont think so. 6, Other people think differently. They hold the view that.表达个人观点：1, In my opinion/eyes, .2, In my point of view, .3, Personally , . 4, As far as I am concerned, .5, In my opinion, everything
5、 has its advantages and disadvantages.6, In my opinion, everything has its strengths and weakness.7, Each coin has two sides. Personally speaking,.过渡性词汇： and, besides, first (firstly), second (secondly), then, finally, as well as， besides ,also, in addition, moreover， meanwhile, at the same time, wh
6、ats worse , for one thing, for another, whats more . . .key words:virtue lifeencouragesocietyno need/ not necessary/unnecessaryget hurtfall into troublelaugh at1、As a result, the plan was a failure.The plan turned out to be a failure.2、She cant correctly pronounce the word. She has trouble in pronou
7、ncing the word.3、People suggest that the conference be put off.It is suggested that the conference be put off.Which one should be better?(对比）4、Li Ming and I went to Beijing Zoo. There were many people in the zoo. Most of them were children. In the zoo, we saw elephants. We saw bears. We saw lions. A
8、t 12 oclock, we went back home. We had a wonderful day today. We felt tired. We felt happy.Li Ming and I went to Beijing Zoo. There were many people in the zoo, most of whom were children. In the zoo, we saw many kinds of animals, such as elephants, bears and lions. At 12 oclock, we went back home.
9、What a wonderful day we had today. Although we were tired，we felt very happy.At present, in our society, there is a heated discussion on whether we should help people in need. Different people have different ideas.Some think that helping people in need is one of the traditional virtues of the Chines
10、e people, which should be encouraged among young men. Besides, sometimes when we help others, we can save their lives. As we all know, nothing is more important than life. The more kind men, the more beautiful our society.However, other people hold different opinions about this. They think that ther
11、e is no need to help others because the people who are in trouble are not their relatives or friends. Whats worse, it is very likely that they may get hurt or lose their lives. Meanwhile, this action may make them fall into trouble and they can be laughed at.In my point of view, no mater who and where we are, we should help each other. Because it is our duty.1、注意选词 2、多用短句，慎用长句3、巧用过渡词4、注意使用“变通表达法”5、熟练运用书写技巧 小 结In the Information Age, men need more care and love, but not only money.Thank you for your listening.
