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1、TEM 4 Write on ANSWER SHEET TWO a note of about 50-60 words based on the following situation： You have got to know that your classmate, Michael, is organizing a weekend excursion for the class. And you are thinking of joining the trip. Write him a note expressing your interest in the excursion and a
2、sking for information on two details related to the excursion. Marks will be awarded for content, organization, grammar and appropriateness.Note- writing 1格式（2分 ) 其中日期与称呼共1分; 结尾为1分，（不论大小 错误都扣1分）。 正确日期（Date）：位置在右上角或左上角， 如：April 23rd,2006; April 17th, 2010; April 17, 2010; 23/4/2006; 4/23/2006; Apr.23
3、; etc. 正确称呼（Heading）：位置在日期下一行左侧 ，如：Dear Michael, (:)/Michael,(:) 正确结尾（Ending）：如：Yours sincerely,/Sincerely yours,/Truly yours, / Yours, etc. (若在一行，名字没写或人名等扣1分) 格式需前后一致，如全左或全右，若不符 合，则扣1分。 凡不符合上述正确格式或要求均扣1分。 内容（3分）：Organizing + interest + two details (少一点扣一分，最多扣3分，two details需要有所展开，若只是提到when and where
4、 扣一分) 3语言（4分）：严重错误1分，一个句子或同 类错误扣1分，拼写等小错误两个扣一分，最多 扣4分。 4语言得体性（1分）：总分在8分及以上可考 虑加此分。 评分总体要求：1）语言没有错误，格式对，内容完整，语言得体，字数符合要求 （ 50， 80）；2）便条总字数（包括三部分格式）要求在5060字，不到50或多于80（9行或9行以上）扣1分；3）该部分总分为10分，6分为及格线 Dear Michael, Do you remember me? I am Mary. I heard a trip which I want to join it very much. I am So i
5、nterested in it. And you have joined it too. So would you help me to join the trip? I am really want to join it. Thank you ! yours turly _ Mary_ score 3 format 2 language 3 content-2 April 23rd, 2006 Dear Michael, Ive heard from that you are organizing a weekend excursion for the class. I m interest
6、ed in it and want to join the trip. Could you tell me where shall we go and how much should I pay for this excursion. I hope that you can give me an answer before this Thursday. Thanks a lot. Sincerely yours, Franny 3. score 7 format 1 language-1 content 0 Apr.23,2006 Dear Michael, Ive got to know t
7、hat you are organizing a weekend excursion for the class. Im interested in it, and want to take part in the trip. I want to know how much the excursion will cost and what I should do to prepare for it. If you can give me such information, Ill be very appreciative. My phone number is 1343324839. Im l
8、ooking forward to your reply. Thanks. yours, score 9 format 1 language-0 content 0妙语锦句Make an appointment: Id like to see you if you have time. How about coming to ? What do you say if we talk about it at ? I wonder if it would be possible for us to meet at Could I see you sometime next week, as Id
9、like to Id like to make an appointment to see you . Would it possible for us to talk to in person about that? When is it convenient for you? What time would be convenient for you?Make an apology: I must apologize for I do apologize for I am very/really/extremely/awefully/terribly sorry about I can a
10、ssure you that we will Invitation: I am pleased to invite you to I was wondering if you could come I would like to invite you to I would be very happy if you could come Make a request I am sorry to trouble you, but nobody would come into my mind to help me except you. I would like to seek help from
11、you. I would greatly appreciate it if you could help me. Express thanks Many thanks for your Please accept my sincere appreciation/thanks for I am truly grateful to you for Congratulations Congratulations on your success/achievements! Im so glad to hear of your winning the prize in the contest. Please accept my heartiest congratulation on your graduation from I want to congratulate you with all my heart. Please allow me to congratulate you on Please allow me to extend my hearty congratulations to you. Sympathy Our deepest sympathy is with you. We wish to expre
