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2、I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yesterday. The salesgirl treated me coldly. She didnt admit the coat was sold in her shop. She said that I made it dirty. She gave various excuses to refuse my request. I got angry.I quarreled with her. The manager turned up. He asked what was the matte
3、r. He knew all about this, he apologized to me and criticized（批评）the salesgirl. They changed another coat for me. I said goodbye to them and took it home happily.HoweverAt the beginning,In a wordso thatJust then/Just at that momentAfterAt last (In the end ),SoAnd thenMay 25, Sunday CloudyThis mornin
4、g I went to the shop to change the coat I bought yesterday. _ ，the salesgirl treated me coldly. _，she didnt admit the coat was sold in her shop. _，She said that I made it dirty. _，She gave various excuses to refuse my request. _I quarreled with her. _, the manager turned up. He asked what was the ma
5、tter. _he knew all about this, he apologized to me and criticized (批评) the salesgirl. They changed another coat for me. I said goodbye to them and took it home happily.However At the beginning And then In a word I got so angry thatAs soon as/ The momentJust at that moment1） 表列举：for example、such as 、
6、namely，etc 2) 表补充：besides、in addition、moreover，whats more ,etc 3) 表对比：in spite of，on the contrary, despite , etc 4) 表原因： because of、thanks to、due to、 owing to，as a result of ,etc 5) 表结果： therefore、thus、as a result、so，etc 6) 表结论：on the whole 、in a word、in brief、to sum up，generally speaking, etc 7) 表转
7、折：however、nevertheless、yet，etc Different students assume different attitudes towards voluntary work according to the survey.We are glad to see that 70% of the students approve of doing voluntary work. In their opinion, making a contribution to society and lending a helping hand to others is a worthw
8、hile job. At the same time, it brings a lot of personal benefits. They can gain valuable experience and skills for future career. Whats more, voluntary work opens up vast quantities of opportunities for them to build up confidence, raise self awareness, and improve good communication skills and lead
9、ership.However, 25 of the students disapprove of doing voluntary work. They consider that working without payment is a waste of time.5% of the students choose to be neutral. In other words , they dont care about it at all.In my opinion, wed better take the chance to participate in voluntary work, no
10、 matter how small it is.Different students assume different attitudes towards voluntary work according to the survey.We are glad to see that 70% of the students approve of doing voluntary work. In their opinion, making a contribution to society and lending a helping hand to others is a worthwhile jo
11、b. At the same time, it brings a lot of personal benefits. They can gain valuable experience and skills for future career. Whats more, voluntary work opens up vast quantities of opportunities for them to build confidence, raise self awareness, and improve good communication skills and leadership.How
12、ever, 25 of the students disapprove of doing voluntary work. They consider that working without payment is a waste of time.5% of the students choose to be neutral. In other words , they dont care about it at all.In my opinion, wed better take the chance to participate in voluntary work, no matter ho
13、w small it is.The survey shows the opinions of high school students on voluntary work.70% of the students are in favor of voluntary work. By doing the work , we can make contributions to the society. And there is much point in helping others. It can bring us lots of personal benefits. We can also ga
14、in precious skills and experience which we can make use of in the future. Whats more, taking part in voluntary work is a way to open up opportunities. Furthermore, it helps to build up our confidence and raise self-consciousness. Our ability of communication and leadership will also be developed by
15、doing voluntary work.However,25% of the students dont approve of voluntary work. They consider voluntary work as a waste of time because they work without payment.The rest of the students dont have a clear attitude towards voluntary work.In my opinion, as we are members of the society, all of us should spare no effort to make it better and better.The survey shows the opinions of high school students on voluntary work.70% of the students are in favor of voluntary work. By doing the work , we can make contributions to the society
