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1、评析高三第三次月考基础写作 高明二中 黄晓红学习目的:1. 学会使用在作文写作中关 于介绍地方的一些有用的短 语(6个短语）。 2. 学会可以尽量使用非谓语 动词过去分词来把句子变 成5句话作文。高三第三次月考（11月23日）作文：第一 节 基础写作 假设你是一名导游，你将带领一个外国旅游团游览 广东省。请用英语写一份导游词，简介广东。 写作内容 1广东省位于位于中国大陆东南部，南临南海，海岸 线总长长3368公里，岛屿众多； 2广东省历史悠久历史悠久，简称粤； 3广东素有有“水果王国”之称之称， 香蕉、甘蔗、荔枝 、菠萝是其中的四大名果； 4广东是华南工业发达之省，水陆交通便利，海 运发达；
2、 5其中，经济特区有深圳、珠海、汕头等； 6广东省有有“食在广东”的美称美称。1广东省位于中国大陆东南部，南临南 海，海岸线总长3368公里，岛屿众多； 1. Guangdong Province is located by is located by the South Sea in the southeast part of mainland China. It has quite a few islands off its coastline, which has a has a total length oftotal length of 3,368 kilometres.1. Gua
3、ngdong Province is located by the South Sea in the southeast part of mainland China. It has quite a few islands off its coastline, which has a total length of 3,368 kilometres.（用非谓语动词过去分词，改 成一个句子）Located byLocated by the South Sea in the southeast part of mainland China, Guangdong province has quite
4、 a few islands off its coastline, which which has a total length ofhas a total length of 3,368 kilometres. 2广东省历史悠久历史悠久，简称粤。 6广东省有有“食在广东”的美称美称。2. Guangdong Province has a long has a long historyhistory. . It is called Yue for short.6Guangdong Province is is known forknown for the saying, “Dont hesit
5、ate(犹豫) to have meals here.”2. Guangdong Province has a long history. It is also called Yue for short. 6Guangdong Province is known for the saying, “Dont hesitate to have meals here.” （用非谓语动词过去分词，改成一个句子）Guangdong Province, also calledcalled Yue for short, has a long historyhas a long history and is
6、known foris known for the saying, “Dont hesitate to have meals here.” 3广东素有有“水果王国”之称之称， 香蕉、甘蔗 、荔枝、菠萝是其中的四大名果； 3. Guangdong Province is known asknown as a fruit king. Guangdong Province is is famous forfamous for its highquality bananas, sugar cane, lychees and pineapples. （用非谓语动词过去分词，改成一个句子 ） Known
7、asKnown as a fruit king, Guangdong Province is is famous forfamous for its highquality bananas, sugar cane, lychees and pineapples. 4广东是华南工业发达之省，水陆交通便利 ，海运发达；4. It is also one of the most developed industrial provinces in South China, withwith convenient transportation both on land and water.5其中，经济特
8、区有深圳、珠海、汕头 等；5. It hasIt has several special economic zones such as Shenzhen, Zhuhai, Shantou and so on.Guangdong Province, also called Yue for short, has a long history and is known for the saying, “Dont hesitate to have meals here.” Located by the South Sea in the southeast part of mainland China,
9、 it has quite a few islands off its coastline, which has a total length of 3,368 kilometres. Known as a fruit king, Guangdong Province is famous for its highquality bananas, sugar cane, lychees and pineapples. It is also one of the most developed industrial provinces in South China, with convenient
10、transportation both on land and water. It has several special economic zones such as Shenzhen, Zhuhai, Shantou and so on.总结： 1. 作文中关于介绍地方的一些有用的短语： （尽量回想，并默写下来） 1.be located by/in/at=lie in/on(1.be located by/in/at=lie in/on(位于位于/ /坐落于坐落于) )；2.has a total length of2.has a total length of（ 总共有总共有-长）；长
11、）；3.cover/has an 3.cover/has an area ofarea of（有（有- -面积）面积）;4. has/with a ;4. has/with a long historylong history；5. 5. be known for/as be known for/as； 6. 6.has a population of(has a population of(有有-人口人口) )2. 可以尽量用非谓语动词把句子变成5句话 。假设你是一名高三的学生，你将带领一个外 国旅游团游览广东省佛山市高明区。请用英 语写一份导游词，简介高明。 写作内容 1广东省佛山市高明区
12、位于位于佛山市的西部， 水陆交通便利，海运发达水陆交通便利，海运发达. .2广东省佛山市历史悠久历史悠久，广东省素有有“食 在广东”的美称的美称。因此我们这里也有许多著名 的当地美食；如濑粉。 3中文被称为被称为濑粉；它是如此的美味，一经 尝试后你就永远也不会忘记它的味道。 4濑粉是一种特别的食物，它已经吸引了来 自世界各地的人们。 5欢迎各地的旅游者到高明来玩。开头：I am a senior 3 student whothat is from Gaoming senior high school. Welcome to Guangdong Province. Im Ivy. And Im
13、more than glad to be your guide.1广东省佛山市高明区位于位于佛山 市的西部，水陆交通便利，海运 发达.（用非谓语动词过去分词 ）Gaoming town is located inis located in the west of Foshan city . Gaoming town has convenient transportation both on land and water. 高明区在哪儿Located inLocated in the west of Foshan city , Gaoming town has convenient transp
14、ortation both on land and water.Whats more, Foshan has a long has a long historyhistory and Guangdong Province is is known forknown for the saying, “Dont hesitate to have meals here.” So there are also a quantity of local famous food, such as Laifen. 2广东省佛山市历史悠久，广东省 素有有“食在广东”的美称的美称。因此我们这 里也有许多著名的当地美
15、食；如濑粉 。3中文被称为被称为濑粉；它是如此的 美味，一经尝试后你就永远也不 会忘记它的味道。（用非谓语动 词过去分词）Laifen ,whichthat is called in Chinese, is so delicious that you will never forget its flavor after you have tasted it.Laifen , calledcalled in Chinese, is soso delicious thatthat you will never forget its flavor after you have tasted it.
16、4濑粉是一种特别的食物，它已经 吸引来自世界各地的人们。（用定语 从句）Laifen is a speciality here, whosewhose flavor has attracted thousands of people from all over the world. Laifen is a speciality here, whose flavor has attracted thousands of people from all over the world. 5欢迎各地的旅游者到高明 来玩。(创新设计P60写作练 笔第5句)Tourists from all over the world are welcome
