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1、网络教育大学英语辅导讲座写作部分主主 讲：讲： 张博明张博明北京交通大学远程与继续教育学院北京交通大学远程与继续教育学院_ _教学服务中心教学服务中心20082008年年6 6月月2424日日英语写作的策略英语写作的策略1 12 23 34 4英语写作归类英语写作归类英语写作技巧及如何评分英语写作技巧及如何评分英语写作范例英语写作范例主要内容主要内容写作策略A. 审好标题，仔细推敲提纲思路，确定提纲所隐 含的文章主题，不要遗漏甚至违背提纲规范的文 章要求。 B. 充分利用提纲信息写好每段的主题句，主题句 应紧扣主题。 C. 根据标题、提纲和主题句选择与其关系最密切 、最具说服力且最容易表达的
2、细节。例子等， 围绕主题句进行扩展。写作归类 1.日常活动、主要工作、社交生活 2.童年的梦想、目前的情况、对未来的希望 3.事件发生的时间和地点、人物、事件的经 过 4.自主学习与远程教育、自主学习与合作学习、 你自己的学习情况 5.有一种观点认为：城市生活比乡村生活好、你 对这种观点的看法、你的结论 写作归类 6.保持身体健康的重要性、方法、意义 7.最喜欢的交通方式、理由、结论 8.你家的位置、房间的功能、表达对家具条件的 态度 9.喜欢的电视节目、理由、结论 10.理想的工作是什么、理由、如何实现理想 作文应试九大技巧 如何谴词词汇是语言的最小单位，准确恰当的词汇使 用是写好一篇英语文
3、章的关键。 如何造句句子是文章思想表达的基本单位，写好句子 是写作的基本功，必须多加练习。 如何写段落段落是文章的组成要件，它本身又是一组围 绕并发展段落主题的意义密切关联的句子所组成 的整体。一个段落表达一个完整的主题。 如何谋篇布局所谓三段十二句作文法是指一篇作文一般由 三段共十二句话组成，即开头段（2-3句）、中 间段（6-8句）和结尾段（2-3句）。 如何审题审题是写好作文至关重要的第一步，必须慎 重对待。 如何构思在通过审题能清题目要求之后，需要构思的 过程来对如何按照要求形成文章做一个通盘的考 虑。 如何写提纲写提纲的时间可控制在5分钟左右 检查修改完成正文写作后，若有时间，应对文
4、章进行 仔细检查与修改。 时间分配可根据个人情况而定评分原则1.考试作文题采用总体评分方法。阅卷人员就总的 印象给出奖励分，而不是按语言点的错误数目扣 分。 2.从内容和语言两个方面对作文进行综合评判。内 容和语言是一个统一体。作文应表达题目所规定 的内容，而内容要通过语言来表达。要考虑作文 是否切题，是否充分表达思想，也要考虑是否用 英语清楚而适切地表达思想，也就是要考虑语言 上的错误是否造成理解上的障碍。评分标准13-15切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好， 基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 10-12-切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，但有少量语言 错误。 7-9基本切题。有些地方表达
5、思想不够清楚，文字勉强 连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 4-6基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的 严重语言错误。 1-3条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子 均有错误，且多数为严重错误。My FamilyThere are five people in my family. Father ,mother ,brother ,sister and I . My fater is a worker, he worked very hard. My mother is 60 years old. She is a teacher in 113 middle schoo
6、l. My brother is football player. He often plays the match with his team in Beijing. My sister is a student. She study very well. She always help her classmate to study English. I worked in bank of China. I love this job .I belive I can do better in very day. My family is a lovely family. I love eve
7、ry one in my Family.(13-15)写作范例My Ideal JobPeople have different ideal jobs. Some want to be doctors, some want to be teachers, and some want to be engineers.My ideal job is teaching. Firstly, I like children very much. I would like to sing, to dance, and to play with them. Secondly, a teacher has t
8、wo vacations each year. I can enjoy myself during the summer and winter holidays. Finally, I want to teach the students all that I know and help them to develop their potential so that they can work better for our country in the future.In order to be a good teacher, I will study hard not only in cla
9、ss, but also in daily life. I will train my patience, improve my handwriting, and enlarge my knowledgeIn a word, I will study harder than ever to prepare for my future teaching job.How to Keep HealthyNowadays more and more people are concerned about their health, but how to keep healthy?First, it is
10、 necessary to take some exercise every day. Research shows that getting plenty of exercise makes the heart beat faster and the lungs work harder. Second, eat more fruits, vegetables and less meat. Third, getting rid of bad habits like smoking and drinking is also an important way to keep healthy. Sm
11、oking and alcohol drinking injure ones health a great deal, and therefore should be given up.How to Keep FitIt is obvious that we should keep fit. On one hand, good health enables you to work more attentively and enjoy your life. On the other hand, poor health will deprive you of the right to have a
12、 good time and you may lose many chances to enjoy yourself.There are many remarkable ways to keep your health. First of all, we should exercise everyday. We can get up a little earlier in the morning to have a jog in the garden. We can also have a walk after supper. They are very helpful to our heal
13、th. Whats more, we have to give up bad habits that are harmful to our health, such as smoking. Thirdly, we have to go on a diet sometimes or to have meals more regularly.Personally, I think health is of great importance to us. So we will develop good habits to keep ourselveshealthy.My Plan for the S
14、pring FestivalSpring Festival is the most important festival for Chinese people. Many people will prepare many things for the Spring Festival. Now this is my plan for the Spring Festival.First, I will visit my friends and my relatives. Second, I will make a big snow man with my daughter / son and my
15、 wife / husband / friend. Third, I will stay with my parents, because I have no more time to stay with them when I am at work. This is my plan for the spring festival. I hope all of you have a good time in the Spring Festival.My Travel Plan选择一个你想旅游的地点，并安排旅行计划。你应包括下列内容： 1.说明你想旅游的地点； 2.说明你为什么选择这个地点； 3
16、.描述你的旅行计划。Dear Amy,I plan to make a journey to Jiu Zhaigou in Sichuan province. Its a beautiful place with fresh air, beautiful natural scenery like waterfall, lake and high mountains. Because many films and TV series have been made there, it is very famous. Whats more, I am very busy and exhausted this year, so I want to go for a relaxation. I plan to stay there for a week and tr
